Editor Wanted - Enema Prep (No Scat)

[NCostello]

I'm writing a first-person story about a guy who lives next to two sisters. He's asked to help one of them get prepped and 'stretched' for an enema.

The enema is actually secondary to the anal-play and 'stretching'. No scat. The chapter will end when the bathroom door closes, and his neighbor is ready to do her business.

I would appreciate someone who is experienced in giving enemas to primarily check and verify that the actual enema part of my story is 'accurate'... (*or as accurate as an erotic fiction story could be LOL*), as well as grammar/spelling/story flow.

Credit will be given. Note: anyone who asks for financial compensation will be reported!

No anal-sex (yet).

Thanks

 

[seeksDaddy]

Just curious, what's the purpose of the 'stretching'? I ask because if I was going to be stretched, I think I'd prefer the enema first, then stretching after being cleaned out. Now if the enema nozzle was particularly large, then I could see having some stretching take place prior to the enema.

 

[NCostello]

In some ways, the enema itself may be a plot device for anal-play and stretching. Like many stories on Literotica, there is some suspension of disbelief.

(Yes, the neighbor's back door is very small; the enema nozzle is too large (something that will be explored in the future).

 

[seeksDaddy]

That makes sense, thank you for the explanation.

If you're still looking for an editor, I'd be willing to help. Couple of disclaimers: I've never edited a story here before. Also, I've received far more enemas than I've given, but I'm pretty sure I'd be able to tell you if there are enema-related inaccuracies. I can hold my own with grammar/punctuation/etc.