Another silly idea (illustrated)

KristyLeigh

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Sorry folks, no explicit sex again, but you're welcome to use this outline and add whatever details you wish to it :):)

Long story short: two attractive young women take a job playing pool in their lingerie to pay mounting debts. Here's a pen and ink picture I drew to illustrate the scenario:


Short story long:

Following a rush of catastrophically bad luck, Sheena and her best friend Kylie find themselves stuck in a one-horse town with no money, no credit cards and no way to pay their bills. While their kindly old landlord is willing to accept an IOU, the girls decide to pay their own way and go looking for work in the main street. Stopping in at the Hotel Grande, they ask Old Pops Maclane for a job serving drinks.

Unfortunately, the aging barkeep is on the verge of bankruptcy and can't afford to hire any new staff, no matter how young and attractive they happen to be. He does, however, have an utterly brilliant idea on how they might generate some extra business together and split the profits down the middle.

Pointing out the disused pool table gathering dust in the corner, Pops outlines his plan: the girls will play eight-ball with the customers for twenty dollars a game. The catch is that every time their opponents sink a ball, the girls have to remove an article of clothing!

Although the girls are somewhat reluctant to accept the terms of the offer (being complete novices, they'll end up stripped down to their knickers [or less] by the end of every game), they eventually accept the deal due to their financial dire straights.

When the appointed night arrives, the girls find the hotel crammed with new clientel (news travels fast in the countryside), and are utterly horrified by the thought of showing their underwear off to a hundred total strangers. All the same, it's too late to back out now, and the girls soon find themselves walking round the table in their bras and panties - despite their desperate attempts to avoid the inevitable.

The Snooker Night is an overwhelming success, but after splitting the earnings with the Old Man Pops, they find they don't have quite enough to pay off their debts. As a matter of fact, Sheena calculates that they won't be out of the red for at least another two weeks. Kylie wails at the idea of enduring this forced striptease every evening for the next fortnight, but what other choice do they have?

* Here are a few extra plot points I thought up.

Being former "convent girls", Kylie and Sheena are stereotype shrinking violets. Desperate to protect their modesty, they wear as many clothes as possible while playing, hoping the game will finish before they get down to their bare knickers. Naturally, this strategy never works. As a matter of fact, they often wind up bare-bottom naked apart from their stiletto heels.

The girls attempt to "cheat" the customers by wearing their plainest cotton bras and white nylon granny pants. Both agree that their laciest underwear is too pretty to reveal to a room full of "uneducated farmboys".

The success of Snooker Night leads to a business boom in the main street. As word gets round about the "entertainment" at Hotel Grande, folk come flooding in from the surrounding areas, bringing increased trade and affluence. The district newspaper wants to do a story on the girls and their effect on the town's economy. In spite of their protests, Sheena and Kylie are required to do an impromptu photoshoot in their bras and panties. The worst part is, they have to pretend they're actually enjoying themselves.

Seizing on the opportunity for a little extra business, a local retailer offers to provide the girls with flimsy lace lingerie in return for free advertising. Pops accepts the deal on their behalf, and the girls find themselves stripping down to the tiniest of thongs, garter-belts and stockings - right in front of the "uneducated farmboys" they were trying to avoid.
 
Sorry folks, no explicit sex again, but you're welcome to use this outline and add whatever details you wish to it :):)

Long story short: two attractive young women take a job playing pool in their lingerie to pay mounting debts. Here's a pen and ink picture I drew to illustrate the scenario:

Instead of playing pool in lingerie, they play various games involving stripping, rented out at lodge meetings, gentleman's clubs, and bachelor parties (a twist on a Flintstones episode).
The brunette is pretty aggressive sexually, and will do the most teasing.
She plays strip pool holding back her pool skills.
She'll hustle the men who challenge her though.

The blonde is a bit bolder as a flirt, but she's still a little immature.
She'll play games like strip twister, pass the bottle (a drinking game to get you in the mood), 7/11 (a twist on "7 minutes in heaven", where you have 7 to 11 hours in the walk in closet), and show and feel (a truth or dare game without the truth).
This will be at Spring Break, various keg parties, and frat parties (also a disco as a Go-go dancer).

The story you outlined was good, but needs a little something to spice it up.
I hope I provided that.
 
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