First-person/Third-person

[Phirefly]

P.S. Anthonology was horrible, but Firefly (a later book of his) fed many of my young fantasies. (Warning to parents of 12 year old girls - don't let them read Piers Anthony's Firefly. )

 

[cloudy]

First-person, no? Looking back at that, I notice I wrote most of these in the present-tense too, which can be sort of awkward, although I guess it works as long as I'm consistent!

That's first, but it would be so much stronger if it were written in past tense, IMHO.

 

[impressive]

That's first, but it would be so much stronger if it were written in past tense, IMHO.

Ooops - wrong thread

 

[Stella_Omega]

First-person, no? Looking back at that, I notice I wrote most of these in the present-tense too, which can be sort of awkward, although I guess it works as long as I'm consistent!

First person, because you're describing everything from your own point of view, even the things that "you' does. It seems a pretty successful attempt from that fragment, I'd like to read more of it!

(and you're right about Anthonology sucking- I've never read Firefly, though

 

[tanyachrs]

Yes, that's first person and there's nothing wrong with posting a story with a narrow audience. If you try to write erotica that appeals to everyone, it'll appeal to no one. Kink is a pretty specific thing. Write about what turns you on and write it how it flows for you. I know when I'm using the right voice as narrator because the story starts coming out.