westcountryken
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I'm short on time and/or skills to write this up - but it seems to me a very powerful scene.
After the party, everyone beds down on the floor in sleeping bags, and gradually the sounds fade away. Then, in the quiet, there is a sudden and suppressed giggle - then silence again. Then from a different part of the room, a sharp gasp, then some low noises. There are various other noises on and off from other directions, and then from one sleeping bag comes a rhythmic sound - it's obvious what is happening there, and as inhibitions fade the sounds grow louder. This is picked up by others - and the story continues from there.....
Let me know if you write this up!
Ken
After the party, everyone beds down on the floor in sleeping bags, and gradually the sounds fade away. Then, in the quiet, there is a sudden and suppressed giggle - then silence again. Then from a different part of the room, a sharp gasp, then some low noises. There are various other noises on and off from other directions, and then from one sleeping bag comes a rhythmic sound - it's obvious what is happening there, and as inhibitions fade the sounds grow louder. This is picked up by others - and the story continues from there.....
Let me know if you write this up!
Ken