Hawkes of the Sea: a pirate fantasy

[BLACK BART]

I look at the dancer, her erotic undulations had not failed to arouse me, but I was no boy seeing my first woman, and no inexperienced man either...
"You dance well, for a spaniard" I tell her "Your spirit is strong also, making you blind to what you need to learn, you need to learn to serve your fellow man"
Clarissa's suggestion had good merit, a priest and a harlot, I thought, Quite amusing.
"Clarissa, you have an excellent idea, would you see that this spanish harlot serves her priest well" I ask, with a laugh, looking forward to the dancers first task.

 

[THEBRAT]

My Brother be very careful of the Spanish Dancer because she is not what she appears to be.I keep my enemies very close at hand

THE BLACK RAVEN doesn't need the Spanish Dancer anymore.She has served her purpose do with her what you want to I'm off on a patrol of the Island.

[Edited by THEBRAT on 05-31-2001 at 07:43 PM]

 

[Diamondnrough]

As the last of my dress hit the ground, I tremble in anticipation, what would be done to me? The look between brother and sister make my vulva moist, the heat unbearable, as he questions me, as if reading my mind. "Doesn't that feel better?"
I take a deep breath, my breasts straining against the linen undergarment, but can only choke and nod for a reply.
The sensation of being helpless, at his beckon, brings out feelings I have never experienced before...but feelings I suddenly crave, making me to look forward to what will happen next. I cling to his body, my hand braver now, sliding into his pants and finding his monster, I gasp as I feel it twitch, then giggle, thinking "It's alive, and huge"
I know not where we go, but care not also, feeling the heat in my groin, and wondering how to alleviate it.....

 

[sojournerwolf]

Have heard some concerns

Hi, all! Just got home from work (end of month stuff) and opened my email. I received notes from a couple of players who think perhaps we are getting a bit too brutal here.

Though I started this thread, I have always been one who to seek consensus in group endeavors.

Would like to hear your feedback, either here or feel free to email me. Those who email will have their names kept confidential.

Let me hear from you, okay?

 

[BadForm]

OOC: These are fantasies, not realities. However, if anyone has any qualms about anything that is being done/planned, just post. I know I for one am more than willing to back off of anything here. Am even willing to delete out the whole temple thing. I can't speak for anyone else, but for me, if there is anything which upsets fellow players, I'll get rid of it - I just need to know what it is

 

[THEBRAT]

OOC
I like the Temple of Oya or how ever you spell it

 

[Ticklish Girl]

OOC: my 2 cents

So far I'm cool with the plot. As long as there's enough eroticism to balance the violence -- more emphasis on ravishment than on rape -- I'm fine.

 

[Clarrissa]

Clarrissa Morgan

Clarrissa smiled back to Bart an evil gleam in her eyes. Turning her head she inserted two fingers in her mouth and let out a shriek whistle. The pounding of thunder sounded as a huge dane came charging up the beach to his mistress, skidding to a hault infront of her he stood on his hind legs bracing his huge front paws upon her shoulders. The dog stood almost a full head taller than herself. " Hey, Angus my boy did you miss me", rubbing his huge head. Jumping down he sat at her feet. Reaching down Clarrissa removed the large leather collar studded with bits of iron from his massive neck, "Here boy let me use this for a time", she chuckled under her breath.
Motioning to one of the guards, "Here a present for the pretty dancer". Glaring a the dancer, "put it on my pretty, and bind up your hair lest I cut it off for you", tossing a short leather thong to the floor infront of the dancer.
"I choose this dance wench and it is a dance of seduction, the priest must cry out in his pleasure from you or you face the lash", pointing to the priest tied to the stake, she instructed the guards to haul her over to him.

Leaning over Clarrissa whispers to Black "If she fails to amuse us we can always give Angus here a turn with her", reaching down to pat the huge dogs head.

 

[BLACK BART]

OOC: ok, ok so maybe the lashing was a little brutal...but it set the mood of the fantasy....right? honestly I love to play the big bad brutal bastard, but...{whew} only with willing partners....if we have any reservations with who we post with, email them...I won't be insulted, actually pleased and will do my best to respond to my fellow players wishes...I have emailed several people when i've had doubts {if i'm going too far, and am usually suprised they ask for more}
THIS IS A GREAT GROUP OF WRITERS!!!I CAN FEEL A LOT OF TALENT AND LOVE HOW IT IS ALL BLENDING......
again, if you have any reservations...or desires...email, I only bite when you want me to....

 

[Diamondnrough]

OOC: too cool

this group is cool...each has given enough of a "hint" that i can choose the direction of my character and still feel comfortable about it....I get a little confused with some of the sub plots...but thats do to all the people we have in here....I agree with Blacky....email if you want to change the "feel"...i won't be insulted....
I think you guys and gals are all too cool.....love ya!

 

[Inkubus]

Capt Carlos de la Vega

OOC 2 more cents***** in my opinion the story is great , I've kind of lost my place in it ;-) but I agree the story is blending well theer are so many great writers on this one were all adults as long as we write courteous of each others feelings I think the story goes on as is.

IC*****

In the amazing dancing that takes place before us , so many eyes are on the erotic sights before me that I realize now may be my only chance...I play weak until one of the guards leans on the tree near me. I crawl back as his attention is obviously drawn elsewhere. As The dancing becomes more intense I pull my own chains around his neck and pull until I know he cannot make a sound I drag him into the trees and finish him. I sigh as i finish a quick prayerand I take his key and unlock my manacles. I take whatever i can from his body, clotes for disguise, his weapons and his pouch. I dress quickly, and then look at his cold form..on this small island in the chaos it maybe a while before they figure out that im gone there are so many
leaders that they will assume the others have me...but if this one sounds the alarm.... I try to hide his body as best I can...as I begin to run off I catch the last of the dancing...even with my life in danger I am awestruck ..I pasue for way to long burining the beauty in my mind ...and then disapear into the night.

 

[Kimberly]

OOC: I think everthing is going well. Like alot of you guys and gals said there are alot of great writers here. I do not count myself as great but I try. *L* If I have done anything that offended anyone please let me know.

I will post IC later today.

 

[Clarrissa]

Clarrissa Morgan

OOC: I have no problems with any of the writing's here. Monique's character adds an interesting flair to the island. Blacky is a pirate tried and true he he the rest of you are great, having much fun with this. Has anyone taken the part of the priest? My husband was interested if the part is still available. LOL my husband a priest, yeah right!

[Edited by Clarrissa on 06-01-2001 at 05:12 AM]

 

[MtnAngelWV]

OOC: it will look too obvious if I do not post. LOL I do not want to criticize any of the writers here. Everyone is quite talented. I am new to this site but find myself addicted to this forum. I enjoy reading and writing and the plot and build up fascinate me the most. I am not a prude ok lol i do however have certain religious beliefs as I go to church on Sundays (I know I am weird - going to church and playing these games) I just feel that I must excuse myself from this thread. Defiling a somewhat willing nun does not offend me. The item that I have a problem with is the temple, specifically the crucifix and the unwilling nun. (please do not feel uneasy BadForm-this is just my beliefs and I respect all others beliefs and what they are comfortable with) Even though I am intelligent enough to realize this is fantasy I cannot comprise my own integrities. I do wish you all well and have NO hard feelings toward anyone. I just believe that we all have to participate in what we feel comfortable with and not comprise our own feelings!!

I encourage any feedback. Do not hesitate to e-mail if you have concerns or just plain gripes. LOL (or feel the need to put me in my place

 

[Clarrissa]

Clarrissa Morgan

OOC: MtnAngel (Amanda), while I admire your convictions and understandy fully, you will be missed if you choose to go.

 

[BadForm]

OOC: Mountain Angel - heh, no I am not Christian, but am religious. I understand your feelings regarding the blasphemous use of a bastardised crucifix and the mother superior. As I have taken prejudice against my faith IRL, I would not want to tread on anyone else's beliefs and sensitivities. I realised this was a risk, but considered the use of raped nuns already mentioned in this forum (drugged=raped as consent is not granted in the truest sense) to mean it was worth while risking it. Ergo, I am more than willing to delete out the whole temple business, which I am going to do now. Not sure how to knit the plot together given people have mentioned me and the temple, but we'll get around it somehow.

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Et voila, the temple exists, but the nun sacrifice and crucifix are gone. Is that sufficient? Or do you need the whole temple to be deleted, Mountain Angel? I can do that if needed.

[Edited by BadForm on 06-01-2001 at 01:58 PM]

 

[sojournerwolf]

The feedback

OOC: Thank you all for expressing your opinions. I have really enjoyed the writing we have been sharing and feel rather honored to be among you sharing as well.

Personally, I have not found anything objectionable in what has been posted so far. this fantasy does tend towards being dark by its very nature. Yet, I think it has enough leeway to incorporate a wide variety of subplots including but not limited to those we've spun so far.

(It's a big island after all. *L*)

Mostly, I wanted to let us all air our feelings a bit, and perhaps get to know each other better as we choose the ways we want to interact.

I have no desire to squelch anyone's creativity, and indeed have been following the subplots, including the temple and the earlier lashing with interest (in which I participated, too.) I look forward to where these and the other subplots might lead.

Not all of us will participate in all the subplots, though we will all more than likely interact with characters who may also go into subplots some might not want to participate in. Myself, I would offer this as a suggestion: if there is a subplot you do not wish to be involved in, by all means, avoid it, and feel free to let all of us involved know, so we don't inadvertantly write you into one of those.

If anyone is feeling too uncomfortable to continue, please know we will miss you, for all of you have been doing great writing with vivid and vibrant characters. If you feel you must leave this thread, feel free to make suggestions as to how you would like to opt out. And maybe, in the future, we will meet again elsewhere on the boards.

Well, rambled enough for now. I have to say again, I THINK THE WRITING HERE IS SOME OF THE FINEST I HAVE READ ANYWHERE AND I LOOK FORWARD TO THE STORY MOVING FORWARD.

*G*

 

[sojournerwolf]

Jeremiah Hawke

I smile at my sister and nod. Though I think taking Amanda Lancaster down a notch or two might have been great fun, I can refuse my sister very little, if anything. I've no ideas of her plans for the wench, but call for a crew member to run ahead and have the special guest quarters, the ones seldom inhabited, made ready where Amanda might take her ease behind stout doors and our most trusted guards. She has no need to worry that any will bother her, not even myself.

The young woman whom I have stripped of all her clothing save the shift is in the full fever of the potion. Her hand upon my cock causes those about me to laugh at the sudden surprise on my face. I grin and let the young woman toy with me a moment.

"Ah, have you never seen a man's noble parts before, my dear? Well, truly, will I be happy to allow you full exploration, yea, even this very evening."

I look at my sister and grin. I do hope she and I might share this luscious toy later.

The fierce exchange between Black Bart and the Spanish dancer has caused my sister great amusement, even as I am rather enjoying their conflict. I lean over to my sister and whisper, "Ten pounds Black Bart can tame that wench within a fortnight."

It is then, I notice the Spanish nobleman is no longer among us. I look around and notice as well that one of the guards is missing.

"Damnation!" I roar. "Bart, where is that swine of a Spaniard nobleman? Has he taken off on us?"

I am greatly annoyed, knowing that there are still survivors on this isle who, by luck or skill have managed to evade capture. Though it amuses me that they lurk around the edges with whatever petty schemes they might dream up for revenge, the idea of this particular captive perhaps joining up with the dammed woman that watches us causes me no little uneasiness.

[Edited by sojournerwolf on 06-01-2001 at 06:55 PM]

 

[sojournerwolf]

message to DiamondnRough

Hi...I cannot find whether you have posted a naem for your character or not. I am really enjoying the way you are portraying her and look forward to more interaction, but can we have a name for her, uh, pretty please? *G*

 

[BadForm]

Monique Papin: Hunting for the Goddess

And as I meditate lightning arcs across the land. In its flare I see a man fleeing the tavern. He is dressed in the clothes of one of ours, but they fit poorly. He has obviously grabbed them in haste from one too foolish to remain awake. I know at once who it is. The spaniard. De La Vega. Carlos. I know his name, though I know not how. He flees the town and makes for the woods. And the lightning fades to nothing.

I know at once what Oya demands of me. This man must not escape. Instead he must be turned to us. He is a captain. I can only guess the goddess wishes us to take convert him that we may capture ships instead of merely plunder them. Well, captain, you will be mine.

I open my eyes, unsurprised that there is no sign of the lightning of my meditation. I stand with ease and call a beastial call into the night sky before running swift towards the woods. Captain. You WILL be mine!

 

[sojournerwolf]

Jeremiah Hawke

I see Monique running for the forest and smile thinly. Truly, with her dark powers,if anyone can find the Spaniard, it is she. I could almost pity the man when she finds him...almost. My anger is still great, for they have found the body of one of my men, evidently the victim of De La Vega. I can see in Elizabeth's eyes a mirror of my own distress, for these are our people, and though we might risk them in battle with others, they are not mere pawns.

"I want the Spaniard," I announce, "and I want him alive. The one who brings him to me come the morrow Will be richly rewarded from my own stock of plunder."

The crew needs no more encouragement than that, for the generosity of the Hawkes is legend here on the island. Some set off in pursuit. Others are more inclined to enjoy the rewards of the moment.

I direct the nuns be taken to the Cloister, a long, low building of individual rooms furnished with large beds and other amenities. Only the young nun I have my eye do I have other plans for...she is taken to special quarters out of earshot of the Cloister.

With the young virgin and Elizabeth at my side, I turn to watch the proceedings Clarissa has planned for the priest.

 

[MtnAngelWV]

OOC: BadForm, I really did not mean for you to delete your post. As I am the only one who is struggling with it, it is not fair to the others if the thread is changed on my account. This is my dilema and mine alone. The only reason I posted the OOC earlier was because if I fade away then all will know that I was the one that had a problem with it. And I did not want to walk away with hard feelings. As I said I admire you all and respect your views. I feel rotten that you have changed the story because of one person. I just think that it is a little too dark for my taste and was hoping to lend a little romance to it.

Please, Please, Please, everyone play their part as they envision their character. It is not for me to say what is right or wrong. It is just my responsibilty to my beliefs that I must hold true. Thank you all and again I am very sorry. You may handle my character as you see fit for I do not have any qualms about it. Good Luck all and hope to write with all of you again soon. (on a little lighter plot. LOL)

 

[BadForm]

OOC: Mountain Angel - er, my character is ALREADY not the character I first envisioned - I changed her to having 'priestly' rites due to sojournerwolf's comment about the chapel, I gave her more powers (originally intended everything to be coincidental/not proven ability/just her belief) due to others commenting on her dark powers. It is, I believe, the nature of cooperative writing to be willing to mould a character to fit the other players you play with. Ergo, it was the work of minutes to reformat actions to leave out the nuns sacrifice - and it does NOT weaken the plotlines that now she will try/succeed in dominating Carlos instead.

 

[BLACK BART]

My heart is heavy, and I bow on bended knee to my Captain, my King and my friend....
"I have failed you, and my fellow brethren" I apologise "In my arrogance I saw not what was plain to all around me, and have broken the Hawke Creed as well"
"As my last request as first mate I ask you free the spanish dancer, and forfeit my life in place of hers, I have failed the test and she should have her freedom"
Never before beaten in the many years of battle, I lay my trusted whip on the ground, standing unarmed and waiting the King's and his bands judgement.

 

[sojournerwolf]

Jeremiah Hawke

I put my hands on Black Bart's shoulders and raise him from the ground. Bending over, I retrieve his whip and coil it carefully.

"Old friend," I say, "you and I have served together for many a year. More than once you have saved my life, as I have saved yours. With the exception of Elizabeth, there is no one I would rather have at my back in a fight. Or hoist a mug of rum with."

I grin, "Call me cruel, Blackie me boy, but to be honest, I think death and dishonor would be far too easy for ye to endure compared to the way you feel about yourself right now. Nay, you get off not so easy, my friend. As my decree of punishment, you will continue to serve as first mate on my ship, and my good right arm here on the island."

I hold out Black Bart's whip to him. "We've many a league yet to sail, old friend, and many an adventure yet to find."

Those who are watching, I know, wonder at what seems my leniency after the punishment of the young man today. Yet, what none know is that the young man was not what he appeared to be. For it was I, on a walk at dawn, that discovered him setting up piles of brush hidden from most of the rest of the island...piles that, if lit would surely have proven to be rather good signal fires for some ambitious military vessel. I hid then and bided my time since then, waiting for an opportunity to bring him down, which the fool provided me almost too easily.

I believed for a while I should refrain from telling this to the others, even Black Bart whose loyalty would have sent him as a hound upon the scent of anyone appearing suspicious. For I am certain there are more spies among us, and until Elizabeth and I can devise some way of weeding them out, it would cast a pall of suspicion and backbiting that could well tear our haven here apart.

I realize now I have been amiss. Soon, I must confide all in Black Bart and Monica and Clarissa, our most trusted people as I have in Elizabeth. Their insights, I conclude may well be what we need to overcome what could well be the greatest threat our home as ever known.

[Edited by sojournerwolf on 06-01-2001 at 10:28 PM]