Comments That Make Your Day

[EmilyMiller]

Post your comments when a fan makes your day.

This one was lovely (and obviously a little OTT). Sadly by anonymous, else I’d have PMed them my thanks:

“excellent, showing a depth of understanding that surpasses most everything else on Literotica”

This is a comment on my short story, Fragile, a piece I love, but which few others do. When someone gets what I was trying to do, it makes me very happy.

Em

 

[NoTalentHack]

This one was lovely (and obviously a little OTT). Sadly by anonymous, else I’d have PMed them my thanks:

“excellent, showing a depth of understanding that surpasses most everything else on Literotica”

This is a comment on my short story, Fragile, a piece I love, but which few others do. When someone gets what I was trying to do, it makes me very happy.

Em

That is a really lovely story of kindness between two strangers. It’s one of my favorites of yours.

 

[EmilyMiller]

That is a really lovely story of kindness between two strangers. It’s one of my favorites of yours.

Thank you .

It’s one of mine as well. It’s not really a stroke story and I guess didn’t meet people’s expectations.

I think I said before, but the sweetest thing was a guy who had lost his wife writing to me to say it resonated. I might have cried a little.

Probably much more important to get feedback like that than the approbation of crowds.

Em

 

[NoTalentHack]

I think I said before, but the sweetest thing was a guy who had lost his wife writing to me to say it resonated. I might have cried a little.

Probably much more important to get feedback like that than the approbation of crowds.

Those are my favorite as well. I'm not saying I don't care about ratings at all, but the comments that told me I helped them understood their divorce, or why they fell out with their kids, or that they finally feel seen in their everyday lives (got a lot of those on In Health) are worth way more to me than a red H. Keep writing the stuff that you want to write; you'll find an audience that loves it, even if it might not be as broad as if you were trying to write for everyone.

 

[Imstillfun]

I got this comment today on my story in LW ‘two wives seduced’. Seriously. 840 words.

“Just as soon as I heard my friend well he used to be James asking Ashley my wife what do you want. She grunted omg. I yelled a divorce and his lights went out and I walked away. As I was walking I could hear Ashley saying get off of me you big black bastard. Joe get this SOB off of me please. I called my Uncle as I was driving to her parents to get our children and asked if I could use his cabin for a while that I wanted to take my family up for a trip. He said sure you know the code. I thanked him and hung up. At her parents they said they said Joe good to see you made it home early where is Ashley? She's at home. You could have let the children spend the night and enjoyed the night with your wife. I shocked them by saying that I don't know if that will ever happen again. WHAT'S GOING ON Leo asked? Ask Ashley she is with her lover in our bed when I left. That's not funny now what's going on? No it's not a damn bit funny but that is exactly what's going on. No I can't believe that not Ashley. I gathered up the children and thanked them for taking care of the children and that I didn't think Ashley was capable anymore. I looked at Jack Ashley's father and said thanks for insisting on a prenuptial agreement. He looked like he was ready to blow up. I headed back to our house. I seen her car was gone I didn't know where she went and at the moment I didn't care. I told the children to stay in the car I'd be right back. I grabbed everything that I thought that we would need and would get other things later. I went to a ATM and got the maximum cash. On the way to the cabin my phone rang. It was Ashley crying asking where I and the children were? Why would you care you have your lover. I don't have a lover. I said don't lie to me I have pictures that shows different. O one more thing thank you for signing the prenuptial agreement. Please I'm sorry don't leave me don't take our children away please. Too late you should have thought of that before you got your lover in our bed please burn the damn bed and have the exterminator fogg the house it's hard to tell what you 2 might have brought into my house. I hung up and shut the phone off. We got to the cabin and I carried all 3 children in. They slept but I didn't. In the morning the children were asking where mommy was when is she coming why didn't mommy come. All I could do was shake my head and say that I didn't know. Then it hit me I didn't turn my phone on. Surprise my voice mail and messages was 98 total. Ashley our parents aunt's uncle's cousins friends. Damn I thought. Even James I thought F*** you so called friend. That is what I thought so I text him F*** you you so called friend you homewreacking black SOB. Then I blocked his number. I couldn't think straight. Ashley called as I was reading text. I answered it. What do you want you Big Black Cock Cheating Slut why don't you just go to your damn black homewreacking lover. I heard what sounded like the phone drop. Jack said Mike I got to go Ashley just passed out please talk to her please. By Jack I don't know that I can she has done our family wrong click. I just couldn't handle it I was afraid for the children so I loaded them up and went to my parents. I called them and asked if we could stay there for a while and they said yes. That night I think I just passed out myself. Dad and mom both told me that I needed to talk to Ashley. So I did. I knew that I needed help because I didn't even like myself. I started seeing a therapist. The first time I seen James I went at him like a mad bull. Even though he was 6 inches taller and 75 pounds heavier he didn't stand a chance. I figured I would end up in jail but I heard that he lie and said that he was drunk and fell down the stairs. Ashley also was see a therapist. Her parents begged me to get back together so did mine and family and friends. We did start going to the same therapist. Then we were there at the same time. Then eventually we did move back into the house but our parents seen to remodeling of the house and a new bedroom suite. We made it and I believe we will grow old together. James avoids us and I'm fine with that.”

 

[djrip]

Thank you .

It’s one of mine as well. It’s not really a stroke story and I guess didn’t meet people’s expectations.

I think I said before, but the sweetest thing was a guy who had lost his wife writing to me to say it resonated. I might have cried a little.

Probably much more important to get feedback like that than the approbation of crowds.

Em

I thought it was awesome, it almost felt a mirror image of spin me round, like a similar event from the other side. And like that one, but more so, it showed the sub exercising all the power in the sub/dom scene. Don't know if that's the way to describe it. But I thought it was interesting the way your character was fully in charge despite being the one restrained and worked over, which became clear in spin with the way issues were dealt with at your character's command, and was really well illustrated in fragile in a different way.

 

[EmilyMiller]

I thought it was awesome, it almost felt a mirror image of spin me round, like a similar event from the other side. And like that one, but more so, it showed the sub exercising all the power in the sub/dom scene. Don't know if that's the way to describe it. But I thought it was interesting the way your character was fully in charge despite being the one restrained and worked over, which became clear in spin with the way issues were dealt with at your character's command, and was really well illustrated in fragile in a different way.

Thank you. YSMR is one of the least popular of my college-themed stories. But I’m fond of it for exactly the reasons you pinpointed. Control isn’t always where it at first appears to be.

Thanks for the encouraging words
.
Em

 

[EmilyMiller]

I got this comment today on my story in LW ‘two wives seduced’. Seriously. 840 words.

“Just as soon as I heard my friend well he used to be James asking Ashley my wife what do you want. She grunted omg. I yelled a divorce and his lights went out and I walked away. As I was walking I could hear Ashley saying get off of me you big black bastard. Joe get this SOB off of me please. I called my Uncle as I was driving to her parents to get our children and asked if I could use his cabin for a while that I wanted to take my family up for a trip. He said sure you know the code. I thanked him and hung up. At her parents they said they said Joe good to see you made it home early where is Ashley? She's at home. You could have let the children spend the night and enjoyed the night with your wife. I shocked them by saying that I don't know if that will ever happen again. WHAT'S GOING ON Leo asked? Ask Ashley she is with her lover in our bed when I left. That's not funny now what's going on? No it's not a damn bit funny but that is exactly what's going on. No I can't believe that not Ashley. I gathered up the children and thanked them for taking care of the children and that I didn't think Ashley was capable anymore. I looked at Jack Ashley's father and said thanks for insisting on a prenuptial agreement. He looked like he was ready to blow up. I headed back to our house. I seen her car was gone I didn't know where she went and at the moment I didn't care. I told the children to stay in the car I'd be right back. I grabbed everything that I thought that we would need and would get other things later. I went to a ATM and got the maximum cash. On the way to the cabin my phone rang. It was Ashley crying asking where I and the children were? Why would you care you have your lover. I don't have a lover. I said don't lie to me I have pictures that shows different. O one more thing thank you for signing the prenuptial agreement. Please I'm sorry don't leave me don't take our children away please. Too late you should have thought of that before you got your lover in our bed please burn the damn bed and have the exterminator fogg the house it's hard to tell what you 2 might have brought into my house. I hung up and shut the phone off. We got to the cabin and I carried all 3 children in. They slept but I didn't. In the morning the children were asking where mommy was when is she coming why didn't mommy come. All I could do was shake my head and say that I didn't know. Then it hit me I didn't turn my phone on. Surprise my voice mail and messages was 98 total. Ashley our parents aunt's uncle's cousins friends. Damn I thought. Even James I thought F*** you so called friend. That is what I thought so I text him F*** you you so called friend you homewreacking black SOB. Then I blocked his number. I couldn't think straight. Ashley called as I was reading text. I answered it. What do you want you Big Black Cock Cheating Slut why don't you just go to your damn black homewreacking lover. I heard what sounded like the phone drop. Jack said Mike I got to go Ashley just passed out please talk to her please. By Jack I don't know that I can she has done our family wrong click. I just couldn't handle it I was afraid for the children so I loaded them up and went to my parents. I called them and asked if we could stay there for a while and they said yes. That night I think I just passed out myself. Dad and mom both told me that I needed to talk to Ashley. So I did. I knew that I needed help because I didn't even like myself. I started seeing a therapist. The first time I seen James I went at him like a mad bull. Even though he was 6 inches taller and 75 pounds heavier he didn't stand a chance. I figured I would end up in jail but I heard that he lie and said that he was drunk and fell down the stairs. Ashley also was see a therapist. Her parents begged me to get back together so did mine and family and friends. We did start going to the same therapist. Then we were there at the same time. Then eventually we did move back into the house but our parents seen to remodeling of the house and a new bedroom suite. We made it and I believe we will grow old together. James avoids us and I'm fine with that.”

I assume the paragraphs have been stripped out. But it gives me a headache.

Em

 

[Imstillfun]

I assume the paragraphs have been stripped out. But it gives me a headache.

Em

No paragraphs. Just that. I couldn’t read it either.

 

[EmilyMiller]

No paragraphs. Just that. I couldn’t read it either.

I think the comments text box strips them out.

 

[gordo12]

Another nice comment on Cheatify The Bitch:

Being a Neanderthal in dealing with technology I can only murmur..."Way to go, Man!"...and hope nobody turns that shit loose on me.
Fine writing. Keep doing it.
MLJ

 

[gordo12]

I think the comments text box strips them out.

Nope,,,,,,

 

[gordo12]

Lovely comment on Wheelchair Girl this morning:

Second time reading this one. Amazing story, rich emotions and and engaging storyline thats leaves just enough out to keep you thinking when it concludes.

I noticed no rating turned on but if it was I would be giving this a big five stars!

 

[onehitwanda]

I assume the paragraphs have been stripped out. But it gives me a headache.

Em

https://i.chzbgr.com/full/7863686400/h27ABAB89/bird-gang

What? It makes about as much sense!

 

[Kumquatqueen]

Someone has been reading through my Educating Laura series with various nice comments, though I suspect twice on ch.5 was a mistake!

"You handle dialogue so well - the accents and colloquialisms - almost as if this is drawn from personal experience.

The pace is good and the occasional reticence of the characters adds to the realism."

"As always, wonderful dialogue with context.
I'll be watching for more."

"There are so many good aspects again in this: dialogue, characters, small details that give depth to the narrative."

I think they liked the dialogue!

 

[gordo12]

Another nice (I think) comment on Cheatify The Bitch:
I'm pretty sure he meant "loved it," or maybe "lived it" was a Freudian slip

Lived it keep it up
JG

 

[Smuttyandfun]

I like this one, on my story, 'Milky Fun with Brigitte,' because he's saying what we've all said, or at least thought.

Loved it. Five stars, and I don't give those too freely. Anon needs to write his own story!

 

[gordo12]

Another comment on Cheatify The Bitch this morning:
I think he's happy!

WOOHOO!!!

 

[djrip]

I love LW comments. I’m mad you can’t respond in a timely manner anymore.

Is it just me or are the comments posting a lot faster the past couple of days? Past couple posted within the hour. I hope it's permanent!

 

[tenyari]

This one came in a few days back in my story How I Met My Naked Alien Girlfriend

Wow just out fucking standing, I absolutely love it I think it's probably the finest story I've ever read here on Literotica. In the last few years I started to write science fiction erotica myself. And I do make a distinction between pornography and erotica your work is most definitely erotica. None of my works are yet published but I hope to rectify that soon. Please keep up your work.

And this one as well:

Very good story. If a real alien culture comes to earth, I hope things work out like your story.

One of those by our favorite commentator, Anonymous. The other by a registered reader.

It would be nice if I could 'ping' someone who commented, like @username when I replied to their comment. I tried it but it didn't do anything. I try to respond to all the comments that are comprehendible (in years past, and on other sites people will sometimes just leave an emoji or a sex-remark).

I don't seem to get a lot of comments though, which drives me nuts. I'd be happy even to get some of the dumb or silly comments...

New story just came out, no comments or votes yet. It's a long read though, so I guess I'll have to wait for some people to actually finish it.

 

[tenyari]

I got this one on another site where my newest story, Jacaranda's Naked College Journey Ch. 01 (link is to here) appeared a few days sooner as they moderate after the fact there:
(Can I mention comments I got elsewhere as long as I don't link or name things?)

Tenyari, Thank you for the first section of what promises to be one of the best stories posted on the [... site name redacted...] this year. Not only does it take the well worn Blanke Schande theme to a wholly new division but develops your alien theme in an exciting way. It has inspired me to consider getting out and re-jigging my BSC story which stalled a couple of years ago. I am very much looking forward to the next episode. Well done [... name redacted...]

That site used to be very active in it's comments - some stories getting over a hundred as people used the comments like a forum - but has had almost no comments recently (regardless of the author).

But I'm glad somebody liked it.

 

[NoTalentHack]

Is it just me or are the comments posting a lot faster the past couple of days? Past couple posted within the hour. I hope it's permanent!

Yes. I’ve been seeing them trickle in every few hours even on old (well, old for me) stories for the last couple of days.

 

[tenyari]

Yes. I’ve been seeing them trickle in every few hours even on old (well, old for me) stories for the last couple of days.

Is that very recent?

One to two weeks ago when I was replying to all the comments on my last batch of stories I noticed my own reply comments in my story would take a day on average to show up.

 

[djrip]

Is that very recent?

One to two weeks ago when I was replying to all the comments on my last batch of stories I noticed my own reply comments in my story would take a day on average to show up.

Yes seems to have started yesterday.

 

[tenyari]

Today's comment was a message on another board:

Hey, I have a request for you. Would you be able to write a story based on my idea? Contains CMNF, female smoking cigarettes, tuxedo fetish, permanent female nudity. In my opinion it's very original idea.

Um... OK. But definitely NOT my thing.

This is actually the second time in recent months that I've gotten a very specific story request from a random person I'd never heard of before asking for a tuxedo related CMNF story. Both different usernames, so I presume different people.

ps: I actually find people in suits and tuxedos to be an extreme turn off. But it's an uncannily common theme in CMNF for the male to be dressed up. It just makes me think of dudes into human trafficking...