Her Smile Changed Everything(closed for DangerousDarkEyes)

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Across the bar sat Ray, wallowing in his beer as he just found out his wife was cheating on him with another man. Ray was a good looking man with dark features and green eyes. His black hair and dark eyebrows and lashes gave him a distinct look. At 5"10" he wasn't the tallest of men, but he was in good shape as he ran 2 miles a day. But Ray was also a good man. A loyal man, someone you could trust.

He had suspected for some time now that Samantha was cheating on him, as they weren't as close as they once were. He devoted his life to her. They were high school sweethearts and he thought she was the love of his life. How could she do this to him? He went to the University and graduated and made a good living at his practice. He always gave Sam his undevoted attention. But now she was with some lowlife scum.

Now, at 31, he was alone.

Across the bar he sees a beautiful young woman dressed in those jeans that have all those rips in them and a tight black top, leaving nothing to the imagination. Boy she was smoking hot. But Ray had no interest at the moment but he watched her anyway, intrigued by her and was piqued by her actions. She must be here to meet her boyfriend the way she is dressed. I'm surprised she hasn't been hit upon yet.
 
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Dawn was in one of her better moods tonight, she had broken up with her long time boyfriend Ed, who she caught once again cheating on her. She threw him, the girl and his stuff out of her apartment explaining there wouldn’t be a next time and she meant it. It was the first time she really felt free of him and knew she wasn’t going to allow him back in her life again. This time she reminded herself, as did her parents all the time, there were too many good people in the world to waste your life with one who cared so little they would cheat, lie, steal what ever the case. It was time for her to grow up and start looking at the qualities men had and not just their looks.

She was 24 years old, 5’3” with a slender yet curvy body and she was always turning the heads of men so she knew she there was a man out there for her. But, she really wanted to enjoy her freedom for awhile. So she decided to go to the club and celebrate her knew found independence. It was pretty busy but knowing several people at the bar, she managed to get a spot up by them and ordered a rum and coke.

That’s when she noticed him, a man sitting at the bar opposite her who seemed to have been watching her. What she mostly saw though, was a man with a problem trying to drink it away for night. Just like she had done the first time she had caught Ed cheating on her, unfortunately she had taken him back later, but not this time.

“Hey Dean, see the man across the bar, dark features drinking a beer,” she said to the bartender who looked and shook his head. “Give him another beer and put it on my tab. If he asks where it came from, just tell him from a secret admirer.”

“Okay, will do,” Dean said, smiling at her and gave her a wink.

She waited for Dean to go over and give the man the beer and when he looked around she excused herself from her friends. Dawn waited until the seat next to him finally became available and she grabbed it, quickly sitting down next to him.

“Are you here alone,” she asked him and then smiled at him, her eyes twinkling in the dim light.
 
As the bartender approached, he filled a new glass and brought it over for me. Being that I wasn't completely finished with my beer yet, I was surprised and gave the bartender an inquisitive look. He offered with a smile, "from a secret admirer" and then turned and walked back to the other side of the bar.

Curious as to who would buy me a beer, I looked around and saw that no one was paying any attention to me and that everyone was pre-occupied with whomever was in their party. I did notice however that the young beauty had left. For a short while there, she was the only thing keeping me from thinking of my cheating wife. Oh well, I got a free drink from a "secret admirer". I hope it was a woman and not a guy. I shivered.

I finished my beer and nodded goodbye to the person who was sitting next to me. Proceeding to my free beer, I hoisted the cold brew to my lips, the foam tickling my upper lip as I drank. Mmmmmmm, nice and cold. I could drink all night I thought to myself.

My eyes were exploring the scene around the bar, noticing young couples entranced by each others word. Some touching lovingly. One even kissing in a soft loving way. Oh, young and to be in love.

Suddenly, a soft wisp of a woman's perfume filled my nostrils as the young beauty sat next to me on the empty stool. I couldn't believe my eyes when I turned and saw her smile and the sparkling of her eyes as she said to me, "are you here alone?" My heart definitely skipped a beat, maybe more. But soon made up for it as my heart rate rapidly picked up it's pace. What seemed like an eternity as I was mesmerized by her smile, I finally responded, "yes, yes I am." Nervously I returned a smile.

"Can I buy you a drink? It's been quite a while since I bought a beautiful young lady such as yourself a drink. Would you do me the pleasure?"

I start thinking how she could be interested in me, being that she is so young and beautiful. She could have anyone she wanted. Perhaps I was just feeling sorry for myself. But it did feel good to have a little bit of company in my state. Plus, I can't stop looking at her. She's like a piece of art.
 
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“I’m drinking rum and coke, and thank you,” I replied with a smile. “As long as you wouldn’t mind having a dance with me. Not just this minute, but sometime tonight.”

He had called the waiter to get me another drink and found out that Dean quickly returned with the rum and coke before being told what kind of drink.

“Thanks Dean,” I said when I took the drink from him. “He’s one of the few bartenders I know in here. I went to school with him.”

I finished the drink I had and took a sip from the new one, while I kept looking at this great looking guy sitting here without a girlfriend. I probably could guess why, but I decided to leave that subject alone for now.

“You know, I’m here alone myself which usually I don’t do, but today I’m celebrating.” I said, searching his eyes for his reaction. “Would you like to celebrate with me for dumping my long time lying cheating boyfriend. So actually I’m celebrating freedom and the future. And by the way, my name is Dawn, and yours is….”
 
I can't believe my luck. "Wow, I can't believe this" I exclaim. "I just found out that my wife has been cheating on me for the past 6 months at least. What are the odds that you would be here for the same reason."

I smile at you. My eyes glued to yours as I still can't believe that you are here alone. God I wish I was in a better mood.

"As for that dance, I'd be crazy to say no, wouldn't I?" Raising my drink to salute you. "To freedom".

This is crazy but I just want to lean in and kiss her, she;s so beautiful.
 
“Yes, to freedom!” she exclaimed and clinked her glass to his with a smile. “I have to say, I kinda of guessed that was why you seemed so, well, lost, in here. I remember the first time I found out, believe me, I had the same face and probably thinking the same thoughts. In fact, I was mad at all men, just like you’re probably mad at all women? Just a little,” she said with a little grin and a twinkle in her eyes.

“You don’t have to worry about me, I’m here to celebrate and take what comes my way, have some fun and not get serious unless the man happens to have the same priorities as I do. That’s been one of my mistakes. But enough of that. Do you feel like talking about it, sometimes it can help. Or would you like to just put a smile on your face, celebrate and dance with me.?”
 
Downing my beer and motioning to Dean for another round I turn back to Dawn and say, "I cant see why anyone would cheat on you. I mean, I only know you for what, like 5 minutes and I think you are an amazing, incredible and beautiful person. I am flattered that you are sitting next to me and would love to dance with you. I am usually a good judgement of character, except for my wife of course. But life goes on. Right?"

Only 5 minutes and I am smitten by her. Her smile changed everything about the way I look at life. This girl is special. I just want to.lean over and kiss her, but let's not get carried away Ray. You just met her for Christs sake. But it feels so right.

"Dance Dawn? Dawn of the dance!" Laughing out loud, smiling at Dawn.
 
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As she took his head and the went to the dance floor, she was quickly in his arms dancing around the floor with him. She immediately noticed even with all the drinks he had, he was still very good on his feet and danced with ease.

“So, are you ever going to tell me you’re name?” she asked, smiling at him, pressing her body close to him.

Just seeing him smile and a bit out of the bad mood he was in, made her happy. She wished someone would have come along when she was done like he was. Although, this time, being in the same situation, she had chosen to celebrate instead. It was wonderful that she could help someone else maybe forget their troubles for a bit and celebrate with her.
 
"Forgive my poor manners. Ray." Trying to be heard over the music. As she pressed her body up against mine, I felt something that I hadn't felt in such a long time. Desire. Her perfume was intoxicating and her smile was contagious. Her body felt so good as I held her close. My hands on her waist, my mind was wondering how good her body must feel naked. My fingers clutched at her waist. I leaned in for a kiss. My eyes never leaving hers. All my troubles were washed away when our lips brushed ever so lightly.

Pulling back from our brief kiss, I put my face cheek-to-cheek with hers and whispered in her ear, "thank you."

I then gazed into her eyes once again and leaned in for another kiss. This one firmer, more deliberate as I slid the tip of my tongue out and licked her lower lip. I could feel her mouth part slightly as I licked along her upper lip. My hands moved around towards her back, my fingers turning downward to caress her lower back.
 
The first time his lips touched mine, I knew something was very different about him. I felt something more than I had in so long, I had almost forgotten what passion felt like. When he stopped to thank me, I even understood what he meant, but I didn’t want him to stop.

My arms were already around his neck, toying with the hair at the back of his neck and his lips found mine once again. This time was even more heated and I parted my lips to feel his hot tongue slide against mine. As we swayed to the music, I felt his fingertips caressing my back, moving lower.

“mmmm” I moaned against his mouth, the kiss, my body pressed against his and his fingers making me tingle all over.

This was a dance that held much more than I had expected, yet I didn’t want it to end. Of course, when the music did stop and change to a more up beat song, I took his hand and we went back to the bar.

“Would you like to get a more private booth, maybe where we could talk, get to know each other a bit?” I asked him, smiling while my eyes were filled with this crazy desire for someone I hardly knew.
 
My heart raced as we kissed on the dance floor. The feel of her tongue swirling with mine, not only made my heart race, but also made me hard. I so much wanted to run my hands down and caress her ass cheeks. She just looks so sexy! When the music stopped and our kiss broke, Dawn pulled me back to the bar and when she asked about going to a more private booth, I responded, "I would love to!". Beaming from ear to ear as we grabbed our drinks and searched for a booth. As we turned to find a booth, I let my hand rest against the small of Dawn's back, admiring her figure as I stayed one half step back on her side.

How lucky am I to meet such a wonderful young woman, sexy as hell, and with such a great attitude and outlook. Things happen for a reason I always say. The feel of her kiss still lingering in my mind. "Somebody better pinch me soon."
 
“This is a nice secluded booth, why don’t you sit next to me?” I asked, smiling at him, having enjoyed his kiss as well as the way he had his hand at my back when they walked.

I sat down and slid all the way over so that he could sit right next to me. The feel of his nearness was more than enough to excite me. I breathed in his scent, a mixture of cologne and his own manly scent which was intoxicating. A waiter came to the table and they ordered another round of drinks.

“Isn’t this a lot cozier than sitting at the bar?” I asked as I rested my hand on his thigh.
 
"You don't have to ask me twice" was my response to her asking that I should sit next to her. This young woman is simply amazing I thought to myself. And man is she hot. What a body! This girl has it all. Looks, smart, great attitude. I can;t take my eyes off of her.

Sliding in next to her so that our legs are pressed against one another's, I slip my arm around her shoulders and smile at the waiter as we order. "Dawn, you are such a breath of fresh air. I didn't know that women like you really existed." Her perfume intoxicating, as well as the drinks, and the way she was looking at me, I'd be a fool if I didn't make a move.

Smiling as I leaned in for another kiss, I placed my left hand on her thigh and squeeze her gently as I brushed my lips against hers again. I could feel my cock straining against my jeans, I don;t think I've been this excited in such a long time.

Breaking our little intimate kiss I whisper to Dawn, "thank you for breaking up with your cheating boyfriend."
 
As he slides in next to me with our legs against each other’s I suddenly feel a warm shiver, excited at our closeness. His words make me blush and I am at a loss for words, but as he puts he arm around my shoulder I lean closer, whispering in his ear.

“I believe it’s you that is bringing this out in me…you’re so nice, warm and so sexy.”

I kiss along his ear and nibble at his earlobe, my warm breath against his neck. I can feel my excitement growing as he puts his arm on my thigh and squeezes gently.

Then our lips press together for another passionate kiss and then hear him whisper.

"thank you for breaking up with your cheating boyfriend."

“Thank you for being here for me and away from your cheating girlfriend.”

Slowly I move my hand up his thigh just a bit, but very close to his crotch.
 
Dawn whispering into my ear sent a chill through me. I squeezed her thigh tight when she did. God I was getting so hard. She was driving me absolutely insane. Dawn then began to kiss down my jawline, her breath on my neck, until her lips reached up for mine. Gazing into her sparkling eyes, our lips brushed lightly. Parting my lips, I pressed firmer against her lips, slipping my tongue over her lower lip and hard teeth into her mouth. The kiss became intoxicating almost immediately as I felt my hard cock straining to get free.

Closing my eyes, I slid my hand higher up her thigh before pressing between her legs. God I wanted Dawn right then and there. Rubbing my fingers against her through her jeans i could feel the heat as our tongues swirled. Our breathing becoming heavy. We were making out in the bar like teenagers. I thrust my tongue deeper in Dawn's mouth as i pressed my middle finger harder against her parted legs.

I could sense her excitement as well so I broke our kiss. She looked at me with a surprised look. I said to her, "should we go somewhere more private? You are driving me absolutely wild with desire."

I stare at her with wide eyes, waiting for an answer. This is so unlike me, but I have never felt this way before towards anyone. Ever. I pulled my hand back and rested it on her knee.
 
His kisses were arousing and soon the heat was turned up between us, as if we had been lovers forever even though we just met. Like to kindred spirits, both igniting the flame deep inside the other.

As he hand kept going closer up my leg, I could feel the dampness between my legs. If this weren’t a public place I just might have taken them off right there. The desire he stirred in me was certainly a new experience for me, especially as quickly as he had started it.

I was never one to just meet someone and go home to bed with them, although when he asked me if we should go somewhere more private, I did think more than once about it. My eyes searched his, not really knowing how to answer the question and keep the heat up at the same time.

Finally after fighting back and forth in my head, I looked at him and dropped my eyes while taking his hand and squeezing it.

“Ray, I don’t think I’ve ever felt like this before and you’re driving me wild too,” I began to say then adding, “but if we go somewhere private, just knowing each other for such a short time, I do believe it could ruin something that might end up being the best thing that had ever happened if we waited.”

I looked at him, hoping he was understanding my meaning, as I did not want to end this.

“I’d like to get to know you much better before we go any further, I’m sorry if I’ve disappointed you.”
 
As I gazed back into Dawn's eyes, I wasn't sure what she was about to say, so I prepared myself for the worst. But when she took my hands and spoke how much she was enjoying my company and how strongly she felt for me after only a short time, I couldn't help but agree with her.

"Oh Dawn, you haven't disappointed me at all. In fact, you have restored my faith in love. I cannot begin to tell you how strongly I feel about you right now, but I do agree that we should step back and take our time. I didn't mean to pressure you, I couldn't help myself. You have gotten me so worked up."

Smiling as I stare into those sparkling eyes, I lean in and kiss your lips yet again. I just can't get enough. I leave my hands in hers and then pull back. "I better stop now or they may have to call the police on me", laughing out loud.

"Perhaps we can take a walk through town and talk. It's not so bad out, and I probably shouldn't be driving in my state. Would you like to do that, or is there something else you would like to do?" Thinking I know what I'd like to do, but trying to curb myself. I grab my drink continuing to look at you as I await an answer. God, she is so beautiful.
 
She was so relieved that he took her answer well and that he too wanted to get to know her more and not just jump right in bed. Not that either would have minded, but what she felt for him in such a short time, made her want more than just a one night stand.

“I think a walk around town, talking would be wonderful. It’s beautiful outside and the fresh air might sober us both up a little.” she said, again happy that he suggested that. She knew if she stayed and kept drinking like this, they would end up where she thought and wanted to hold out for more than that. She also had to remember, he was just coming off a major relationship and was sure he would go thru several stages before getting over that. Right now all she was to him really was a pretty woman, but one who had gone thru what he had and was going to make sure the next person that she slept with would hold her heart. Considering they were both fragil in that department, it definitely was better to wait.

“Why don’t we finish these drinks and go. You can tell me a little more about yourself, the relationship and what you really want in a relationship. I can tell you the same. Sound good?”
 
"That sounds fantastic Dawn! I don't want this to be just a one-night stand type of thing. We can take our time and enjoy each other's company. Let's finish and get out of here."

We finished our drinks and headed out the door with huge smiles and holding hands. It was like this tremendous energy traveling from her body and through her hand and into my body. I had such a spring to my step now. How could this happen so suddenly? I just had the worst thing happen to me and now the greatest thing. Maybe I was getting ahead of myself, but this felt so good!

"Aaaaahhh, the air feels good, doesn't it?" The cold air against my heated up body was a jolt. I pulled Dawn into my side and walked with my arm around her waist. Smiling down at her, I wanted to kiss her badly but decided to hold off.
 
“Oh this is nice,” I said as the cool air hit us when we walked outside.

It felt very nice to have him pull me close with his arm around me, almost snuggling in the cool night air as if we had been lovers forever. Who knew, maybe in some past life, we just might have….if you believed in that stuff, she thought to herself, keeping those thoughts to herself as well.

“Let’s walk around the park awhile, it’s well lit and has a nice path going thru it we could walk on. It’s just down a block or two I think.”

It had been a long time since I walked with a man holding me like this and I was actually feeling like a teenager with my first love. The way we hit it off was so surreal, I could hardly control my excitement being this close to him.
 
This was so much more than nice, this was unbelievable. I didn't want this night to ever end as we walked and talked in the cool night air. There was a bit of a nip in the air but I wouldn't know as all I could think about was this lovely young woman in my arms. We snuggled so tight as we walked, it was like we were trying to become one the way we squeezed each other.

"How did I get so lucky to be walking with you in my arms. I can honestly say that you are the sexiest woman I have ever had the pleasure to meet." What she doesn't know is how much I want to make love to her right now. How much I want to her to have the most explosive orgasm she has ever had. I could feel myself getting hard from the thought of our naked body entangled on the bed, my mouth planting soft, dry kisses along her throat as my hands glide over her torso and sides. The palms of my hands sliding over her nipples then down over her stomach. Taunting, teasing her. My god did I want her!

Catching myself, I smiled at Dawn and said to her, "the park sounds great! One of my fantasies takes place in a park, much like this one. But I wouldn't dare divulge such naughty thoughts on our first night together. I wouldn't want you to think I was some sort of pervert or something."

I gazed down into her eyes as we stopped at a tree in the front of the park. I slid my hands to her hips and said, "Dawn, having just me you, I get this feeling that we have been together forever. I know that sounds corny but it's true. I love how you make me feel right now. I don't want to scare you off, so, if you need space, or I'm coming on a little too strong, please let me know." My eyes glance back and forth from your eyes to your lips. My heart racing. I lean in and kiss you firmly, our mouths opening instantly letting our tongues meet and swirl. My hands grip your waist tight, pulling you towards me.
 
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"How did I get so lucky to be walking with you in my arms. I can honestly say that you are the sexiest woman I have ever had the pleasure to meet."

“Oh you flatter me,” I said, knowing I was probably blushing a dark pink by his comment. “I’m just so glad we got to meet. I can’t tell you how much it means to me to meet someone that I was so quickly taken with. I feek like we’ve known each other forever too, you’re so easy to be with, talk with, we have so much in common. Especially about trust issues, that really makes a difference in any relationship. Even if I don’t know you that well, I feel as if I could trust you with anything.”

I squeezed his hand and next thing we were lip to lip, kissing passionately with a want for more in both of us. Should I make us wait, feeling as strongly as we do, I wondered. I really wanted him, more and more as we spent this time together. I didn’t want to have to say good night, but good morning instead. But would that ruin this…oh what was I to do…these feelings were so strong.

“You make me feel all warm and toasting inside, I really don’t want to end this feeling, ever, that probably sounds corny to you.” I finally said, a bit breathless from our kiss.

“Tell me, what is your fantasy in the park, I’m really curious now.”
 
I am so torn between ending the night and walking Dawn home, or just staying out all night talking and enjoying the company of someone who I have become so smitten with.

the last kiss basically taking my breath away, I can see the elation in Dawn's face, but also the anguish as she is torn inside. I must say something now. I shouldn't let this linger anymore.

"Dawn," pausing to make sure I say the right thing, "the park fantasy should probably wait for another night. I'm afraid that if we continue with the way we are going, kissing you will most definitely lead to something more. And I don't want to ruin what a great night we are having. I want you so badly, I want you to know that. I really do, but I am willing to wait, if that's what you want because I don't want to ruin 'us'." My eyes never leaving yours as my hands slide up and down your arms, keeping you warm.

"So, if we stayed and i told you my park fantasy, and we keep kissing the way we are, I won't be held responsible for any actions that I may make from here on out. It's your call."

God, I just want to ravish this beautiful young woman. Feel and kiss every inch of her delightful body. But I know that I can't rush things. Please say yes, please say yes. Feeling like a little kid waiting for his parents to say 'yes' to ice cream.
 
I listened to what he was saying, could see the excitement as well as anxiety in his eyes waiting for me to answer. Oh my how I wanted him, and we both were celebrating, why not just go for it. We were adults, who obviously wanted and probably needed one another so bad right now it was becoming painfully hard to say no…

I looked deep in his eyes, his arms around my waist, my hands on his shoulders and I knew my answer. There was no denying how bad I wanted him, I was sure he saw that in my eyes just like I did in his.

“So tell me this fantasy and don’t worry, where ever it leads we will just make sure it doesn’t ruin what we’ve started. How could it? This feeling is so strong, right now I don’t think anything could ruin it.”

I kissed him quickly before he could respond, wanting that feeling of passion that starts with a kiss to last forever.

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Unable to respond at first because of her sudden kiss, I opened my mouth and slid the tip of my tongue along her lower lip, and then gliding then along her lower teeth. My hands slid from her waist around to her lower back, my fingers pressing downward to the top swell of her buttocks. Our kiss becoming deeper and more passionate, there was only so much I could take, my raging erection pressing against my pants.

I began to swirl my tongue slowly around hers, the passionate kiss becoming erotic. I begin to end the kiss as I need to see her face. My eyes light up when I look into hers, my heart light as a feather, my body warm with desire.

"Dawn, okay, I will tell you. I think you can handle it." Laughing as I start to think of how I will relate my fantasy to you. "Okay, let's see. Well, it takes place in a park. I guess you know that already." Looking at the "Yeah-tell-me-something-I-didn't- know" look and then smiling at you. The expression on my face replying that what an idiot I am.

"Well, it kind of starts like this. You and I, well, in the fantasy since I didn't know you before tonight obviously, it's me and a woman, and we are walking in the park. Kissing, holding hands, big smiles on our faces. The air was cool with the threat of rain." Realizing that I am describing this night so far, I stop myself.

"I know this sounds like exactly what we are doing but let me continue. Okay, so we are kissing against a tree, getting very passionate and then we stop and continue our walk. We come to a playground and jump on the swings. Both of us having out own swing. Swinging there in the dark. Trying to see who could go the highest. When suddenly you stop, and walk over to me and place your hands around my neck. Leaning in we kiss, this kiss more desire, more with a purpose. My hands grip your waist and then slide to your butt. Playfully squeezing and caressing that wonderful derriere. Suddenly you slide a leg onto mine and then the other, sitting on my lap, never breaking our kiss. I feel our breathing becoming heavy as your press your chest into me." I feel myself getting lost in the translation of my fantasy to you, not realizing that I am saying 'you' in the story.

My hands then slide off your butt and around to the front. The palms of my hands sliding up to your breasts. Caressing them through your blouse as our kiss deepens. My fingers then find the buttons on your blouse, pushing one through the hole. I then feel a raindrop on my head, thinking that I didn't want the rain to ruin the moment. I undo another button, exposing the swell of your breasts if only there was enough space to see. I pull away from our kiss and plunge into your neck, my hands cupping your covered breasts. I feel the warmth of your flesh as I suckle on your throat. My hands pushing your breasts together, the rain starting to come down lightly. You feel the rain too, I say, "perhaps we should go" but you reply, "let's stay."

I smile at you and undo another button and then pulling your blouse out of your jeans. Even in the dark of night I can see the beauty of your breasts in the black lace bra. I lean in and plant soft dry kisses on the tops of each breast as my hands fondle the sides of them. I tilt my face up to your for a kiss. As our mouths open and you slide your tongue into my mouth, I wrap my lips around yours and suck on your tongue, sometimes scraping my teeth on your tongue.

I can feel my cock straining up against you. I can feel the heat even through the material of our jeans. The rain is starting to come down harder but it is not a factor in stopping our passion. I thrust my tongue up into your mouth, swirling slowly around and around, wanting this moment to last forever. I push up against you, my primal desire taken over my body.

I lean you back now, secure in my hands as you wrap your legs tighter around me. I lick up and down your neck before nibbling on the top swells of your breasts. The cool rain starting to pelt down upon your flush face.
 
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