Comments That Make Your Day

[magnetarhanggliding]

A Complete Shame You Are Only Writing Lesbian stuff now, you HAD such a delicate touch for explaining Heterosexual Romance, Seduction, Feelings of Love and the Intimacy of Sex, whether with a non family male or an incestual male member.

Too bad you're batting on the opposite "team" only now.

If the point of that comment was to coax you into writing more stories in their preferred category, I'm not sure that's the approach I'd take.

 

[onehitwanda]

If the point of that comment was to coax you into writing more stories in their preferred category, I'm not sure that's the approach I'd take.

I was being chastised for having my own wants and needs.

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

I was being chastised for having my own wants and needs.

You're just so selfish like that

Please continue.

 

[StillStunned]

I was being chastised for having my own wants and needs.

That's the problem with lesbians. You don't have a man in your life to tell you what your wants and needs are.

 

[onehitwanda]

That's the problem with lesbians. You don't have a man in your life to tell you what your wants and needs are.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

I think we can express ourselves in words alone.

 

[Actingup]

A Complete Shame You Are Only Writing Lesbian stuff now, you HAD such a delicate touch for explaining Heterosexual Romance, Seduction, Feelings of Love and the Intimacy of Sex, whether with a non family male or an incestual male member.

Too bad you're batting on the opposite "team" only now.

The way that they missed capitalising words as the text develops suggests evolving masculine distress and loss of function to me. I’m reading this as a cry for help. They are lost without their tour guide, but perhaps the solution is for them to cross to the valley opposite to find you themselves?

 

[onehitwanda]

The way that they missed capitalising words as the text develops suggests evolving masculine distress and loss of function to me. I’m reading this as a cry for help. They are lost without their tour guide, but perhaps the solution is for them to cross to the valley opposite to find you themselves?

I suspect their valley and my valley will never be co-temporal.

 

[StillStunned]

Another one on Dungeon of Desire, this time from @Ghostwriter100:

I like what I'm seeing so far my dude, keep it up.
Digging the tiefling/paladin angle.
It's cliche but damn it, it works!

Yes, once I decided the POV character was going to be a tiefling rogue, the paladin angle almost wrote itself. Although Arivor turned out a bit more three-dimensional than I expected.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

 

[Erozetta]

I got this in an email the other day. I've been reading that last line over and over again. Makes me happy to know that there are some people who can separate those concepts.

 

[Publius68]

From Anonymous:

Hard to believe so little happens and you keep it so interesting. A talent for believably being in character's heads, I guess.

 

[Audiflex]

I got this one this morning on "Homeless." It's my new favourite.

"Anonymous about 4 hours ago
I will not read anymore of your stories. I spend too much time with tears in my eyes. Time for me to register with Literotica so you can be in my first five favorites!"

It just made my day!

Post your comments when a fan makes your day.

That’s an awesome compliment! When your writing moves someone that much, you know you’re doing something right. Moments like these make all the hard work worth it!

 

[Naughtylit81]

I got this wonderful assessment of my latest story, Cheating at Church Chapter 3.

Whackdoodleabout
I am usually death on religious desecration because religion is used as a prop or worse, as a kink.

This wasn’t the case. It is two religious people who are emotionally vulnerable, lonely and who finding so wth h more in each other.

Affairs happen. Religious people are human and as prone to failing as anyone. You conveyed this….loneliness and lust very well and I look forward to more.

 

[Actingup]

From the charming @UpperNorthLeft (who is a wonderful author), on A Crack In The Glass.

A lovely story. I appreciated the travelogue. A trip to Japan is on my bucket list, and you gave me some interesting ideas for a future trip. I loved your use of the onsen as a catalyst to launch your MCs coming of life. Your story arc is perfect as is, with a strong ending. My only whinge is that you’ve created several characters so engaging that I’d love to read about what happens next with them.

Thanks mate - much appreciated. I only regret that I can't tell a couple of the true stories of my own visit to Beppu some years ago!

 

[PennyThompson]

@yowser cracked me up with this one on Bob's Furniture Barn...

Sweet, clever, different. Definitely not Marxist.

I'll have to make the anti-capitalism more overt next time

 

[Publius68]

Two comments have come in on SNAFU (Situation Normal: Al Fucks as Usual) that I really appreciate:
@Actingup says (in part):

I always particularly love the scenes where he’s jousting with his smart and sexy parents and maintaining a good relationship with them. That theme really helps raise the series well above the average, together with Al’s commitment to the pleasure of his partners, hilariously good fortune, and the exuberant narration. Thanks again.

Thanks. So many Literotica stories involve bad or broken parents or marriages, it depresses me. Also, from the beginning, I felt that for Al to be the way he is, the way that lets all this shit happen, he had to have great parents. And then once I figured that they should also be horndogs, and especially when I realized that I had been writing his Mom as Sophia, Al makes even more sense.
And dude, I've said it before. In this hyper-realistic world of nine and a half inch dicks, 30 person harems, and 13,000 word chapters of sexual and social mayhem, I do not have time to yammer on about STDs.

Then there is this one, from @DwarfLord50:

That was a perfect follow up to his experience with Hannah. It is good to know that she enjoyed herself so much, that she had to talk about it with Ronnie.

The bit about spending an eternity in a shallow grave next to Dave was just hilarious. I'm not really sure what I enjoy the most about your writing style. It may be the obscure SAT references, the offhand jokes like using sheepish and New Zealand in the same sentence, but I think what I enjoy the most is hearing your characters work out their thoughts on the page with us. Most writers go straight to a completed thought. We get to see how they got there. It makes your characters that much more real. Thanks for this one!

I wondered if the sheepish joke might have been a reach, but since I've gotten two comments on it already, I guess people get it...

 

[FINLEYDIXON]

This one nearly brought a tear to my eye.

Posted to my stand alone story: Silence Between Brothers (Gay Male) #incest #brothers

From Anon

So excited to read more of your beautiful writing and story telling. I feel like your portrayal of someone differently abled was heart felt and he had depth and sensitivity and intelligence, as well as that deep loneliness we’ve all felt here in the 21st century. I love that there are brothers and care so much for and about each other. The intimacy, both emotional and sexual, was heart felt and powerful. Wish I had that kind of connection with my brother.

 

[Actingup]

And dude, I've said it before. In this hyper-realistic world of nine and a half inch dicks, 30 person harems, and 13,000 word chapters of sexual and social mayhem, I do not have time to yammer on about STDs.

I get it, I really do, and clearly I’m a big fan of the series. I just can’t seem to shake that itch down below…

One day I might attempt a story where everybody apart from the MCs ends up meeting again in the waiting room at the local clinic as our safe sex heroes walk smugly past, and submit versions into Loving Wives, Group Sex and Romance to see how they score. Although I guess in the LW version there will be revenge killings in the waiting room, in Group Sex there will be an orgy, and in Romance the MCs won’t notice or care who’s in there.

PS completely agree re parents in Lit stories!

 

[SyleusSnow]

Love the enthusiasm on this one from anonymous, on Maybe We're More:

THIS IS THE CUTEST STORY IVE EVER READ

 

[StillStunned]

I woke to find a pair of new comments on Dungeon of Desire: Level 1.

@Eosphorus wrote:

This was great. I’d never read a thing in this particular erotic category. I had no idea there even was a whole erotic D&D subgenre of erotica. How marvelous!

I love how you weave the standard dungeon crawl adventure with the erotic build-up and tension. What cool characters, too And it is all about the characters in a story like this, as the adventure scenario is (by design) is the stuff of a million D&D nights played.

The sex took my by surprise by how hot I found it. I haven’t thought a lot about cross species coupling. This story isn’t something I would’ve sought out, but I am glad I did.

The last line was awesome! Can’t wait to see what happens next. 5 stars!

And @Rob_Royale added:

Excellent. The right characters for a series, perhaps?

Thanks for reading and commenting, both of you! It was my first foray into D&D erotica, and it was actually supposed to be a lot shallower. The characters got away from me, though, which is why they're still stuck in the dungeon waiting for me to write Level 2.

 

[StillStunned]

First comment on The Dome 05: New Worlds!

@dontyouwishyouknew wrote:

I am very pleased to find this latest chapter.

And I'm very pleased you found it too! Thanks for reading and commenting!

 

[oneagainst]

Cara's Ski Trip Breeding by Daddy - comment: "Your English is good and spelling correct"

Absolutely smashing it!

 

[Omenainen]

by Anonymous user on 7 hours ago

Damn good writing.

Non-Erotic wasn’t as bad a category as I’d feared regarding feedback, and I got many nice comments, but for some reason this made me proud. My goal hasn’t been to improve as a writer, because this isn’t my language and I feel like to truly master it will be forever out of my reach, but writing this last one I did feel that I’ve gotten better over the years. It feels good to get validation.

 

[Actingup]

Cara's Ski Trip Breeding by Daddy - comment: "Your English is good and spelling correct"

Absolutely smashing it!

There are millions billions on social media who will never earn this praise.

 

[PennyThompson]

lAnatomiste's comment on Sexy Women in Your Galaxy:

_Extremely_ well done; just wish I could award more than five stars, Blue is not just a human in costume, but a believable alien. I look forward to reading more of Austin, Blue, and Ship.

Mission accomplished in at least one person's opinion, yay