Create A Wrestler

[anty45]

the hardest part for me is how to get started in a fight espically since writing erotica is still a new field for me to write in

 

[lilguy]

getting naked and then insertion helps

but you can just have them brawl if you want

 

[anty45]

that the easy part but getting to the part is the trouble like does tanya knock jack down or what else my mind is a little blank on examples right now it was much more easier to get into things with Tanya Mcvan since they had weapons maybe i guess im saying is that the foreplay that comes with this wrestling at the beginning of the match is what im having trouble with

 

[lilguy]

well there a lot of bad girls in the league that not above usign weapons

guess a little trash talking, or they approach each other in the locker room to try to start shit with each other.

everyone got thier own style

 

[anty45]

no i mean it just how to start a match that i having trouble with example what moves that they start out with, stuff like what they first do when the bell ring type of thing

 

[lilguy]

some test of strengh always nice

or a low blow or two
trading blows.

maybe a few headlocks, or submission moves off the bat

 

[anty45]

thanks for the help ill try that i also think everyone is going to like what i got plan with his next match with Jessie it going be surprising. So does everyone have any ideas what the new men of this league should be like since Lisa will be hiring new wrestlers soon. and if anyone have any suggestions for my writing up for suggestions

 

[luffy316]

the fun part about setting up fights is that it's a pro wrestling league. if they aren't feuding with somebody, the management'll throw them against some random opponent.

I've found that I usually start a fight out by each character getting some light hits in. This was not done intentionally for a while, but it gives a quick idea of what the fighter's thinking or trying to do. Gives them a taste of their styles, and some trash talk at the character intros seems popular to provide some context on the characters' opinions of eachother ("I respect you but we have to fight," "You're another piece of shit in my way", "You're everything I'm against," "You killed my fathah!"). Think it also sets up for the "choose your own" factor, since anyone could turn the tides in either direction.


Or just have a clean sweep for somebody. Things usually are pretty cautious until somebody gets a hold or stuns their enemy long enough for a big move, by what I've seen.

 

[Cat_Tha_Cat]

It's like pro wrestling, or power rangers, or something like that, only with hot girls and (usually) sex instead of normal fighting. They start out by exchanging a few light moves, then turn up the intensity.

One of the best back and forth style matches the story has had so far was Amber vs Kitty, which started at http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/74163/

A good one sided match was Tara vs Dolly http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/82035/

And a good complete "squash" (squash is a pro wrestling term for when one person gets absolutely no offense in and gets destroyed by the opponent), Rochell Divine vs Hampton Sisters http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/82775/

 

[Cat_Tha_Cat]

SHort story. So I was gonna contribute yesterday, but while trying to get in the mood to write porn I watched some videos of Flavia Crisos, and didn't make it to the story. Which got me thinking why is it that all the girls with the best asses are Brazilians? Flavia, Anne Freitas, Larissa Reis... I know not everyone likes the fitness types but youtube Gracyanne Barbosa...

anyway, So that inspired me to create a new character. Brazilian fitness chick with the perfect lean ass, to fight with Big Booty with the perfect thick ass.

I wrote a couple threads and have some more in the works, maybe I'll write more tomorrow.

 

[luffy316]

quick opinion question for the sake of helping people out in terms of interest and feedback

1. one or two storylines, tournaments, or matches you want to see furthered or finished

2. two or three characters you want to see more action

 

[MysteriousRyu]

quick opinion question for the sake of helping people out in terms of interest and feedback

1. one or two storylines, tournaments, or matches you want to see furthered or finished

2. two or three characters you want to see more action

1. To be honest I'm surprised that I haven't found too many loose ends (I think you guys have been covering things great so far especially with today's additions). Since I'm a fan of the mixed fights lets go with You vs Lisa "Dollar Bill" Cole and then You vs Vicky Mistress of Pain.

2. I think so far everyone has been covered decently, so right now I have no definite answer on who actually needs more action. However I'd like to see more fights from Chichi (yes she's grown on me too), Doctor Humpalot, and I guess I'll go with Monica since she just won the Midcard belt.

 

[lilguy]

nice to see some readers talk and give feedback

I added a payperview story section to the first page of the story. Should open up idea


to answer luffy question


1) would like to see the wheel of destiny finish up. Or Aunt Beck vs Mama Luv showdown. I will probally finish up baroness story where she try to take over the leauge. either with her defeat or victory. Heck BOTH choices could be made.

2) Kim austin alway good. Be nice to give her the belt back. Her and the Dixie bitch. Havent got the cop character off the ground again.

 

[luffy316]

posted a page in the Japanese negotiations storyline with Tanya to be a place to test out her muscle. might be best to have them work on Tifa's fighters before facing against the main leaguers.

Or have them face epically talented Japanese equivalents. Either'd be interesting

 

[lilguy]

could do both

been xmas shopping and working late this week
dont know if I be adding with much frequency this week

 

[Cat_Tha_Cat]

so weirdly, I went to help out on the You vs Vicky thread that Ryu asked for, and instead it leads to a completed You vs Kim the Beauty Queen thread. Meh.

Any other You vs XXXX storylines anyone interested in?

 

[Cat_Tha_Cat]

I added a bit of new stuff tonight, too. A thread where Dr. Humpalot beat Tara, another bit of the Rochell/Yasmin/Sorority girls thread, and lead up to some more mixed fights for the Nameless Cowboy.

When I was writing Harvey for the Rochel/Yasmin story, I was trying to get his voice to sound like one of those mafia gorillas from the 20s and 30s.

 

[lilguy]

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/94154

found vicky

 

[lilguy]

so weirdly, I went to help out on the You vs Vicky thread that Ryu asked for, and instead it leads to a completed You vs Kim the Beauty Queen thread. Meh.

Any other You vs XXXX storylines anyone interested in?

wouldnt mind seeing mama luv or casey luv

maybe someone fighting Ann the Goth Girl, or Tess the sweedish chocalte queen

 

[MysteriousRyu]

This is the fight with Vicky I'm talking about:

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/33821/94154

You have to manually check the story map then scroll down to Vicky's section and it should have:
- Vicky- mistress of Pain
- mixed sex match belt
- you

 

[luffy316]

I added a bit of new stuff tonight, too. A thread where Dr. Humpalot beat Tara, another bit of the Rochell/Yasmin/Sorority girls thread, and lead up to some more mixed fights for the Nameless Cowboy.

When I was writing Harvey for the Rochel/Yasmin story, I was trying to get his voice to sound like one of those mafia gorillas from the 20s and 30s.

I actually pictured that for Harvey too. You'd mentioned him once wearing an outdated sort of wrestling singlet, and I love that voice/accent enough that I just stuck in the "Youse bums"/"You got it, boss" type too.

Also, about to add a storyline where Petty gets her big break and becomes a talented fighter. Working on a bad girl side for her too, as well as a Sheana/Kitty team up with a story behind it as well

 

[Cat_Tha_Cat]

didn't add much because I really can't afford to stay up a couple hours writing erotica tonight, but I did some tag stuff... added a thread to Loot & Plunder vs Dixie Bitches, and started a Hampton Sisters vs Melissa and Mighty Allison.

I've got sort of an idea to make the Hamptons non-jobbers again, or better yet set it so they can be both. The idea is that someone, maybe their mom or a nanny or something comes in to help them out. They also might be able to form a stable with the older rich & spoiled girls like Kim the Beauty Queen.

Also had an idea that maybe a male Luv who somehow got the female genes for being tough and strong instead of the male genes for being weak and wimpy would be interesting.

EDIT: Couldn't sleep, woke up, wrote more erotica. Started a storyline where Lisa McVan's stable tries to win all the titles.

Also found a Underage Chichi thread that got missed, might want to edit that to her Of Age bio.

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/66927/

 

[lilguy]

Soon

I will take some of the male creatores wrestles I created in a answer section

and just do a Bio for them. You could do the same for yours if you want.

 

[MysteriousRyu]

Love the latest updates, especially the part with chichi answering e-mails like Strong Bad (I so lol'd) and the idea for the human turnbuckle match. I might also start contributing to the story soon. I'll probably make a character today. I'm thinking of making him along the lines of a "Legend Killer" type but more of a neutral character instead of a heel, plus he lack some of the skill and experience to back his claims up (so in a way he learns as he goes along).

EDIT:
Okay made my character and set up all that good stuff (feel free to match him up with whoever you guys want).
Also added to the fight between Army Girl Cammy and Ales.

 

[Xorph]

Found another thread where Chichi is still under age:

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/90742