Haiku

[Voboy]

Confounding critique:
A cat pewls about "catness"
In a large dog house.

 

[LargoKitt]

Looking at your thigh
So close to that weeping magic
Your mouth gasps open

 

[Voboy]

Outside observer
(Such superiority)
Silent... brays, unheard.

 

[LargoKitt]

Rain drips from the eves
Your soft parts under my hot hand
Your breath bathes my heart

 

[LargoKitt]

Such a sweet letter
All the lovely things you said
Three words missing

 

[SmilingLez]

Words may speak freely
Until someone says too much
Then silence is law

 

[LargoKitt]

Can I tuck you in?
My fingers invisible
As you gasp my name.

 

[LargoKitt]

We lose ourselves. Now!
Two bodies becoming one
Your breath in my ear

 

[Trubbycat]

The leather is tight
Brightly shining off her curves
I'm in trouble now

 

[Voboy]

Lovely autumn day…
Piped voice: outs. Plays. Outfield cuts:
Shortstop litany.

 

[SmilingLez]

They tried to erase
My name carved deep into stone
It will not vanish

 

[Voboy]

Hesitant. Wobbly.
Like a hatchling, unsure, falls
The first autumn leaf.

 

[Voboy]

Whirling wind at night
Rain-spattered windows shaking
Outside my blankets.

 

[SmilingLez]

Blank pages point fingers.
So they claim the prose is fake.
Hiding their own spite.

 

[stickygirl]

Summer's drought brown grass
Springs lush green in autumn rain
Mower sighs "At last!"

 

[sweetlydeviant]

your voice in my ear
your words awakened in me
a passion once lost

 

[Voboy]

Crisp leaves, high sun, breeze...
Bat cracks. Instant movement! Cheers!
Two RBI: win!

 

[Jackie.Hikaru]

night sky is busy
starlink linking stars, I guess.
criss-cross applesauce