Djmac1031
Consumate BS Artist
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Gosh. There's been a whole bunch of chatter since I started this post. You guys are a hard act to keep up with! Anyway:
Speak for yourself.
I get a kick out of describing FCs' apparel proximate to sexy scenes, not necessarily dwelling on fine details but key features as setups for the scene. Examples:
In many cases these various setups also hopefully impart a bit of the person's appearance and/or personality - in order: self-aware/sensuous, cute/adorable, cute/teasing, serious/passionate, playful peer to the MC, and last... well... duh.
- "Black leather zipper-slit pencil miniskirt with a filmy blouse". Teasing exhibitionism - prelude to upzipping skirt to near waistline to show side cheek, and sheer blouse more than hinting at nipple, unbuttoned scandalously low to display lack of tan line;
- "Shirred-top babydoll dress". Anticipates MC's surprise removal of same;
- "Short flouncy cotton dress". The better for flashing due to sudden wind gusts;
- "Flattering princess-line sheath". Emphasizing youthful figure shortly before removal thereof;
- "Jeans and a tee". Usually a setup for teasing physical play, characterizing the FC as "boyish"; and
- "String-tie bikini". Zero to nude in milliseconds.
I get exactly what you're saying.
And agree 100%.
But god, I still hate WRITING outfits.
I think it stems from the first time I really had to.
I wrote a scene in my series The Jenna Arrangement where Jenna and her best friend Trish go clothes shopping and model various outfits for the MMC Tom.
And suddenly I was faced with the task of actually having to describe not just one article of woman's clothing in great detail, but several.
Picking outfits was easy; quick internet search on dresses etc.
DESCRIBING them was the challenge.
I cheated by using a lot of words in the descriptions for the dresses I looked up; online stores are great for that.
Still, it's not the easiest thing for me. And I've also sometimes found myself over compensating by going into too much detail.
It's a balancing act for sure.