Come and get it.

NASCARaddicted said:
I guess it always depends on how it happends.

What about: a brother is at a party. His sister is on the same party. They drink a lot and later they both walk home. Both are totally drunk. At home, the girl is undressing herself in the bathroom, when her brother comes in. In the past he never tought much about incest, but when he sees her hot nude body, he becomes horny. And due to the much alcohol, he doesn't care about the fact that she is his sister .... so they have sex.

The next morning, they wake up next to each other in the same bed ... when they realize what happened they start to think/talk about the future and their feelings. Should/could incest sex happen again in the future ?

I think your first idea was a lot more fun. I'm not sure but this seems to be a little to obvious, no surprise here.
 
its just a story let them have fun.... its interesting to read their ideas and what the think will make a good story
 
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perhaps you might wish to consider that some folks do not 'discover' the feelings suddenly. ' Smoldering desire' is legitimate. Then , all it takes is fuel for the fire.

I speak from experience different from yours. I never havedone incest, and no one in my immediate family turns me on, but there IS a cousin after whom my Lust in the Loft series is modelled. If she had boldly acted . as in the story, my shyness would have vanished.

And I do have stepdaughter not unlike the one in my Kissing the Bride stories...though NONE of that happened, except in my imagination.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I won't go into your story I think you are a creative writer and talented. I have read most of your library so I know what you speak of and congrats on the newest one I liked part two better then one for reality purposes. I know what it is like to have a teenage step daughter bouncing around the house half dressed and trying to prove her sexuality. But even that is different then then how a brother sister tend to look upon one another. and even you admit it was only in your imagination would that situation have ever really occured? Cousins are a different thing cause you do not live with them day in day out.
I am not saying horny boys do not lust after sisters tight buns and mothers whatever, but I am certainly not convinced by most stories at Lit that they come close to being real (as in most categories) but more so in the incest category.
I agree with Lori that a considered real story would need a much longer time span (Not longer story) to develop the situation as you describe 'Smoldering desire' lusting over time before anything happened? It is not a planned event but the reader needs to know some information as to how this came about that could make it more realistic.

I am not a good one to argue this topic because I will agree Boys, Men certainly in the heat of desire do not think or care who it is 90% of the time, as long as it fits the need. I am also not very knowledgeable on this topic other then what I have read or placed in my mind to see what I would do. My answers are just not erotic. But neither are most incest stories when presented as just another story labled to look like a incest story. I am not sure but I think a real erotic incest story might be rather boring with all the details that are needed to make it real.

Does that make any sense? I feel like I lost my self with all the double negatives let alone you.

Phildo arriere pensee either way.




handlebars69, if you would like to place some constructive criticism please do, but know as all can Black Tulip can say whatever she likes besides she started this thread, and I agree I like the other version better too. The whole game of spy and show is a wicked turn on in my book! Sister, brother, and friend is spinning a web as you read this.
 
A7inchPhildo said:

handlebars69, if you would like to place some constructive criticism please do, but know as all can Black Tulip can say whatever she likes besides she started this thread, and I agree I like the other version better too. The whole game of spy and show is a wicked turn on in my book! Sister, brother, and friend is spinning a web as you read this.


:kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

Thank you Phildo.

Seems to me hb69 didn't understand we were just discussing possibilities.

Never mind sweetheart, whatever makes you happy.:D
 
Black Tulip said:
:kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

Thank you Phildo.

Seems to me hb69 didn't understand we were just discussing possibilities.

La, la, la, Fa, la, lah, OOOoo, it came on the net. is so slow at times! I hope that is kind of what I said I was trying to be nice in my reply to both. I certainly do not need a handle bar crammed up my butt. So many posts people say I come off being angry, do I? Busy working on stories and Poems, to think about proper form in a post seems such a waste of time.

I almost feel guilty cause I am writeing a story right now for a person and I need to push through it in a few more days. It is an awsome story too. But at the same time I am very excited about this topic and can not stop thinking of the possibilities.

One scene I wish to write in after the basic theme of the story in underway. This is a basic idea and of course I will add plenty of description to it. [Eric to me is a quiet, nice behaved, but looks and is timid to say things when confronted (do you agree or not)]

The girls read the last entry in Eric's journal they are both a bit flushed so they quickly clear the screen and move into (need a sisters name out going, hot, bouncy) room. In side they talk like ducks excited and slightly embarrased, they know Eric will soon be home from soccer practice.

(need a friends name that says cute but needy) says, "Hey lets tease Eric and see what he writes?"

sister says, "Ok, remove your bra and put on this, 'handing her a light color tube top made of spandex,' then unbutton the the top button of your shorts pulling them up tight to part your whoha!"

"Whoha?"

"Yea, your crotch, you know so like it pushes out on either side of the seam."

Sisters friend, "Ok, but only if you do it too?"

"I'm not doing that he is my brother!"

"Come on, it will be fun besides he is most likely not even going to notice, 'Standing up to change shirts, removes her bra, ' Whats the big deal, 'moving over and looking through (sisters name) clothes pulls out a pair of black bike shorts,'Here put these on at least?"

Sister, " Ok, fine but I cant wear these panties I wll need a thong. These will just bunch up and look like I have adump in my shorts." The girls start laughing in a giddy manner.

Sister standing in her cotton underwear peering into the draw, "I can't find any of my thongs, I know I have like seven pairs where the hell do they go?"

Friend all changed over says, "Come on, I just heard the front door close!, ' moving to guard the door, 'just forget the thong and put them on!"

Slipping her panties down and over her feet (name, sis) pulls the tight fabric of the bike shorts up doing a little dance to get them on quickly.

(Friend name) moves over to help straiten out her t-shirt that was slightly tucked in pulls up on the waist line making the inner seam creep up into (name's) crotch by the elasticity of the material. Parting her vaginal lips in a display of openess and her clit poked ever so slightly out of the material making a slight bump.

Hearing her brothers voice calling, "Any one home?"

Sister yells back in a cracked voice, "Eric! Me and (friend) are, 'swallowing hard,' be right out!" her face turns red as she is ushered to the door. "I can't do this, I need to put something else on!" Being pushed she begins to walk on her own down the hall way to the kitchen.

Her mind is working overtime like a computer with thoughts as she turns the entry way she tries to be casual. Moving swiftly to the refrigerator she hides her self with the door pretending to want something. Looking down she is embarrased at just how visable her privates are exposed. Nonchalauntly she pulls at the fabric near her crotch to remove the vaccume like material in a futile attemt as it mearly crreeps back even tighter.

( Sis) says, "You want anything (friend name), 'looking at Eric staring back at her, 'You?" With another crack of embarrasement in her voice.

Friend and Eric reply at the same time, "No all set!, Jinx, double Jinx!" laughing as they sit at the table.

Eric says to (friend), "Hey isn't that (sisname),'stoping in mid sentence as his eyes notice (Sis name) walking to the table his eyes lock onto her crotch. When she walked the fabric pulled back at her vulva and tightened on the exposure of her clit. Once (Sis) seated the view was blocked, ' sh ir t?"

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Of course the story has more detail and completes the scene. This is what I was thinking a whole bunch of mini climax scenes, have not thought of an ending yet! Many details to work out.

Sugestive names with meanings are always a big help. other basic settings of how a sister might get convinced into being exposed or exposed by accidently on purpose would also be appreciated.
 
Just some thoughts floating in my mind:

The nice guy who is a bit shy, thinking and writing but not yet doing? Could this be his first? Or maybe no more than his first chance. Not actually doing?

Could the sister be a Bonnie or a Betty? Something with a B I think. Has the friend the hots for the brother? Let them talk about sex to get them worked up to the point of teasing?

Vicky as a name for the friend?

Girls take their time in dressing up. Discussing each others bodies is what they do if they are close enough to chance in each others company.

Make it the other way around? The sister dares all and the friend is a bit more reserved? Call bluff?

Could the sister get turned on instead of embarrassed? Even though it is just her brother?

Sugestive names with meanings are always a big help. other basic settings of how a sister might get convinced into being exposed or exposed by accidently on purpose would also be appreciated.

Hope these ideas are some help. I find this thinking along really fun.
 
Black Tulip said:
Just some thoughts floating in my mind:

The nice guy who is a bit shy, thinking and writing but not yet doing? Could this be his first? Or maybe no more than his first chance. Not actually doing?

Could the sister be a Bonnie or a Betty? Something with a B I think. Has the friend the hots for the brother? Let them talk about sex to get them worked up to the point of teasing?

Vicky as a name for the friend?

Girls take their time in dressing up. Discussing each others bodies is what they do if they are close enough to chance in each others company.

Make it the other way around? The sister dares all and the friend is a bit more reserved? Call bluff?

Could the sister get turned on instead of embarrassed? Even though it is just her brother?



Hope these ideas are some help. I find this thinking along really fun.

I love the thinking along part it twists the story in my mind so much that I do not even know the ending.

The nice guy who is a bit shy, thinking and writing but not yet doing? Could this be his first? Or maybe no more than his first chance. Not actually doing?
This was my exact thought entering puberty {(LOL) at 18} just a slow quiet not very aggressive except in his own personal thoughts and has the hots for anything especially his sisters friend, but is forced to notice her too! An age of a year or two younger then sister and friend.
Could the sister be a Bonnie or a Betty? Something with a B I think.
no not betty Bonnie not really.
Has the friend the hots for the brother? Let them talk about sex to get them worked up to the point of teasing?
This is where I was going most likely more.
Vicky as a name for the friend?
Vicky is nice But I was going more for Amanda like another quiet one in the crowd. who hangs around with "??sisters name??" because sis is so live and on the in crowd this makes "friend" want to be a bit more risky when she is with "Sis" to prove her worth and thus putting Sister in awkward predicuments with her brother.

I actually considered Vicki as a name for the sister and still might use it.
Girls take their time in dressing up. Discussing each others bodies is what they do if they are close enough to chance in each others company.
I am well aware of what girls do, (nevermind) that is why I mentioned that is a basic idea. I want the girls to do what girls do but not as a lesbian scene and that is a very definite addition, I was not going to share with the board unless it was mentioned need some reason for others to read it later. You are good been in my mind lately?
Make it the other way around? The sister dares all and the friend is a bit more reserved? Call bluff?
I am considering the sister makes some pretty daring bets too. I want the friend to be the one who is pushing this whole tease while the sister is the outgoing one the friend is the one with the tingle between her legs for the brother. See being shy she would not do the dare by herself but was the first one to bring it up. The sister being out going tells her what to do, knowing what to wear and what guys look at. But then has second thoughts about it when she realizes the reality of it is her brother she is about to tease. Not because she is not a tease she will have all the tease clothes and is no virgin, but that the guy checking her out is her younger brother. That is what she needs to think about when she is being naughty in this story. Does she really want her younger brother knowing what her private anatomy parts look like?
Could the sister get turned on instead of embarrassed? Even though it is just her brother?
That is a good catch I did not see it that way at first as I described above Part of her needs to be embarrased but I could really embarrass her by making her a little wet and having to deal with not only her brother getting turned on but also by the fact she has to come to grips she got turned on by teasing her brother no mater if she likes the idea or not.

More I think, I like Vicki as the sisters name ___--___ damn friend grow a good name"_____________"!



Friend, "Yea, I asked if I could borrow it. Do you like it?, 'Inhaling deeply she moves her arms back slightly, the small chest is pleasently visable and her erect nipples poke at the fabric like an erection begging to be played with.' I was thinking of getting my own tube top when Vicki said I should try this one on."

Eric left speachless, now hard could also not excuse himself, if he wanted.

Vicki with one hand under the table pulling at the fabric trying to remove it from her crevice realizes her shorts have become very wet. Vicki thinks and turns a little red as her fingers shake a little from fear. How was she going to leave surely it would be noticed.

She thinks, "It must have been the tight material rubbing me that made me so wet, could it have been from knowing my brother of all people might have looked at my display or raunchy behavior?,'thinking quickly to her self, 'I guess I will find out after school."

Vicki asks Eric in a calm voice, "Do you have practice after school on tuesdays?"

Eric trying to avoid looking at "friend" says, "uh, yeas we did I um, just not sunday this week. Why?" Shaking his head.

"Oh nothing just wondering, 'as she holds her crotch in a futile attemp to make it stop it just becomes more wet and warmer to the touch, in desperation to excape her situation Vicki says 'Me and friend would like to go to "blank" and was wondering if you wanted to come?" Regretting her just spoken words, but now commited because of an attemt to hide her emotions.

Eric says, "I would love that, I don't need to go to all the practices!" turning to friend and smiles like a boy in love.

Friend says, "Great were gona have fun! Vicki I think we need to talk don't you?"

Vicki, "Not right this minute" shaking her head with a cutesy cat like grin

friend gets up and walks out of kitchen talking loud down the hall, "Oh, Vicki come along I am waiting!"

Vicki stand up and for a brief second catches her brothers eyes looking at her labia wet and on display pushing out on the fabric like a hand squeezing a baloon. She knows what he just saw and when his eyes looked up all she could do is give a sheepish smile back as she wasting no more time exits the room.
 
Anybody home?

Haiya.

I like the idea of the sister giving advice about boys.

Can bro keep his hands above the table after the girls have left?
Probably get inspired to write another hot little item for the girls to read.

Do you really want to let them leave the house?
If it were my story I would keep it there. Let them circle around each other. Testing, sniffing what have you.

Every time the girls set brother up, they go a little further, driving him on so to speak.

I happily leave the names to other amazing minds. That is a bit of problem in another language. I tend to miss meanings from everyday use.

Are there more souls out there or are we dwindled to a twosome?

By the way, I'm getting a little curious about your writing Phildo. Care to enlighten me?
You strike me as a real dirty soul. :devil:
 
Are there more souls out there or are we dwindled to a twosome?

Twosome can be good, but threesome, or moresome is always more fun! They will return if the post continues, some have other things to consider more so then story writing.

Can bro keep his hands above the table after the girls have left?

He can do anything that is why I am here getting information!

Do you really want to let them leave the house?

Well they were not actually leaving the house if you know girls they were headed to the bedroom to regroup. And I thought it was imperative to keeping it a tease for now as that is what the story is based upon.

(The boy does not know his sister and friend (he finds attractive) are reading his perverted thoughts. Sister and friend are being deceptive to one another while working together (friend wants to push the envelop but is shy) (sister by nature is agressive but hesitant about lurking in on brothers thoughts) (friend wants to share her excitement about the tease) (sister does not want to share her excitement about her evident arousal even with friend) Brother is not stupid but is not thinking this is a set up or planed events because of his writings. (No direct ending is set as of this time)
Every time the girls set brother up, they go a little further, driving him on so to speak.

"Type" yes! but I want to include what the girls do after the situation as well cause girls are more catty then boys. and here it is a simple set the brother types out his reactions and in the story the girls will read it to the "reader" making it easy because there is very little first hand sighted knowledge to present from the boys perspective it is a story the girls read.


The girls can be the visual to the story for the most part when there is not a "tease" in progress.

I want the friend to push the sister into the picture and then make comments to force the sister into acknowleging the fact she was aroused by it too.

Here is what I was thinking working off the last "Tease"
"Oh nothing just wondering, 'as she holds her crotch in a futile attemp to make it stop it just becomes more wet and warmer to the touch, in desperation to excape her situation Vicki says 'Me and friend would like to go to "blank" and was wondering if you wanted to come?"

[adding in the girl conversation of what just happened as minor as it might seem gives a mini climax but not enough to finish the story and placement of them reading what the brother saw the next day] So then for the next scene of the girls getting ready to push a bit more could be

A few choices Amusement park, Beach, Boating, mall, "anything"... nothing more then a day event and nothing intentionally erotic. The girls will do that part could be just the three, or more could attend might spice things up ( a group of friends who are not involved intimately in the situation)(parents)(or even Vicki's bf making a few comments or blatent feels) admidst her and her friends "Game of torture by tease, but who is winning?"

Other thoughts are always welcome too!

Names brother Eric is good
sister Vicki works
sisters friend ? Amanda, Rachel, Kelly, Beth, Kayla?...
Sisters boy friend? Zack, Daren, Mike?...
 
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Black Tulip said:


Are there more souls out there or are we dwindled to a twosome?

By the way, I'm getting a little curious about your writing Phildo. Care to enlighten me?
You strike me as a real dirty soul. :devil:

Au`to`mor´phic
a. 1. Patterned after one's self.
The conception which any one frames of another's mind is more or less after the pattern of his own mind
Et tu brutae! :eek: :rose: :)
 
As I said, I leave the names to others, although I like Beth.

Boyfriend could be a big hunk, sweet, bit naive? Mind, not stupid!

About the outing: the brother is doing sports, isn't he? How about the girls come to training or practice or whatever. Sister's friend there as well?
Daring into the locker room or something? Gives nice possibilities I think.
Beach or Boating are good too. Gives the girls the chance to flaunt bodyparts without being to obvious.

I agree that the teasing should be a heavy part of the story.

Girls going somewhere to escape: definitely the mall. No sane brother would ever go along. :D

I like the thought of letting the girls be the lens to view the whole thing. And by all means let them be catty. :devil:

Never mind the end. That will come in good time. :D
 
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A7inchPhildo said:
Au`to`mor´phic
a. 1. Patterned after one's self.
The conception which any one frames of another's mind is more or less after the pattern of his own mind
Et tu brutae! :eek: :rose: :)

Do I have to read that as: look in the mirror?

Ah well, takes one to know one. ;)
 
Re: Re: Re: Anybody home?

Black Tulip said:
Do I have to read that as: look in the mirror?

Ah well, takes one to know one. ;)

From my perspective that is not a bad thing! If my thougts are correct this topic excites you, and seeing how your mind is wondering down the same path your comments are a good reflection of my own thoughts. I can appreciate and even crave creative ideas even if they are taboo to most.
 
Black Tulip said:
As I said, I leave the names to others, although I like Beth.
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I like Beth too! So beth it is!
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Boyfriend could be a big hunk, sweet, bit naive? Mind, not stupid!
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I was thinking like a bf that Kelly from "Married with Children" would date some one who basically just wants a fuck toy and is good looking.
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About the outing: the brother is doing sports, isn't he? How about the girls come to training or practice or whatever. Sister's friend there as well?
Daring into the locker room or something? Gives nice possibilities I think.
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That is good or even a game the girls could be on the side lines tormenting the little dick as he tries to play with a woody. Locker room is a tuff one too many reasons why they wouldn't go in (what about the other players, coach stuff like that) but if it were a saturday game they could go home and walk in on him changing or taking a shower accidently on purpose ( perhaps while in the shower the sister argues she just needs to brush her hair and will only be a minute the next thing you know the friend and her are putting on make up and Eric has to ask for a towel)
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Beach or Boating are good too. Gives the girls the chance to flaunt bodyparts without being to obvious.
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Yeah, I like the beach/boating Boating may be better "Daddy Yacht" They could visit dad for a weekend and go out on the boat. But the beach provides a certain atmosphere where they could go by themselves sunning taking the top off, swimming bumping into one another, getting things out of the car bent over, out door showers. Something about teens in a bikini I just don't get. Why is it they are so comfortable to be around on-lookers in a bikini most of them have less material and are quite transparent and stretch so tight to the body that they are less dressed then if they were in under garments, but since it is a called a bikini the attitude is "so look what I got, I dont care!" That always struck me as odd like it was not an erotic thing at all if it is a bikini but if it was panties it is all of a sudden different in a dirty way. Maybe you could shed some light on that, is it a different mind set for a girl? I know it is not different for the guy watching it is sometimes more erotic than underwear!
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I agree that the teasing should be a heavy part of the story.

Girls going somewhere to escape: definitely the mall. No sane brother would ever go along. :D
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I know! all too well I am afraid. But if the brother is naive he might go just to tag along especially because he likes beth think of the possibilities trying on clothes, shoping at fredricks (Oh do you like this one?), the escalator. (may not get included who knows)
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I like the thought of letting the girls be the lens to view the whole thing. And by all means let them be catty. :devil:
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I think it is the most arousal, part of the story when girls get catty with one another. Girls do not need much egging on when they are alone together they do some pretty risky things and they love to tease one another vehemently by actions and words/thoughts. Things they would most likely never do they seem to do especially in a situation like a sleep over. All of a sudden it is a game to see who can out do the other! That may not be an accurate description of all girls but certainly true from what I have seen.
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Never mind the end. That will come in good time. :D


Phildo
 
I thought I said the bf was not stupid? :D
But someone like Kelly's guy is really very good.

Picture this: a running track in springtime, or summer, or fall. And the girls cheering on the side. I like that.
You are probably better at setting the scene. I have no clue about US schools and stuff.

Oh, and the bathroom is wicked. Eyeliner, mascara the whole lot.
I have no idea about the bikini. I never even thought about it. But then, maybe you shouldn't ask me. I am a bit dense sometimes.

I don't know about the boat. Is bringing in dad a good idea? Could be a disturbing influence. Brother and sister teasing but not acting could work very well, but bringing in the father? Can't that be the older brother from the friend or something?

If you do that, it gets a lot more complicated. Coils in coils so to speak.
 
intresting

I've just stared posting here and am curious how many people are turned on by the ideas of Others Incest but cringe at thoughts of there own siblings. heck my Cousin is Attractive and when it was mentioned if i ever did anything with her i was Repulsed beyond measure. how ever i read these Stories and Find them arousing. I'm interested in the mental processes associated with this. I've three sisters and we were all very close in the (not meaning to insult) Right way. Accusations of something more will send me into a Full on Rage.


So i was figuring is the concept of Taboo what is so appealing forbidden lust? and it's so much easy to say brother and sister then describing a long history of why they shouldn't? the Romeo Juliet Syndrome. But though even at that story everyone thought they should be together so the Taboo was lost in that in-depth story as well. So i guess my Idea is Inventing some form of Taboo Lust that doesn’t involve Blood ties? but all my ideas come across as something that one would truly be upset by. Like Falling in love with your Father and mothers Killer. Or Lusting after the guy that date raped your Best friend. where am i going with this?..
 
Re: intresting

So i guess my Idea is Inventing some form of Taboo Lust that doesn’t involve Blood ties? but all my ideas come across as something that one would truly be upset by. Like Falling in love with your Father and mothers Killer. Or Lusting after the guy that date raped your Best friend. where am i going with this?.. [/B]

The same place every one else goes with it!

I can hear children uttering a nursery rhyme, as they all hold hands, skiping around in a circle. And in the end just like clock-work they all fall down!

Aaron,
Not to take light of your post, because I am sure someone has a more taboo subject and quite possibly some day that will be the next object of desire to istall in an erotic story.

In this thread alone it is brought up on several occasions. Even though the story development on this particular thread is avoiding the incest because of my choice to write that way. The very real fact is...

That even though you or I had no contact with a sibling it is very naive to think it does not exist.

Fucking a murderer is not quite the same as loving your mom and being arouse enough at the right moment to fuck her or loving your sister and falling in love with your sister as you see her in different ways.

As far as date rape goes there is a whole category devoted to that stuff already. Incest is not necessarily about non-concent and in most cases it is an explsion waiting to happen just society teaches us differently.

And briefly in most states (USA) it is perfectly leagal to be weded to your first cousin just not much of a practice because of family traditions.

What if "Not for real dont freak on me," some one in your family made a pass at you, or has erotic thoughts about you? Do you punch them? Do you hate them?

I personally would politely decline the advance and explain why I can not, but no different then if some one to my distaste approaches me, none the less It is still flatering to be told you are attractive. If I was not raised that it is wrong, I might even tell you my sisters are very attractive I am not blind. Would I ever go down that path? No, but I am willing to believe many have.
 
I thought I said the bf was not stupid? :D
But someone like Kelly's guy is really very good.
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You know I relly like 'Kelly," I wanna make a name change Kelly for Eric's sister Beth is still good for the friend
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Picture this: a running track in springtime, or summer, or fall. And the girls cheering on the side. I like that.
You are probably better at setting the scene. I have no clue about US schools and stuff.
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I was thinking soccer because many times during the game if he is defense player they just stand around bord talking to girls on the side line. (Been there my self)
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Oh, and the bathroom is wicked. Eyeliner, mascara the whole lot.
I have no idea about the bikini. I never even thought about it. But then, maybe you shouldn't ask me. I am a bit dense sometimes.
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You like that, that comes from personal experiences, girls have this way of being in what ever room it is some one else wants to use with a bit of privacy. They as you would know think nothing of having ten people in a bathroom while you take a shower as long as they have an excuse, and make-up is a necesity it is like breathing.
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I was hoping one of the silent people passing by would have commented on the Bikini panty question.
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I don't know about the boat. Is bringing in dad a good idea? Could be a disturbing influence. Brother and sister teasing but not acting could work very well, but bringing in the father? Can't that be the older brother from the friend or something?
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Yea! I tend to agree it may get to complex and loose some readers by throwing another male into the story, I will file it if there is a part two I can consider it then.
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Black Tulip,
This thread is so empty we could have cyber sex and no one would know, what do you think? Then we could write a story on it and place it in the incest category. I am sure we are related some how I have relatives that live in France, and some in England too.
 
Your right

Your Right it's not the same, not even the right category. I'm trying to look at the underling feelings that make it arousing and try and apply them in some other situation.

Emotion developing into sexual desire is can be very arousing, and the instance above, I wasn't referring to non-consensual sex. I was trying to set a different picture of being sexually attracted to someone you shouldn't be. Or physical attraction overpowering either personal or Societies beliefs of what is acceptable. Take for example twins. The concept of Lesbian Twin women is quite exciting. But one time I saw a video of two attractive women who were twin sisters engaging in a sexual act. While the though was arousing, seeing it quite frankly turned my stomach around.

I was also wondering if anyone had explored the clone concept at all? Cloning one’s self and engaging in some lewd acts. would That fall under incest in one way or another?

And I know it exist. I'm witnessed it first hand (not experienced it). And typically in reality it involves Individuals with Parents that may have abused them sexually. Giving them an abbraent take on sex all together. and being some what shunned, even if only imagined. Coming together to help and comfort each other. Fact is Real Life incest normally Involves great deals of Emotional Scaring and or Mental Disorders/abuse. Sadly isn’t very arousing to me anyway.

I’ve a couple of real life incest stories that couldn’t be posted here for several Reasons. But to sum it up it involved a very abusive Father and 3 girls and a boy. There was a Cult house that Filmed very disturbing and Illegal things. After Growing up and suffering Flashbacks of the truly Disturbing actions. A Brother and Sister meet years later not realizing at first who they are to each other cuz they lost contact in the States Foster systems. Close friends of each reveal to each other they Suffered from a Traumatic past and start seeing Parallels in each other personally and Lives. Soon the ability to Share the Tram and experience they both had with some one who understands brings them to each other’s arms. The finality of true acceptance are more then either can bare and they each experience sex unlike they have every though possible between each other. Etc…
 
Re: Your right

Aaron Dazer said:

While the though was arousing, seeing it quite frankly turned my stomach around.

Hi Aaron,

I picked the sentence from your post that seems crucial to me. Speaking for myself: it's all in the mind.

There are loads of stories on Lit I like reading, but God forbid I will ever experience them in real life.
I would go crazy, turn into a murderer or end up being a catatonic puppet. :D

We're talking fantasy here, at least I am. Am I? :catgrin:
 
A7inchPhildo said:

I was thinking soccer because many times during the game if he is defense player they just stand around bord talking to girls on the side line. (Been there my self)
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As I said, I have no clue about sports in the USA. Go right ahead partner. ;)

You like that, that comes from personal experiences, girls have this way of being in what ever room it is some one else wants to use with a bit of privacy. They as you would know think nothing of having ten people in a bathroom while you take a shower as long as they have an excuse, and make-up is a necesity it is like breathing.

Are you getting personal? If my brother is not moving over when I need to fix my face, he's asking for it, isn't he?


I was hoping one of the silent people passing by would have commented on the Bikini panty question.
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Fat chance.


Black Tulip,
This thread is so empty we could have cyber sex and no one would know, what do you think? Then we could write a story on it and place it in the incest category. I am sure we are related some how I have relatives that live in France, and some in England too.

You are really wicked.




And I like that. :D

You shouldn't be teasing the audience though. I like performing and who knows? In time they might get enough courage to join in.
;)

Related? Don't think so. My family goes back to about 1500 and is all low country. Don't tell anybody but we came originally from Belgium. But as I said, the last 500 years we've been in the Netherlands. :D
 
Re: Your right

Your Right it's not the same, not even the right category. I'm trying to look at the underling feelings that make it arousing and try and apply them in some other situation.
I thin you will find that is what a lot of people would like to do include, myself
Emotion developing into sexual desire is can be very arousing, and the instance above, I wasn't referring to non-consensual sex. I was trying to set a different picture of being sexually attracted to someone you shouldn't be. Or physical attraction overpowering either personal or Societies beliefs of what is acceptable. Take for example twins. The concept of Lesbian Twin women is quite exciting. But one time I saw a video of two attractive women who were twin sisters engaging in a sexual act. While the though was arousing, seeing it quite frankly turned my stomach around.
I don't really agree I could watch twins with out any problem as long as it is not my twin. In fact just two sisters would be hot in my book just not my sisters You would be suprised how many women have fantasies over my brother and I. Although we do not engage in any contact between the two of us. (Let me make that real clear "We are not Gay nor do we contact each other in a sexual way") Women are taken back just by the thought two brothers could take on one girl. Say what you like but if shania twain and her sister invited you in forthe evening you would say no! Not this boy I am there!

I was also wondering if anyone had explored the clone concept at all? Cloning one’s self and engaging in some lewd acts. would That fall under incest in one way or another?
I believe that was touched on in a thread in the AH by Dr. Mabe on incest. The basic thought is it was masterbation or fucking your self and some how sheep got thrown in the way. Not a real topic, you would have to be old enough to afford the proceedure then wait 18 years by Lit rules so your like 60 years old having gay sex with your self at 18. ( go for it !)

And I know it exist. I'm witnessed it first hand (not experienced it). And typically in reality it involves Individuals with Parents that may have abused them sexually. Giving them an abbraent take on sex all together. and being some what shunned, even if only imagined. Coming together to help and comfort each other. Fact is Real Life incest normally Involves great deals of Emotional Scaring and or Mental Disorders/abuse. Sadly isn’t very arousing to me anyway.
Tell that to my neighbors, they have a different story, how they grew up on a farm and no one else to play with so they spent all the free time together also one thing led to another and.... Another one is Edgar Allen Poe he was like 26 when he married his cousin at 16. I will agree that what you say can have a special effect but is not the majority. It is just the majority of what is public knowledge.

I’ve a couple of real life incest stories that couldn’t be posted here for several Reasons. But to sum it up it involved a very abusive Father and 3 girls and a boy. There was a Cult house that Filmed very disturbing and Illegal things. After Growing up and suffering Flashbacks of the truly Disturbing actions. A Brother and Sister meet years later not realizing at first who they are to each other cuz they lost contact in the States Foster systems. Close friends of each reveal to each other they Suffered from a Traumatic past and start seeing Parallels in each other personally and Lives. Soon the ability to Share the Tram and experience they both had with some one who understands brings them to each other’s arms. The finality of true acceptance are more then either can bare and they each experience sex unlike they have every though possible between each other. Etc…
Yup age can be a real hinderance at times but for the most part it is important for many reasons. Personally I do not want to read a ficticious story on a toddler being raped. It is one thing if teen age is implied but I rather stick with the adult erotica starting at age 18. That story is sad, unfortunate things like that exist but honestly Literotica is not a good place for a story like that to be posted even if it could be.
 
Black Tulip said:
You are really wicked.




And I like that. :D

You shouldn't be teasing the audience though. I like performing and who knows? In time they might get enough courage to join in.
;)

Related? Don't think so. My family goes back to about 1500 and is all low country. Don't tell anybody but we came originally from Belgium. But as I said, the last 500 years we've been in the Netherlands. :D

God if I could just get lost in the Netherlands for a couple of hours I would be happy as a pig in swill! 500 years! I do not think I was a twinkle yet!:D

I am almost finished with that other story, getting really excited about this one.

Thinking there really has to be a sleep over to put the icing on the cake! (every pun is intended)
 
Let's see. We have a boy, his knowledgable sister who dares all and her friend who has the hots for brother.

Reading bro's secret thoughts and feeding him with new ammunition so to speak.

Teasing in the house, teasing at sports somewhere, even invading his privacy in the bathroom.

Sister is embarrassed that she gets turned on by parading in front of brother. Doing it to get friend doing the same. Telling friend what she's got to do to catch a boy.

Something gets out of hand. (No idea what.) Friend tells bro he's nice because he is not pawing all over her? She is not very agressive, unsure maybe?

Kelly exasperated.
Logical next step: I'll show you how to seduce? Parents out, Kelly's bf comes over. Clueless of course. Kelly starts working on bf to show friend how to. What happens with brother and friend?

I have no idea where this is going.

I take my bow, curtain left. :D
 
NASCAR and 7"

To follow up on Nascar's original story at the beginning:
The brother is writing a story saying his fantasies about his sister. She is reading them and getting off on it. That's good.
THEN, after about a week, she says to herself, NO, that's not the way it should be. So, gathering up her nerve, she starts writing her own version of what should be happening next!
He reads it and realizes that she has been reading his writings and enjoying it. This turns him on immensely. So, he writes his next part based on her lead.
And anything can happen or not happen after that.?
 
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