Credentials

[duckiesmut]

That sounds vicious and gruesome and oddly it appeals to me.

I'm a nice person. I'm a nice person. I'm a nice person...

'nice' is much too ordinary an adjective for you.

 

[Leviluv]

I have a little over 15 minutes to leave for work, and wanted to stop in to this ongoing soap opera, which I'm going to take myself out of. I shouldn't have come in the first place. I was appalled when I read the thread, and coming from another poetry site that is much more harsh than this, I couldn't believe it. But one thing people didn't do when reviewing or giving feedback was say "Your poem is crap." without a REAL explanation why. Actually, you couldn't even say those words. Maybe "I didn't like your poem because..." If someone were to do different, the site admin. would delete the comment. It was a strict site with people giving other poets constructive critiques, what they saw wrong with the poem, ect. without calling anyone names like third graders. The reason I left wasn't due from harsh critiques, but because I got too overwhelmed with the addiction OF the site. I know, I heard Literotica can be the same, but I'm gonna do my best to not let it happen.

Having a job, a family, and being addicted to a porn site or any site can tear your family and life apart. This, I won't let happen. I came close. Please don't ask the name of the other site. I'll tell you ahead of time, it bothers me that much! I miss so many people and...enough said.

After reading some emails from anonymous members saying "Don't let those two get to you. Post your poetry, we want you here." etc. AND reading Anna's funny comment here, I saw and felt the support, and want to thank you for making me feel welcome. I'll do just that. I will post my poetry. (Not that all care, but to those that do, thank you.)

I apologize for coming in and going off the way that I did. And I'm not saying that because I want a good rating on my work. I thought about this last night and while in the shower this morning, and realized it was crazy to get that worked up over two people who had nothing to do with me. It was from my experience on another site, where this one is very different.

So, I'll start over here, and put this behind me. It's not too hard for me to get over things. I'm pretty easy to get along with.

Erotic Tale, I will continue to read your work and comment like I did yesterday and I hope that we can forget about all this. You just shocked the hell out of me with your words to twelve ---- visa versa. I'm not here to make enemies, but I do have my opinions and will say when something feels wrong or when I did wrong. That's not hard to do.

Yea, so. Hello to all, I'm Levi. Lez be friends. You're probably saying This woman is insane. Right?

I have no time to look over my errors in what I wrote. There should be a spell checker here. Damn, I'm late!

 

[annaswirls]

That sounds vicious and gruesome and oddly it appeals to me.

I'm a nice person. I'm a nice person. I'm a nice person...

I think it was the phallic tower image...

mmm come on Eve, I will race you to the top of the giant cock while evil amazons try to beat us down....

 

[annaswirls]

I have a little over 15 minutes to leave for work, and wanted to stop in to this ongoing soap opera, which I'm going to take myself out of. I shouldn't have come in the first place. I was appalled when I read the thread, and coming from another poetry site that is much more harsh than this, I couldn't believe it. But one thing people didn't do when reviewing or giving feedback was say "Your poem is crap." without a REAL explanation why. Actually, you couldn't even say those words. Maybe "I didn't like your poem because..." If someone were to do different, the site admin. would delete the comment. It was a strict site with people giving other poets constructive critiques, what they saw wrong with the poem, ect. without calling anyone names like third graders. The reason I left wasn't due from harsh critiques, but because I got too overwhelmed with the addiction OF the site. I know, I heard Literotica can be the same, but I'm gonna do my best to not let it happen.

Having a job, a family, and being addicted to a porn site or any site can tear your family and life apart. This, I won't let happen. I came close. Please don't ask the name of the other site. I'll tell you ahead of time, it bothers me that much! I miss so many people and...enough said.

After reading some emails from anonymous members saying "Don't let those two get to you. Post your poetry, we want you here." etc. AND reading Anna's funny comment here, I saw and felt the support, and want to thank you for making me feel welcome. I'll do just that. I will post my poetry. (Not that all care, but to those that do, thank you.)

I apologize for coming in and going off the way that I did. And I'm not saying that because I want a good rating on my work. I thought about this last night and while in the shower this morning, and realized it was crazy to get that worked up over two people who had nothing to do with me. It was from my experience on another site, where this one is very different.

So, I'll start over here, and put this behind me. It's not too hard for me to get over things. I'm pretty easy to get along with. (My mother would kill me for ending a sentence with "with" LOL)

Erotic Tale, I will continue to read your work and comment like I did yesterday and I hope that we can forget about all this. You just shocked the hell out of me with your words to twelve ---- visa versa. I'm not here to make enemies, but I do have my opinions and will say when something feels wrong or when I did wrong. That's not hard to do.

Yea, so. Hello to all, I'm Levi. Lez be friends. You're probably saying This woman is insane. Right?

I have no time to look over my errors in what I wrote. There should be a spell checker here. Damn, I'm late!

ooh you are a woman! then you ABSOLUTELY must stay.

although I am a little disappointed at not being able to tickle you until you pee.

at least I got my spankin in today, thanks Jenn

*bump*

 

[Jennifer C]

ooh you are a woman! then you ABSOLUTELY must stay.

although I am a little disappointed at not being able to tickle you until you pee.

at least I got my spankin in today, thanks Jenn

*bump*

lmao!

Oh it was my pleasure anna

Glad you have decided to stay Levi, Lit is primarily about fun and learning, I hope you experience both...

 

[LeBroz]

I have a little over 15 minutes to leave for work, and wanted to stop in to this ongoing soap opera, which I'm going to take myself out of. I shouldn't have come in the first place. I was appalled when I read the thread, and coming from another poetry site that is much more harsh than this, I couldn't believe it. But one thing people didn't do when reviewing or giving feedback was say "Your poem is crap." without a REAL explanation why. Actually, you couldn't even say those words. Maybe "I didn't like your poem because..." If someone were to do different, the site admin. would delete the comment. It was a strict site with people giving other poets constructive critiques, what they saw wrong with the poem, ect. without calling anyone names like third graders. The reason I left wasn't due from harsh critiques, but because I got too overwhelmed with the addiction OF the site. I know, I heard Literotica can be the same, but I'm gonna do my best to not let it happen.

Having a job, a family, and being addicted to a porn site or any site can tear your family and life apart. This, I won't let happen. I came close. Please don't ask the name of the other site. I'll tell you ahead of time, it bothers me that much! I miss so many people and...enough said.

After reading some emails from anonymous members saying "Don't let those two get to you. Post your poetry, we want you here." etc. AND reading Anna's funny comment here, I saw and felt the support, and want to thank you for making me feel welcome. I'll do just that. I will post my poetry. (Not that all care, but to those that do, thank you.)

I apologize for coming in and going off the way that I did. And I'm not saying that because I want a good rating on my work. I thought about this last night and while in the shower this morning, and realized it was crazy to get that worked up over two people who had nothing to do with me. It was from my experience on another site, where this one is very different.

So, I'll start over here, and put this behind me. It's not too hard for me to get over things. I'm pretty easy to get along with. (My mother would kill me for ending a sentence with "with" LOL)

Erotic Tale, I will continue to read your work and comment like I did yesterday and I hope that we can forget about all this. You just shocked the hell out of me with your words to twelve ---- visa versa. I'm not here to make enemies, but I do have my opinions and will say when something feels wrong or when I did wrong. That's not hard to do.

Yea, so. Hello to all, I'm Levi. Lez be friends. You're probably saying This woman is insane. Right?

I have no time to look over my errors in what I wrote. There should be a spell checker here. Damn, I'm late!

Thank you Levi ~ if my notes to you sounded of desperation - they were. You bring an air of civility - you were so tactful in your critique and didn't put me in defensive mode. And I try the same approach.

So I'm glad you'll put up with us and stay. Now excuse me while I breath a huge sigh of relief.

 

[WickedEve]

I think it was the phallic tower image...

mmm come on Eve, I will race you to the top of the giant cock while evil amazons try to beat us down....

Don't tempt me with a post like this. I behave myself now. I really do.

I do have a question, though. If it's a giant cock, then does it matter who gets to the top first? I mean, there has to be enough to go around, unless one of us is a greedy whore--or both of us.

 

[annaswirls]

Don't tempt me with a post like this. I behave myself now. I really do.

I do have a question, though. If it's a giant cock, then does it matter who gets to the top first? I mean, there has to be enough to go around, unless one of us is a greedy whore--or both of us.

I think you know the answer to that

while you were typing I was riding the rim

I think the best part will be the slip and slide on the way down

oh! the veiny ridges!
how they tickle and mmmm!

 

[bogusbrig]

Don't tempt me with a post like this. I behave myself now. I really do.

I do have a question, though. If it's a giant cock, then does it matter who gets to the top first? I mean, there has to be enough to go around, unless one of us is a greedy whore--or both of us.

Damn. This post is too tempting not to put crude member into the fray.

Before attempting such ambitious climbs, for the sake of health and safety, it is good practice to climb minor summits first. I'm ready, waiting and willing to sacrifice myself to the ambitions of you two ladies.

Now, who's first?

 

[annaswirls]

Damn. This post is too tempting not to put crude member into the fray.

Before attempting such ambitious climbs, for the sake of health and safety, it is good practice to climb minor summits first. I'm ready, waiting and willing to sacrifice myself to the ambitions of you two ladies.

Now, who's first?

are you gonna wear a giant cock suit?

I mean we already know how to climb up a man sized cock surely you must know this

unless you are a race horse OR you have one of those incredible shrinking machines and plan to zap us down to size, tie yarn around our waists and hang us, swinging from your erect member with claws extended

eh hem

antpantpant:

 

[WickedEve]

Damn. This post is too tempting not to put crude member into the fray.

Before attempting such ambitious climbs, for the sake of health and safety, it is good practice to climb minor summits first. I'm ready, waiting and willing to sacrifice myself to the ambitions of you two ladies.

Now, who's first?

See? This is how nonsense gets started on the board. I'm being nice. Anna comes along with some smut. I'm tempted. Next thing you know, someone is willing to sacrifice himself and a dancing banana. This is such a sick forum.

 

[annaswirls]

See? This is how nonsense gets started on the board. I'm being nice. Anna comes along with some smut. I'm tempted. Next thing you know, someone is willing to sacrifice himself and a dancing banana. This is such a sick forum.

damn you're hot when you are in the scolding mode
and pretty convincing considering you are so tiny

 

[WickedEve]

damn you're hot when you are in the scolding mode
and pretty convincing considering you are so tiny

tiny? compared to what?! a giant cock?

 

[annaswirls]

okay I made it a poem

tiny? compared to what?! a giant cock?

no no no
I think we have been shrunken down
human cock seems giant.
I mean, training for the tower I guess
kind of like astronauts under water

hold your breath

 

[WickedEve]

no no no
I think we have been shrunken down
human cock seems giant.
I mean, training for the tower I guess
kind of like astronauts under water

hold your breath

You know how many guys would love shrunken women?
"Hey, baby, now I bet it looks big to you, doesn't it? Huh? Doesn't it!"

 

[annaswirls]

You know how many guys would love shrunken women?
"Hey, baby, now I bet it looks big to you, doesn't it? Huh? Doesn't it!"

yeah among other fun tricks
good lord it is almost noon
I need to buy milk
will be distracted by every zipper
imagining my teeny self hanging
from the metal pull tab

wheeee! all the way down

 

[annaswirls]

oh and do you love how old Bored BB gives himself so freely for practice and then disappears? we will never finish our training at this point.

I will pick up some produce at the store,
and a cigarette. Just in case.

 

[WickedEve]

oh and do you love how old Bored BB gives himself so freely for practice and then disappears? we will never finish our training at this point.

I will pick up some produce at the store,
and a cigarette. Just in case.

I'm on my way out to ship a Punu to MD.
I already have a little woman poem in my head.

 

[annaswirls]

I'm on my way out to ship a Punu to MD.
I already have a little woman poem in my head.

I already have a poem in my head about your little women poems
that you have in your head



she carries little women poems in her head...

 

[WickedEve]

I already have a poem in my head about your little women poems
that you have in your head



she carries little women poems in her head...

your little women poem about my little women poems in my head will be better than my little women poem that's in my head.

 

[annaswirls]

your little women poem about my little women poems in my head will be better than my little women poem that's in my head.

oh yeah?
is that a challenge for who can write the worst poem?

 

[WickedEve]

oh yeah?
is that a challenge for who can write the worst poem?

challenge? as soon as I catch my breath, I'll let you know. Just finished my walk and for some reason it's getting harder to haul the butt up the hill. I think the butt's the same size. The hill got higher. I'm sure that's it.

 

[bogusbrig]

oh and do you love how old Bored BB gives himself so freely for practice and then disappears? we will never finish our training at this point.

I will pick up some produce at the store,
and a cigarette. Just in case.

I'm back with my banana full of existential angst ( I learnt that phrase as a teenager and it has always sounded absurd, even then.). Still, to the Fray.

Aaaaaaaannaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Wiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiickeeeeeeeeeeeeeed!

I'm waaaaaaaaaaaaaaiting!

I guess I should really go and write a poem instead.

*sulks off dejectedly*

 

[bluerains]

sometimes

I've been here for four years, and I can tell you that you really can learn here. At least, I have. Since I recently "left" and now that I spend more time reading posts than replying to them, it's given me an opportunity to learn more--even be more objective about what's going on.

just as an observer,, we can see the truth about many things...without attaching to the illusion..one can really choose...what is real for them...thats growth...

 

[My Erotic Tale]

nope
not the backslapping etc, that is just annoying

the ranting that makes no sense
the false accusations
the continual bumping of threads that have nothing to do with poetry just one line love you babe look at my pussy god dont you just want to smack this fine ass kind of posts, which is fine as an appetizer or desert but bump after bump of it good god wtf it is not meant to be the main course around here

you know

and that is what loses the BASE of people here, and without a steady, intelligent, talented base there is no reason for people who are wanting to be poets to stay

When I came here, I remember telling my husband-- there are REAL POETS there! And they have fun too!

THAT is what made me stay, and if someone who was established here with their multiple threads and illusionary authority said to me in one way or another
oh you poor baby let me nurse your wounds made by those mean mean people, well maybe I would have taken the victim stance too and eventually went crying to my mother.... or stayed here and focused on my pussy (or maybe just a model's pussy) instead of my poetry too. That is the culture that is being established.

You dissolve that BASE, the base of poets who know what the hell they are doing, then the whole structure falls down.


I think everyone has a right to be here. I did not like the Special Olympics comment. Sorry Jim, I am sensitive about that one however it was meant.


The issue here is that people who MAKE SENSE are run down with faulty logic, false accusations, whining, etc. And new people who come in see that the whining the whimpering, the backslapping kiss ass continual muah let me hump your leg are the STANDARD not the side dish, then who with any desire to improve would want to stay?

I stayed because of the talent here. The rest is icing.


Stop letting the icing rule the fucking cake.

also

Originally Posted by My Erotic Tale
Tess

I can only say that over the past year and a half
what has ruined this forum or run poets off the most
has been harsh criticism <facts>
and when anything is said about it
it is said, they were "thin skinned!"
I think we had five this year
that survived the gauntlet of badgering critics.


you can not say it was because a
'back slapping' red neck writes zen poetry

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The issues;

I am willing to discuss issues,,,
four were brought to my attention that seems to piss people off <rolls eyes>

this is one of the slowest moving forums here, I post every evening and so do others. The threads most active stay active. I will state I did not have a problem 'one' till I got my new computer and write twice as fast and I enjoy MY threads. Rarely bothering others on theres unless a feud is sprout. This thread has gone through what I see here now. A page full of PLAY and no removals, yet I post and get removed till I say it right and they except it. When was free speech ruled out? When the new MOD took over.

reform, some are trying to eliminate fun from an amateur literary entertainment site. Take a quick look at the general board and then tell me we have a problem here. Take the 60 dollar work shop clas if your that much wanting total focus in poems. Geez, next you'll be charging for these disections. I would like a indepth article as to why people feel the need to do this?

The main reason I am not liked I am told;

1) is because I do not wish to better my poetry. or no respect for the English language?

(well who said this? Where did this come from, certainly not me. I have said many times that we all want to improve. (this is a thought from a mind trying to figure out why I do not follow their lead?) I have learned from Du Lac (Lit Major) teaches me <ask her> and LeBroz <an excellent online personality with more credentials than I can mention.> (Two out of the five that have stated they have proper literary credentials <grin> I have stated I have learned from wicked. So why do you say I do not want to learn PROPER poetry?) I have several comments from the oblong that my poetry is improving (how did that happen?)

I do not ask the other eliptic poets and that pisses them off? I don't conform to your style <guess what my poems about> I don't let those critics rearrange my writes? I read a lot of the critic threads to see what is said about what and I see way to much confusion and ego strokers and I can MAKE A LIST as I have before, (another dead poet thread) of those who came saw and ran like hell. So I do not COTTON to people who talk arrogant or pompous and or does nothing but rewrites others stuff but does not write them self. My main bitch with YDD

I learn all the time from qualified scholastic credentials so why should I listen to a man who said my poem is crap when I was told is was OKAY.

2) another reason I am not liked, I comment on critics comments. You read all the comments I have commented on and the majority of them will show I only question those critics that seem to have a <lack of a better word> pompous attitude and commented with a slight rudeness, simple <character flawed> I try and cushion the blow that critics hammer and leave harsh comments on new poets. Hoping to encourage them to stay and tough it out and they will learn as well as enjoy this forum with all. Not just me and my corner of this board. When I meet a new poet they usually ask, "How did you get where you are in poetry" I most of the time will reply, "I watched, read, listened and applied from what I have learned HERE AT LITEROTICA" all of you can take that bow!

bottom line is, a person leaves a comment are they not allowed to respond with a comment? Why not? If a person like anti muse runs around downing people, I for one...will ask him why?

3) last but not least, If 1201 and I debate, why do so many feel the need to spat a verbal assault as well (a free for all yelling match) for some smart folk some ain't so smart) to allow the two to work out the difference with out others spilling their hatred and egos as well as joining the bashing scene. Ask Ninja <temple> or Du or RF ...the first thing I ask, let me deal with it, please stay out of it, it will make it worse. I ask folk from my friends to not join in, while most of the elders jump in and hurl their intelligence. <grin> of course when a tiger is in the chicken coop all the chickens squawk. <I know this> That is how it grows and blows out of proportion.

so bottom line, those who do not find favor with me for what ever reason. I am not a monster <grin> I am a tiger that roars when my tale is pulled. I intend to learn and grow and I am currently sitting here, with my first published book in my hands, that is not bad for a red neck with no literary credentials.

Does being published give me credentials or his that accomplished?

I admit, I am excited over something so small, but it is my first time and now my novel is mentioned in this publication to come out December (A CHAPTER IS THE LAST STORY IN THIS ANTHOLOGY (Crop Circles chapter 6 of ...<grin> Portal to the Vixen Planet and other erotic stories" by ME

I don't know about you, but I is a gonna go lern me some mo poetry.

Art~