IARainman
Literotica Guru
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I hear you. I write as it comes from my head (and that’s probably really obvious) sometimes it can be raw and fresh, sometimes I’m sure it’s confusing to anyone other than me. This exercise, needing to give some thought to conservation of words and efficiency is a good one, and fun for both the author and reader along the way.I assume because that is one of the aspects of the fantasy that interests the author, which was what I was getting at when I said your fantasy has to resonate with the reader to make a connection.
For instance, you are not going to like Ghosts on CBS if you don't like the premise. But a particular episode might interest you even though by nature it includes a premise you are not wild about. (The one where Hetty and Trevor hook up. And yes, I am using myself as an example. I am not a fan of ghosts as characters. But I got hooked by a couple of well-written episodes.)
Me too. It can be pretty intimidating to give feedback when there are so many amazing writers on here. I feel like a fraud offering suggestions to them.