Female completely humanoid alien

[simplyfemme1]

I am an amateur so not too good at writing.

I would have liked to write a story in which a Female Humanoid Alien abducts and seduces a lesbian woman. Takes her to their planet which only has women and no diseases, wars or crime.

Anyone can help me?

Ash

 

[FromManyOne]

What kind of help are you seeking? Writing advice? A collaborator? Essays on how to write?

 

[AlinaX]

Abducts then seduces, or seduces then abducts? Two very different stories. And… why?

“But why?” Anya demanded. “Why did you bring me here?”

Olwia shrugged. “Human women taste amazing. Trust me, you will be adored here.”

 

[simplyfemme1]

What kind of help are you seeking? Writing advice? A collaborator? Essays on how to write?

Writing advice is needed

 

[simplyfemme1]

Abducts then seduces, or seduces then abducts? Two very different stories. And… why?

“But why?” Anya demanded. “Why did you bring me here?”

Olwia shrugged. “Human women taste amazing. Trust me, you will be adored here.”

Abducts because she wants to spend an eternity with her, and it is not just a physical thing for the completely humanoid female alien.

 

[AlinaX]

Ah, then you want a romance on Earth with abduction as the epilogue?

 

[AlinaX]

Imagine, if you will…

Anya stared at the glowing gateway, and through the golden glow at Earth itself - or at one small corner of it, anyway. “I want to go home,” she whispered.

Olwia pulled her gently away. “You can’t.”

It had been explained to her a hundred times. Anya half understood, but understanding did not take the pain away. She took one last look at the scene: her home, her house where she had lived her childhood. On a planet circling a distant sun a hundred years in the past. Even if she could somehow get home again, it would be to an Earth two hundred years in the future. And who knew if there would be anyone still alive…

 

[simplyfemme1]

Actually I had imagined that in the end she could teleport to earth thanks to her alien girlfriend's powers any time she wanted. Meanwhile time on this alien planet would be kind of frozen until she returned again. I don't like sad endings for any story.

Thank you for helping me imagine though

 

[AlinaX]

Reminds me of Persephone.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Another option to the alien idea would be an ancient demigod like Aphrodite takes a mortal lover and wisks her off to Olympus where pleasures abound.

 

[Carnevil9]

The best writing advice is to write. Write, write, write. Oh, and read a lot, too! Reading and writing are the best workouts for your writing muscles.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Write, write, write. Oh, and read a lot, too!

I wish I had time for both. It's either/or for me, sadly.