Your Best Title Ever

[DeepAsleep]

The last time I had sex was with a copy of Strunk & White's "Elements of Style."

Well. I suppose that counts as not letting your participle dangle.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

I think I just entered the Twilight Zone

 

[XXplorher]

'Internal Bleeding' of course.


Once upon a time I kept everything to myself. Kept it all stuffed down inside. I'm a tall dude, so I got plenty room down in there. Spent my time satisfying others instead of myself. Shoveled away all my pain. Laughed at stuff instead.

At one point my body could not take it anymore and it all started backing up in my throat. Hemmoraging.

I decided to pay attention to that and I've never looked back.


Here's a link to the immediate results (feel free to hate):

http://www.last.fm/music/Schleprawk




.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

'Internal Bleeding' of course.


Once upon a time I kept everything to myself. Kept it all stuffed down inside. I'm a tall dude, so I got plenty room down in there. Spent my time satisfying others instead of myself. Shoveled away all my pain. Laughed at stuff instead.

At one point my body could not take it anymore and it all started backing up in my throat. Hemmoraging.

I decided to pay attention to that and I've never looked back.


Here's a link to the immediate results (feel free to hate):

http://www.last.fm/music/Schleprawk




.

Not hating at all if that's your expression it's a good one and I hope it helped

 

[Epmd607]

'Internal Bleeding' of course.


Once upon a time I kept everything to myself. Kept it all stuffed down inside. I'm a tall dude, so I got plenty room down in there. Spent my time satisfying others instead of myself. Shoveled away all my pain. Laughed at stuff instead.

At one point my body could not take it anymore and it all started backing up in my throat. Hemmoraging.

I decided to pay attention to that and I've never looked back.


Here's a link to the immediate results (feel free to hate):

http://www.last.fm/music/Schleprawk




.

Last time you were here you were telling us all to fuk off like we were guns n roses n you were nirvana. Speaking of nirvana, your songs sound pretty mid-90s grunge, but more STP than something classic like PearlJ and Nirvana. Oh well.

 

[CharleyH]

Bathyl has always been a fave word of mine. I wrote a story for Lauren (not on lit anymore), but it was called 'Bathyl'. Lauren wrote a beautiful poem in response and the title is Bathyl ll:

This time I forgot my name, I forgot everything.
I let myself be taken by a wind that shook
warmth off my heart and veins off the leaves
of the trees, bent outside.

I'm not afraid.

The truth is I haven't yet searched
the memory, or even the hidden figures in the sky
nor the segments, which divide on my map
the countries, gods, slaves, navigators.

Shapes lose meaning in a thunderstorm.

You listen to time.

It's the imponderable logic of sounds came from heaven,
losing space on the way and making home in
the most remote fountains of self.

This time all was too much. I lost Venice,
didn't lose much. I lost Byzantium, lost a bit more.
But the blue, the colour, the mystery, the ocean, the ocean, the love, laying

by the poem of your seashore...

Now the undercurrent of water, of white lava, is a fountain of sound.

Hisses and whistles. Hurts.

The summer.

The symmetry.

This time I forgot your name
and lost everything.

 

[butters]

monstrous things

altitude sickness

the shape of the thing

 

[jomar]

Not sure its my favorite but I have always liked:

I still miss my man... but my aim is getting better

And the followup, "How can I miss you if you wont' go away?"

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Or 'I'm so miserable without you it's almost like you were still here'

 

[XXplorher]

UnderYour Spell
Not hating at all if that's your expression it's a good one and I hope it helped

It did. Very much. Everyone should try it!


EPM
Last time you were here you were telling us all to fuk off like we were guns n roses n you were nirvana. Speaking of nirvana, your songs sound pretty mid-90s grunge, but more STP than something classic like PearlJ and Nirvana. Oh well.

I was qualifying you as Guns n’ Roses and myself as Nirvana? I fail to understand any reason for that separation. I’m not about to qualify the difference.

Pretty much anything I say on here is crap cuz I only visit when I’m drunk enough to fail my rational thinking. Yet, it’s often entertaining. And I occasionally DO say shit that’s accurate.

You’re sure to hear my general complaint of incompetent Americans these days. And my old self getting all gnarly on ‘the kids these days’. You should keep me straight on that. Don’t let me get away w/it. Show me I’m wrong.



Thanks for listening to my stuff, dude.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Which foot do you hop on?
Had the title then had to write round it whch is unusual for me

 

[arielsgoddess]

Most unusual title of poems given to me

I used to write porn for $20/page when I was in high school. Towards the end of that phase of my life, this one guy 'thanked' me for services by giving me a poem he wrote that was titled "The Labia of Your Consciousness"--which was actually very deep (although I suspect a hint of psychedelic usage when written) although certainly very dirty--one of the most unusual but really good poems ever given to me. Wish I still had a copy!

 

[UnderYourSpell]

I used to write porn for $20/page when I was in high school. Towards the end of that phase of my life, this one guy 'thanked' me for services by giving me a poem he wrote that was titled "The Labia of Your Consciousness"--which was actually very deep (although I suspect a hint of psychedelic usage when written) although certainly very dirty--one of the most unusual but really good poems ever given to me. Wish I still had a copy!

A sort of lip service?

 

[arielsgoddess]

No Lip Service

In reply to UnderYourSpell and several other comments and emails I received, no I wasnt bragging--just explaining why someone gave me a pornagraphic poem in highschool. I dont write for money ever since one of my former clients became a close friend, then did something to end the friendship. Namely, he gave me a viewing of his homemade movies which featured him with chix acting-out the material I had written for him, and making it clear he was fantasizing ME in all of the roles--some of which were extreme. It freaked me out enough to quit doing or sharing with anyone for a longtime. Although everyone where I grew-up knew me as the wild-girl protector of my semifamous stripper-mudwrestling sister, in private my guys new that I was a goodgirl who knew how to use her mind. I kindof thought that this was a site for people like me and did not expect that from day one--when I made it obvious that I was a little nervous to share do to past experiences--that I would be subject to negative attacks for doing so. Thank you to those of you that have sent me friendly and supportive emails--I posted in this one originally to show those of you that were sending me some explicit messages that I have no hangups & a wide sense of humor.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

In reply to UnderYourSpell and several other comments and emails I received, no I wasnt bragging--just explaining why someone gave me a pornagraphic poem in highschool. I dont write for money ever since one of my former clients became a close friend, then did something to end the friendship. Namely, he gave me a viewing of his homemade movies which featured him with chix acting-out the material I had written for him, and making it clear he was fantasizing ME in all of the roles--some of which were extreme. It freaked me out enough to quit doing or sharing with anyone for a longtime. Although everyone where I grew-up knew me as the wild-girl protector of my semifamous stripper-mudwrestling sister, in private my guys new that I was a goodgirl who knew how to use her mind. I kindof thought that this was a site for people like me and did not expect that from day one--when I made it obvious that I was a little nervous to share do to past experiences--that I would be subject to negative attacks for doing so. Thank you to those of you that have sent me friendly and supportive emails--I posted in this one originally to show those of you that were sending me some explicit messages that I have no hangups & a wide sense of humor.

It was a joke ffs a pun on labia and lip and no other intention was there I thought you would see the joke and I apologise for my sense of humour not being yours

 

[UnderYourSpell]

You don't know me so you had no way of knowing about my jokes I've been here awhile and I don't go out of my way to make sarky remarks to newbies or anyone so I apologise again I am sorry my joke offended you I certainly had no intention of doing so ......... can we start again?

 

[EroticOrogeny]

In reply to UnderYourSpell and several other comments and emails I received, no I wasnt bragging--just explaining why someone gave me a pornagraphic poem in highschool. I dont write for money ever since one of my former clients became a close friend, then did something to end the friendship. Namely, he gave me a viewing of his homemade movies which featured him with chix acting-out the material I had written for him, and making it clear he was fantasizing ME in all of the roles--some of which were extreme. It freaked me out enough to quit doing or sharing with anyone for a longtime. Although everyone where I grew-up knew me as the wild-girl protector of my semifamous stripper-mudwrestling sister, in private my guys new that I was a goodgirl who knew how to use her mind. I kindof thought that this was a site for people like me and did not expect that from day one--when I made it obvious that I was a little nervous to share do to past experiences--that I would be subject to negative attacks for doing so. Thank you to those of you that have sent me friendly and supportive emails--I posted in this one originally to show those of you that were sending me some explicit messages that I have no hangups & a wide sense of humor.

I can't comment on the emails or PM you received, but you got some nice encouragement on your first thread. The thread took it own turn after that, but started out positive towards you. And, hopefully UnderYourSpell has adequately apologized and explained her response.