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[Black Tulip]

When posting a reply on another thread I thought it might have elements for a nice incest story.

I read a couple of those, but they don't turn me on at all. I'm totally indifferent it seems and I guess that's not the right start to a hot story.

So here's my idea for grabs:

Sister finds dirty books from her brother. Brother walks in. Bingo.

Feel free to use it, twist it, build on it, ignore it, whatever.

If this leads to a story, I would like to know. Just curious.

 

[sanchopanza]

dirty books? or she reads incest stories he has written . . . i think i've seen that before with a daughter and father

 

[sirhugs]

I assume this is a joking comment on the prevalence of this plot twist in stories. But these days, its porn on the harddrive....

 

[LorriLove]

yep

they make me laugh as well, the 18 y old brother walks in on his 18 y old sister and sees her naked, next morning they wake up in bed together madly in love and fuck like bunnies for ever more, giggle

then of course the 18 y old sister walks in on her 18 y old brother and catches him reading fiesta, they wake up in bed together the next morning madly in love, but oh woe is me 9 months later she gives birth to an 18 y old baby with six fingers on each hand and able to play the banjo straight off.

incest unless written by someone who's been there, and with licence to tell the truth, (age etc), is basically fucking crap and unbelievable.

 

[sirhugs]

Re: yep

incest unless written by someone who's been there, and with licence to tell the truth, (age etc), is basically fucking crap and unbelievable.

I resemble that remark. well, at least mine are based on my actual fantasies.....

 

[NASCARaddicted]

Re: yep

incest unless written by someone who's been there, and with licence to tell the truth, (age etc), is basically fucking crap and unbelievable.

I don't know, but I think more then 75% of the Lit Stories are based on fantasy.

Also, I am very sure, that there are quite a few authors who are still virgin. So just because you never experienced it in real live ...

just to mention this: In the 19th century, there was a famous, german author named Karl May. He wrote many books for teenagers about the Wild West. The way he described the indians and the cowboys sounded very realistic. His books were written from his POV, as if he was travelling through the West. But later, he admitted, that the first time that he visited the USA was many years after he wrote the books ...

Anyway:

@ Sanchopanza - this idea is great.
Just think: The brother and the sister share a computer. Usually, Michael plays games, while Amy uses the computer for school.
So, when it comes to programs like Word, the sister is the only one who uses this program.
One day, she notices that someone besides herself used Word. There is a new document called "My story". She can't remember that she created a file with that name, so out of curiosity, she opens it and starts to read.

It starts with "My Name is Michael, I am 20 years old ...." at first, Amy wants to stop reading, because she doesn't want to invade the privacy of her brother. But then, when she reads the rest of the line, she has to read it "and today I want to tell you about my experience with my 18 year old Sister Amy"

When she sees this, she keeps on reading the story - and at first she is shocked. Her brother wrote a story, about how he has sex with his sister. What shocks her even more is the fact that all the details in this stories are real. He uses her real name, her real age, even her real bra size (it seems as if he looked into the laundry to check one of her bras).

At first, he writes about how he spied her, and how he masturbated while he was thinking about her. Then he writes how he started to seduce her.

Amy is offended ... but also, she becomes a little bit horny by the thought of the kinky incest. However, the story ended before any real sex is mentioned .... damn. Now she was so horny, that she would love to read more.
She looks at the file ... and the last time that the file was edited was yesterday .... she really hoped that her brother would continue the story.

A few hours later, her brother asks her, if he can use the computer. Without hesitating, she allows it. Later, in the evening, she takes another look at the story file ... and her brother continued to write. She reads the new stuff and becomes so horny, that she starts to masturbate.

From that day on, it continues like that. Michael keeps on writing the story. Then Amy reads it and masturbates. She always becomes hornier and she really would love that this story would become true.
Also, she starts to spy her brother, and she sees that whenever he keeps on writing the story, he masturbates.
Finally, she starts to seduce him .... maybe she tells him that she loves his story ... or she just seduces him, by wearing erotic outfits when he is near ...

 

[Black Tulip]

Re: Re: yep

I don't know, but I think more then 75% of the Lit Stories are based on fantasy.

Also, I am very sure, that there are quite a few authors who are still virgin. So just because you never experienced it in real live ...

just to mention this: In the 19th century, there was a famous, german author named Karl May. He wrote many books for teenagers about the Wild West. The way he described the indians and the cowboys sounded very realistic. His books were written from his POV, as if he was travelling through the West. But later, he admitted, that the first time that he visited the USA was many years after he wrote the books ...

Anyway:

@ Sanchopanza - this idea is great.
Just think: The brother and the sister share a computer. Usually, Michael plays games, while Amy uses the computer for school.
So, when it comes to programs like Word, the sister is the only one who uses this program.
One day, she notices that someone besides herself used Word. There is a new document called "My story". She can't remember that she created a file with that name, so out of curiosity, she opens it and starts to read.

It starts with "My Name is Michael, I am 20 years old ...." at first, Amy wants to stop reading, because she doesn't want to invade the privacy of her brother. But then, when she reads the rest of the line, she has to read it "and today I want to tell you about my experience with my 18 year old Sister Amy"

When she sees this, she keeps on reading the story - and at first she is shocked. Her brother wrote a story, about how he has sex with his sister. What shocks her even more is the fact that all the details in this stories are real. He uses her real name, her real age, even her real bra size (it seems as if he looked into the laundry to check one of her bras).

At first, he writes about how he spied her, and how he masturbated while he was thinking about her. Then he writes how he started to seduce her.

Amy is offended ... but also, she becomes a little bit horny by the thought of the kinky incest. However, the story ended before any real sex is mentioned .... damn. Now she was so horny, that she would love to read more.
She looks at the file ... and the last time that the file was edited was yesterday .... she really hoped that her brother would continue the story.

A few hours later, her brother asks her, if he can use the computer. Without hesitating, she allows it. Later, in the evening, she takes another look at the story file ... and her brother continued to write. She reads the new stuff and becomes so horny, that she starts to masturbate.

From that day on, it continues like that. Michael keeps on writing the story. Then Amy reads it and masturbates. She always becomes hornier and she really would love that this story would become true.
Also, she starts to spy her brother, and she sees that whenever he keeps on writing the story, he masturbates.
Finally, she starts to seduce him .... maybe she tells him that she loves his story ... or she just seduces him, by wearing erotic outfits when he is near ...

Wow, NASCAR, I like your twists and turns.
Why don't you make your idea into a complete story?

By the way: I looooved Karl May. My brothers had his books as well.

I'd say Winetou figured rather prominently in my early fantasies. To bad there were no girls in those books, except Winetou's sister and she was a wimp. Maybe that's why I started inventing stories of my own.

 

[A7inchPhildo]

Just budding in here because Nascar needs to write about deb and mom in the porn business.

Thinking I like the porn books too toss it in the mix.t Two stories develop one is the story the boy types out on the computer and the girl reads to the reader, but at the same time the story that is unfolding for real. As the boy continues each part of the story the girl searches to see if it is true. The stack of porn is found where he says in the story and the girls he frequently looks at look simular to his sister. Being slightly curious and mindfull of the story the girl begins to play into the story. Reading what her actions have on her brother. Something like he could write how he peeps at his sister in different locations and the limited visability. She could then play it up a little knowing she will read what exactly he saw and did just for fun at first then getting a bit more daring, then becoming aroused by the whole idea to where she purposely is exposing her self while maintaining she knows nothing of her brothers lust. I think I would make it so the brother is not knowing the sister is reading his works. like if he is thinking he is safe behind a password that she stumbles across and like all cats curiosity gets the better of her. Not sure if I would bother to have them fuck this could be a good story just to be descriptive with tight clothing and visualize the certain features that are a tease to look at panties, camel toe, nipple poke, bikini, towel crack, tight jeans, loose shirts, down blouse, skirts, loose shorts, changing, shower, wet clothes, different positions of posture standing, sitting, reaching, touching.

Phildo dribbling a thought

Hi black tulip glad you came to visit from the AH may you bring more ideas and thoughts. Love a twisted mind, makes for great reading.

Trying to see how this could work without incest, any thoughts I don't like to write incest.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

well, my first idea was, that it was obvious: the girl in his story was his sister. I mean, she has the same name, she also is chubby, has long brown hair, green eyes ....

but the other idea is also interesting: he writes about a guy who has a crush on his own sister .... but in this case, the details are slightly different.

however, the thing with the sister becoming active is very good. It could be like: The sister is standing in the bath. She is only wearing a towel around her body. She knows the brother will come soon. When he enters the bad the towel falls down "accidently" and he can see her nude body. (of course, she dropped the towel on purpose.

The next day, she sees that he included the bath room scene. It could be like "Accidently, her towel fell down, and I was able to see her lovely boobs .... and her beaver. Too bad that she doesn't shave her pussy. I guess if she would have a shaved cunt, I couldn't resist to touch it"

So now, the girl starts to shave her pussy for the next "accidental nudity" incident

 

[fiery_jack]

Re: yep

incest unless written by someone who's been there, and with licence to tell the truth, (age etc), is basically fucking crap and unbelievable.

Well, that's depressing...

 

[A7inchPhildo]

Re: Re: yep

Well, that's depressing...

Lori has a valid point all too often incest is a crap story because the writer does not take the time to place him/herself into the actual settting and feel what the characters feel and express it. Kind of like a man writing a lesbian story it can be done but he honestly does not know what it is like to be lesbian so he will likely miss some important feelings to be expressed.

Most writers think they can make incest just by name of character (Brother, Sister, Mom, Dad, ...) and fill in the story with normal sex stuff that is not incest it is just a twisted sex story. Incest has feelings and emotions fear and lust. Needs a lot of inner thoughts from characters. Also writing at Lit can confine a story as mentioned because of the age rule.

I challenge Lori with the thought if one has lusted in the mind, they may never had incest relations, but could know fairly well what the feelings to be experienced would be like. Would that qualify for a license?

Phildo

Nascar how is the family porn business doing?

Still no response on a non incest version any one?

 

[NASCARaddicted]

Re: Re: Re: yep

Nascar how is the family porn business doing?

Still no response on a non incest version any one?

Well, I lack the time to start the story, but I think I will keep this story idea in my mind ....

But as for a non incest version .... I don't see any incest in this story idea. Sure the mother and daughter are doing a gang bang, but as long as they don't have lesbian sex together .....

 

[fiery_jack]

Re: Re: Re: yep

Lori has a valid point all too often incest is a crap story because the writer does not take the time to place him/herself into the actual settting and feel what the characters feel and express it. Kind of like a man writing a lesbian story it can be done but he honestly does not know what it is like to be lesbian so he will likely miss some important feelings to be expressed.

Most writers think they can make incest just by name of character (Brother, Sister, Mom, Dad, ...) and fill in the story with normal sex stuff that is not incest it is just a twisted sex story. Incest has feelings and emotions fear and lust. Needs a lot of inner thoughts from characters. Also writing at Lit can confine a story as mentioned because of the age rule.

That's very true - about writers not putting themselves in their character's shoes, hence the poor quality stories. I do think that a talented writer doesn't have to have 'hands-on' experience in order to produce a believable tale.

It's the poor stories that make up the incest top lists, and the thought that only seasoned enthusiasts can write it well, that's depressing.

 

[A7inchPhildo]

I assure you Jack you can write an incest story. How good it is depends on weather or not you really want to do the research. Just as in any category.


Nascar I was talking about this thread I like the plot and even considering writing an incest version I would rather a different version if it is feaseable any thoughts how the set up could work out side the family unit?

 

[Black Tulip]

I agree about not writing things you are not willing to dive into. That's why I put up the idea in the first place.
I can think it will be a hot story, but I don't want to imagine how sexy my brother could be. Yuk!
So, I will not write it.

Phildo, are you talking about this idea as non-incest? Why not have a sister and her girlfriend. The brother goes for the friend, maybe the sister watching or orchestrating like in the idea of Nascar? Writing a story and the brother acting it out with a friend of his sister.

Just thinking with my typing fingers.

 

[A7inchPhildo]

Hey that could work!

I have been battering around neighbor needs to use computer cause hers broke and has a deadline. Husband has been writeing things in his folders and she finds it. His wife knows nothing about it and the two of them laugh as they play on the computer when he goes to work each day he continues to spy as the wife sets him up and the neighbor talking on the phone plays along with it.

But I like your idea better it is a more likely situation and can even toss in a little brother sister looking.

Other thoughts anyone?

 

[LorriLove]

hiya again

incest doesn't often happen overnight in real life, brother finding sister nude and humping her straight off is usually rape not incest love.

a good incest story has to start at the very beginning, the first tease, the first spark of interest, the years, (yes years), of failed half attempts, of both parties too embarrassed to out and ask for it should the other not feel the same way.

the years of frustration and brother peeping in through the bathroom door then rushing off to try to pull his helmet off. years of sister admiring bro from afar and then rushing off to do herself with a candle. or whatever.

boy meets girl, girl says yes, they fuck!! this does not go down well with me in incest stories.

a decent one would make novella proportions before they even kissed for the first time let alone fucked each others brains out.

 

[Black Tulip]

Maybe the timespan in incest is longer than in other circumstances, but I think it's not realistic in any story here at Lit.

Isn't it more important to write about the guilt, the sense of tasting forbidden fruits, thinks like that? I would say that is more an essential part of incest.


Oh God, I just noticed: I just lost my virginity.

 

[LorriLove]

wow

Maybe the timespan in incest is longer than in other circumstances, but I think it's not realistic in any story here at Lit.

Isn't it more important to write about the guilt, the sense of tasting forbidden fruits, thinks like that? I would say that is more an essential part of incest.


Oh God, I just noticed: I just lost my virginity.

wow did the earth move for you dear

 

[A7inchPhildo]

Oh God, I just noticed: I just lost my virginity.

Virginity another topic at lit that is more abused then incest not that 75% of incest deals with a virginity lost issue.

Probably just me I like my women experienced, the whole virginity thing is just not an interest almost a turn-off.

Only mentioning it because Black Tulip brought it up. I think the whole virgin thing is nice but in my mind it belongs in a romance kind of story most of the time. I don't know but a virgin in a gang bang or bdsm or sexually carousing is a little out of the norm. Most especially women I would think would want the first to be special or at least think it was special with someone they cared about.

I think men tend to dissagree only after the fact and they realize. Oh that was not who I am going to spend the rest of my life with, and have been burnt in some way. Then play it off as, ah she was just a Poa. But at the time I think it was different attitude.

It is a big step unless you are 20+ and even then the first time is more reverent then most stories ever give thought too. I know I was no porn star first time!

Getting closer any one want to help me practice?


Phildo

 

[Black Tulip]

Re: wow

wow did the earth move for you dear

Phildo,

The first time I lost my virginity was more stuff for a comedy than a lit story. Eager, sweating bodies but it wasn't going any where for quit some time.

 

[sirhugs]

Re: Re: wow

Phildo,

The first time I lost my virginity was more stuff for a comedy than a lit story. Eager, sweating bodies but it wasn't going any where for quit some time.

so true...wonder if this is typical of Lit

 

[NASCARaddicted]

Maybe the timespan in incest is longer than in other circumstances, but I think it's not realistic in any story here at Lit.

Isn't it more important to write about the guilt, the sense of tasting forbidden fruits, thinks like that? I would say that is more an essential part of incest.

I guess it always depends on how it happends.

What about: a brother is at a party. His sister is on the same party. They drink a lot and later they both walk home. Both are totally drunk. At home, the girl is undressing herself in the bathroom, when her brother comes in. In the past he never tought much about incest, but when he sees her hot nude body, he becomes horny. And due to the much alcohol, he doesn't care about the fact that she is his sister .... so they have sex.

The next morning, they wake up next to each other in the same bed ... when they realize what happened they start to think/talk about the future and their feelings. Should/could incest sex happen again in the future ?

 

[A7inchPhildo]

Laughing))), Drug induced or alchol can do some pretty strange things. I remeber on party I was drunk on wine "Jekyl vinyards" it was not a family party but my inlaws came for a while. Being my self with friends I though nothing of takeing a piss off the deck. My mother inlaw (proper lady she is) screached, "OMG! "Name" your husband is urinating off the deck!" Took a long time for her to face me after that little misshap, and my wife was mortified. Not at me but at that I could be so careless when drunk. My farther inlaw thought it was funny but dared not say anything till later.

Here is the kick nascar my nearest sister is 4yrs older and I have been drunk around her I still would not expect a sexual advance or give one even if we were naked especially if I was drunk. I have seen her naked and she is good looking but never thought about if I would bone her at least not until LIt and now I know I wouldn't.That is part of the reason incest stories are a little lame to me and I consider myself to have low moral standards. So incest stories for the most part come off as a dog humping another dog no feelings just sex splattered on a page. The yeah but what if? Crosses my mind as well as the next pervert but it is still not sexually charging as some of the other topics and situations available.

In case I was not clear I do not condone or commend incest it is just a category that needs special attention to make a really good story. Excuses why, other than being physically forced is not generally a good reason. I just do not grasp how after 18 years (LIT rules) all of a sudden out of the blue siblings have sex with out any prior feelings.

 

[sirhugs]

In case I was not clear I do not condone or commend incest it is just a category that needs special attention to make a really good story. Excuses why, other than being physically forced is not generally a good reason. I just do not grasp how after 18 years (LIT rules) all of a sudden out of the blue siblings have sex with out any prior feelings.

perhaps you might wish to consider that some folks do not 'discover' the feelings suddenly. ' Smoldering desire' is legitimate. Then , all it takes is fuel for the fire.

I speak from experience different from yours. I never havedone incest, and no one in my immediate family turns me on, but there IS a cousin after whom my Lust in the Loft series is modelled. If she had boldly acted . as in the story, my shyness would have vanished.

And I do have stepdaughter not unlike the one in my Kissing the Bride stories...though NONE of that happened, except in my imagination.