Exit To Eden

Citizen Maya

“Maya, what do you need, now?”

I struggled to relax my heavy breathing. The serving girl had so aroused me I didn't know if I could stop myself from just launching myself at Coal's feet and sucking him off.

Finally, the burning desire centered between my thighs forced me to answer. "I need you, Mas...Coal. I need to feel you thrusting into me. I need your hard cock."

My eyes were glazed with lust and I was afraid that I had overstepped my bounds, but I was too much in need to try to lie to him.
 
Col. Sir Colin “Coal” McClarin (ret), KG

“Citizen, I have been willing to overlook your past transgressions, but now you go too far. You want to be fucked do you? This is a place that can accommodate your desire.”

I signaled to the head trainer, “How many male citizens do you have unattached right now?”

“Ten, sir.” She responded.

“My pet thinks that she needs to fucked, and I am not inclined to do the honors right now. See what you can arrange. She must be fully sated so that she can concentrate on my pleasure, but unharmed.”

“I see.” She grined.
 
Citizen Maya

I listened as Coal ordered the ten men to completely satisfy me so that I might better attend to his needs.

Without waiting for direction, the first three immediately grabbed me by the arms and sat me on the table in front of Coal. One lowered his mouth to my nipples while another began to lick and suck my clit and the third gave me his cock to suck. In moments, the two had begun to press their cocks into my pussy and ass, giving Coal the sight of his slave completely filled with cock.

I came explosively as the slave in my pussy groaned and shot his load, followed quickly by the one in my ass. I was able to take a deep breath and then I was swallowing the creamy white spunk of the slave buried in my throat.

The three were quickly replaced as my eyes began to glaze over with lust.
 
Citizen Jim

Mistress Rynan led us to the dining room. As I followed behind my eyes followed the way her body moved sensuously beneath the thin gown, the firm haunches, the sensuous sway of her hips enticed me almost beyond control.

Finding an empty table the Mistress sat while Citizen Rick and I brought food and wine. I was distracted momentarily by a commotion across the room, where a large number of male citizens were servicing an almost naked female. My balls ached with the thought of sweet release, then realising that my mistress might be angered by my distraction I quickly offered her a tempting morcel, placing it between her ruby lips.
 
Col. Sir Colin “Coal” McClarin (ret), KG

My God! Maya was the most beautiful creature that I ever imagined, on display in the large room. She had every orifice stretched and then stuffed with throbbing hard cock. The guys took a little while to develop a rhythm, but they began to move together, fucking my pet in all of her holes as one, making her experience it as a single mating, just in three places. They released their climaxes into her in sequence so that she felt them in one impossibly long shuddering event. Three more men took their places, and Maya started coming in waves, mounting higher and higher until she was having a single long organism. She became focused on her tightly filled holes to the exclusion of everything else. This group climaxed at greater intervals, allowing them to drop out and be replaced smoothly, so that Maya was always full of cock. She continued in almost a grand mal seizure, ashen of sweet turning the sheer fabric transparent. It did not look like the last salve would be able to fuck her before she lost it completely, so I told him to fuck the slave that was in her ass. Scooping up some butter, he greased his cock, and began slamming into the butt of the man, pushing the rhythm to more and more violent excesses. They all came together, and Maya passed out.

Selecting two of the first group of slaves, I had them carry her back to my rooms, and lay her in the bath. I gently cleaned her and she eventually awakened.
 
Citizen Maya

It was just too much. I couldn't keep cumming and cumming - stuffed full of cock in every orifice - without something giving. I remember Coal's face, his eyes bright with lust, then nothing.

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I woke some time later, in Coal's bath as he gently washed the sticky white film that covered my body.

"Thank you Mast...um, Coal," I said groggily. I tried to sit up as quickly as I could, but my head started to spin and Coal pushed me back down. I sat up more slowly the next time and felt less like passing out again.

"Please, Coal," I said in a stronger voice, "join me in the bath and let me wash you."

He looked at me for a long moment, then stepped back to undress. While he did so, I drained the water, then refilled it and turned on the spa.
 
Col. Sir Colin “Coal” McClarin (ret), KG

Countess DeWinter said:


"Thank you Mast...um, Coal," I said groggily. I tried to sit up as quickly as I could, but my head started to spin and Coal pushed me back down. I sat up more slowly the next time and felt less like passing out again.

"Please, Coal," I said in a stronger voice, "join me in the bath and let me wash you."


I hung up my jacket and kilt, and threw every thing else into the hamper. When I returned she was adjusting the spa jets and adding some oil to the water. I settled behind herpout legs outside of hers. reaching up I cupped her breasts and brought her back to my embrace. We snugled in the swrilling scented water, content for the moment.

It felt so very good to simply be at ease with some one, to be taking care of some one again. We luxuraited in the relaxing water for a few minutes, resting, soaking up the caring presence of the other.

Gradually, her nipples came of life, stiffining against the palms of my hands. she brought her small hands up over mine pulling them into her soft breasts, huging me and herself at the same time. Almost against my will my cock began to grow, she pushed her sweet ass against it, flexing her butt to encourage it to get harder. Maya twisted in my arms and kissed me, "Coal, fuck me now, please?"

I could see the bruises arround her pussy, with its swollen inflamed tissues. "Are you sure? You must hurt a lot."

"I'm sore but I need some gentle loving from you. Please?"

I scooped her out of the bath and took her in to the bed dripping wet.

[Edited by Samuari on 03-16-2001 at 02:50 AM]
 
Citizen Maya

My pussy was quite sore, but I hungered for my new master as I hadn't wanted anything in such a long time!

He scooped me up in his arms and carried me, dripping wet, to the bed. I felt so safe and secure in his arms. I shook my head and tried to get rid of the feelings and thoughs that were budding, but they wouldn't go away.

I opened my arms to Coal and he allowed me to wrap my arms around him as he lay beside me...his warmth pressed close to me. His hands found my tender and sensitive nipples and gently teased them to life. I nuzzled my lips to his ear and whispered to him how much I wanted to please him.

Gently, he raised himself over me as I opened my thighs for him. Just as I expected to feel his cock sliding inside me, he began to kiss my breasts. His lips kissed a wet path down my belly until he was licking and kissing at my inflamed tissues...both soothing them and making them ache for him.
 
Lily

I bit my lip in frustration, unsure of what it was that I really wanted out of all this.

"I don't want to go to that extreme...I think I just need some pointers. I need to learn how to stay in control..." I looked down feeling ashamed, and hoped that I wasn't the first guest ever to have difficulties dealing with issues like these.

Cassie smiled softly and called to her slave as she said compassionately to me, "Please, stay...watch and learn...BOTH of you, what the relationship between a master and slave should be like."
 
Col. Sir Colin “Coal” McClarin (ret), KG

I dried Maya’s body by licking the bath water from it gently trying to ease her into a more restful state. But everything that I did had the opposite effect. She murmured, “Please Coal, fuck me. I need you, you, you. You first, and you, last.” I licked and kissed a trail back down her bruised and inflamed but still lovely body ‘till I found her pussy. It was so red and the lips still looked dry, parched from the workout that they had been given. I tried to lick the petals open, but they were swollen shut, sealed from the gentle invasion. Having had enough pain for a lifetime, I would not be the cause of anyone else’s. Yet to not fuck her would seem a rejection that would be the cruelest form of mental punishment, and I wanted her, badly.

I reached for my shaving kit to get the vial of Vitamin E oil that I kept there, and began to massage the healing fluid into her lips. The oil disappeared into the tissues drawing the medicine with it. I kept adding more until she could absorb no more. The angry red soothed to a more normal pink, and while still swollen, I was able to work my fingers past her outer lips, opening them to begin the same process on the inner ones. She jumped when I touched her clitoris, moaning softly, trying to control herself; so I poured the oil directly on to the irritated organ, and watched as it worked its magic, taking the heat and soreness away. Finally, I was able to get a finger and then two into her love cannel and feel some of her natural moistness begin to return.
 
Citizen David


I approached Mistress Cassie when she beckoned me and - resisting the urge to tear her clothes off - gently removed them. My fingers traced lightly over her shoulders, moving down her arms, bringing with them the material hiding her luscious body from my view. I let her dress slide down to the floor. My lips softly caressed her neck just below her ear.
Then I moved around and knelt in front of her, my gaze traveling down her body.
With my eyes looking straight forward to where her legs met, I asked seductively, "How may I please you, Mistress?"
 
Citizen Maya

My body felt battered, but the hunger was still there. I had not been satisfied in my soul and only one thing would fix that.

“Please Coal, fuck me. I need you, you, you. You first, and you, last.”

He licked and kissed at my inflamed tissues, finally soothing them with some sort of oil which made me feel silky and wonderful. I could tell when my body began to fully respond as Coal gently slid two fingers deep inside me. I cried out with the intense feeling, begging for more of his touch.

Finally, he rose up above me, his cock a granite rod pressing against my most intimate spot. My hands clutched at his broad chest and strong shoulders while my legs wrapped around his waist in an erotic embrace.

"Let me love you," I begged in a whisper which barely reached my own ears. I half hoped he hadn't heard me. It was usually better to keep my Masters at arm's length...but I was having a hard time keeping that rule with this Master.
 
OOC: Congratulations, Samuari, on Best Fetish 2000 and to Countess, on nomination for Best Romance 2000!

[Edited by jberniercon on 03-17-2001 at 07:07 PM]
 
OOC

Thanks, the voters were very kind. and to thank that I allmost had Laurel move it to another catagory...I think that this was an example of the concept of the story winning over the execution, because it has so many flaws.
 
Mistress Rynan

I sucked Citizen Jims finger as he fed the fruit to me. He nearly sighed with the pleasure of it. I then found the ass of my other citizen and spanked him soundly for not thinking of it first.
"Citizen Jim, today is your lucky day. I will allow you today to take the role of Guest for one hour. You are free to do what you want. If that includes pleasing me, then feel free. For one hour you may do as you like. So what shall it be? What would you like to do?"
 
Citizen Rick

My mistress suddenly swatted my exposed ass, and i couldn't help but to exclaim "Ow, that hurt." "You need to be more on top of things, slave," she reprimanded. "I'm sorry mistress," I whimpered. She smiled wickedly, and shaking her head she said "You certainly do have a lot of learning to do. Perhaps we shall begin with teaching you how to take your punishment more obediently." She then ordered me to close my eyes and I braced myself for my punishment.
 
thanks

OOC: it sounds cliche, but it really was an honor! The writers on this site are simply the best and I count myself lucky to be among their number.
 
Col. Sir Colin “Coal” McClarin (ret), KG

“Let me love you.” Maya whispered so softly I almost missed it. It played at the edge of perception, where I could ignore it if I chose. I needed to think about what I wanted before I went down that road. This person had moved deeper into my psyche then I had allowed anyone in years; and she had done it in hours. I couldn’t think about that now, she needed something else from me.

As gently as I could, I slipped into her poor bruised cunt. She thrust up at me with surprising strength, her interior muscles gripping me, proving her need. As we rapidly moved into the steps of that ancient dance, she hooked her arms under mine, pulling me down on to her. She ground her crouch into me bring me up to her level of need, pushing me along not making love, just animalistic fucking. Using the other’s body to satisfy, fill the aching void that we each felt. Far quicker than I really wanted, she stiffened as she was caught in the grips of her final orgasm of the night, pulling me with her as I released my seed into her. Exhausted, I leaned down and gently kissed her and moved to her side.

“Let me love you.” Did she say it again? Or did I just hear it?
 
Citizen Jim

“ Thank you , Mistress” I said, not believing my luck. “If you’ve finished your meal I would be honored if you would join me for a walk on the beach.”

The evening air was still warm, and as we strolled through the twilight a light breeze fluttered Rynan’s dress against her, revealing the shapely form beneath. We sat down on a quiet stretch of sand; the only noise was the sound of the surf and an the occasional cry of a gull. I sat close, then put my arm around her, and kissed her lips for the first time. She tasted sweet, and her body melted into my arms.

My lips caressed her neck, and I felt her skin tingle. My hand was gently massaging her breast through her dress, bringing the nipple to diamond hardness through the fabric. She moaned quietly and clutched my body. She made no attempt to stop me as I lifted the thin straps of her dress from her shoulders and peeled the dress to her waist.

I cupped her breasts in my hands, admiring them. I began gently massaging, then roughly squeezing, gauging her reactions, strumming the pulsing nipples with my
thumbs all the while. With my lips I nibbled Rynan’s ear, then her neck, and then I kissed my way across her heaving chest to her nipples. I flicked my tongue over the dark aureolae, and she quivered, whimpering slightly. She gasped as I flicked my tongue over her nipple again and again.

“Rynan, for the next hour please call me Jim. And now I’m going to have to make you scream it so you don’t ever forget my name when I go back to being a Citizen.”

She clawed at my back, and then pushed me down onto the sand. Straddling me she ground her pussy down into the bulge in my shorts. She leaned down to kiss me, dragging her nipples across my chest. Then pulling back she dangled each of her nipples for me to suck.

She then returned the favor, kissing and licking at my nipples. I growled,
“Rynan,” twining my fingers in her hair, holding her there as she bit my nipple harder.

Her kisses moved lower, across my belly, and her hands began to work on my shorts.
 
Citizen Maya

I felt completely spent, drained of my very essence as Coal finally lay down beside me, kissing me gently.

Those words found life again and I breathed out "Let me love you," so softly even I barely heard it.

He was so gentle with me. I found myself opening to him so readily. Occasionally, I was assigned to a Master or Mistress who was truely repellant. I even faked orgasm on occasion so they wouldn't feel bad. I didn't have to that with Coal. In fact, I had to work to delay them, he had such control over my body. I found myself wanting to share myself with him in ways I never did. I even toyed with telling him my real name.

Using every scrap of strength I could muster, I got up and turned the lights off. I set everything to rights in the room for the night, then knelt beside the bed, looking up at Coal.

"Good night, my wonderful Master Coal, I shall be right here beside the bed if you should need me for any reason." I fluffed the large pillows that were there for me to make my bed with then curled up on the floor, wishing that the big pillow I snuggled was his warm body.
 
Col. Sir Colin “Coal” McClarin (ret), KG

“Oh no, you don’t. If you can use my bed for sex, you can certainly sleep in it; besides its cold in here without you. I want to have you in my arms, and my name is Coal.”

“Master, is this a good idea? I’m not uncomfortable, really. I have a role, and I know what it is. Let me play it.”

“I’m not going to argue with you. Get your ass up here. Its cold.”

Maya smiled as she climbed into bed, and kissed me. “Thank you.” She said as she snuggled into my arms, spooning to fit the curve of my body. It felt right.

I slept without dreaming for the first time in forever.
 
Mistress Rynan

I pulled his shorts down just far enough to expose his beautiful cock. I looked up at him through smoldering eyes. He moaned my name again and it did something to me. I enclosed his cock in my warm hand and kissed the head. I opened my lips and slid his cock into my mouth and out again several times. The last time out I licked his pole like a lollipop from bottom to top and then flicked my tongue over the sensitive underside. His stomach jumped and then tensed. His hand slid down into my hair urging me on. I wrapped both hands around Jim’s cock, fingers entwined as if I was praying and then began to pulse just beneath the head of his cock. His back arched at the pleasure of it.
“Close your eyes.” I whispered up to him and watched as his eyes closed completely.

I stood up and walked down to the edge of the water, completely stripping the dress off. The water lapped at my ankles and I stood there in all my glory waiting for him to finally open his eyes and realize I wasn’t there anymore.
When he did he looked around confused but then spotted me.

“Jim, come to me.” I lifted my voice so it would carry to him.
My hair blew around to frame my face and my eyes were intense with the primal feeling I felt in just that moment.

He walked to me shedding his shorts, and exposing his cock standing ready for attention. “You just can’t let go of being in control can you?”

Suddenly my eyes clouded over. He’d hit too close to home. “I don’t know how to be any other way.”
Jim’s hand came up to caress my face and I stepped back slightly. “I don’t always want to be in control. But being out of control…”

“Requires trust.” Jim finished for me. He reached up to caress my cheek again and I allowed it. He slid his hand around to cup the nape of my neck pulling me to him. Leaning down he whispered close to my ear. “Allow your heart to open to me and you will find that I will not betray your trust Rynan. I swear it.”

Wanting to believe him even for the moment I wrapped my arms around his neck and he lifted me easily into his arms. We were face to face, my legs wrapped around him crossing at his lower back as if I were a child and he held me just beneath my butt. Every now and then I swear his fingers purposely brushed against the lips of my pussy, as he carried me into the water.
 
Citizen Maya

The heat from Coal's body had heated mine to the heights of passion earlier. Now, he warmed my soul.

I snuggled tightly to his body, molding mine to fit his. The night passed in blissful slumber and I woke to the sun streaming into the windows. Gently easing out of bed, I quickly fixed my hair and face, then ordered breakfast for Coal. I wasn't completely sure what he would like, so I ordered a little of everything.

I was putting on the last touches on my appearance - donning a short sheer white robe over a simple satin thong - when the food arrived. The noise stirred Coal and he sat up in bed as I wheeled the cart into the bedroom.

"Breakfast in bed, my sweet Coal," I teased. "May I feed you?"

Lifting the lids on the various dishes, I let him choose what he wanted, then fed him his choiced with my fingers.
 
Col. Sir Colin “Coal” McClarin (ret), KG

“Breakfast in bed my sweet Coal. May I feed you?”

Maya was radiant. She seemed to glow with contentment. She wheeled in a serving cart laden with delicacies. I watched her chest muscles flex under her breasts as came closer to the bed. I scooted over to the edge of the big bed, and brought myself up a sitting position.

“ I’m famished,” I said reaching for her erect nipple, “Wonder how much protein I’d find there?”

Maya leaned into my hand and moaned, “Who cares?”
 
Citizen Maya

Coal's teeth latched onto my erect nipple and all thoughts of food disappeared from my mind. His strong hands pulled me to him and I fell against him willingly.

My hands went to his shoulders, bracing myself while I let my head fall back in abandon, enjoying the sensations he was causing in my nipples. With some effort, I straddled Coal's lap, his hard cock pressed between our bodies.
 
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