"Did it hurt the first time?"

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I have dabbled in BDSM lite, but would love to see what a more experienced bdsm player/writer could do with the above line/title.

The idea is that a shy newbie to bdsm is discussing it with her more experienced pal, the one trying to recruit her... that's all i've got so far.

 

[Carnevil9]

I would turn this into a switcheroo type of plot:

The newbie is asking the experienced veteran friend a lot of questions, and feigns not understanding the explanations. The veteran must get more and more detailed in her explanations, and eventually begins demonstrating with ropes restraints, etc., using her own body as a visual aid.

Unbeknownst to the veteran, the newbie is manipulating her into the very bonds she is trying to explain. In the end, the veteran realizes that the alleged newbie has taken her prisoner, and ends up being tortured beyond any level that she has ever inflicted upon anyone else. Eventually, of course, she realizes that she loves it, and was actually destined to be a sub all along. She just didn't realize it until now.

The reader would be kept in the dark at first, but would gradually realize the diabolical plot of the newbie, pretty much in parallel with the veteran victim.

This could work with any combination of genders, I suppose, but I assumed two women since that is what the OP seemed to imply.

 

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you truly ARE evil carney

 

[Carnevil9]

Thank you!

 

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I have dabbled in BDSM lite, but would love to see what a more experienced bdsm player/writer could do with the above line/title.

The idea is that a shy newbie to bdsm is discussing it with her more experienced pal, the one trying to recruit her... that's all i've got so far.

you could find that on the GB...lol.

 

[jonas6987]

Its a good story keep going man. I like your thought that to keep the readers in the dark at first, but would gradually realize the diabolical plot of the newbie.Great!






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you could find that on the GB...lol.

oh, I don't EVER go GB... nope...not going THERE...

 

[ms.read]

oh, I don't EVER go GB... nope...not going THERE...

hah! just saying... I went there once...and it hurt...my eyes! I stay here in the author's hangout, or the story inspiration board...

 

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hah! just saying... I went there once...and it hurt...my eyes! I stay here in the author's hangout, or the story inspiration board...

its the brain rot ya gotta watch for