metropolinational
Wannabe Writer
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- Jul 10, 2025
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I have a question. For the past six months or so, I have been working on a huge story, called The Botched Marriage. I published Book 1 over July/August, Book 2 over September/November. I've been putting out chapters of Book 3 over the past month. Each book is 11 chapters long.
I admit I have fallen in love with my characters, and my OCD has gotten worse and worse with each chapter. These last few chapters have important conversations that resolve long standing plot lines, and sex scenes that are real turning points for these characters lives. I'm having a hard time letting go of any imperfections and just hitting that publish button. I just keep tweaking things.
I want to be clear: I am enjoying the bejesus out of all this. It is so incredibly soothing to come back to each paragraph and find just the perfect thing for one of my characters to say - something that ties back to a snippet from 15 chapters ago. Something that adds just a little bit more depth to them. I also just want to take my time, I guess, because as I approach the end of the book, I know I'm going to mourn the loss of these imaginary friends. It's not something I expected, but it's real.
So, my question. I have a ton of stories waiting in the wings. Over a dozen. Is it ok to take a one week break from the novel and finish one short story during that time? I am certain my readers will absolutely hate it. Even though the vast majority of my readers hate me and the story, they certainly are not ambiguous about wanting me to get more stuff out, faster. They complain endlessly in the comments and by email about wanting the next chapter.
I'm not asking for permission, obviously. I'm just asking if ethically, do you feel a responsibility to wrap up a novel before working on anything else? Am I being cruel to the readers who I have hooked into this story? Do I have a moral duty to release them from their suffering as quickly as possible?
I admit I have fallen in love with my characters, and my OCD has gotten worse and worse with each chapter. These last few chapters have important conversations that resolve long standing plot lines, and sex scenes that are real turning points for these characters lives. I'm having a hard time letting go of any imperfections and just hitting that publish button. I just keep tweaking things.
I want to be clear: I am enjoying the bejesus out of all this. It is so incredibly soothing to come back to each paragraph and find just the perfect thing for one of my characters to say - something that ties back to a snippet from 15 chapters ago. Something that adds just a little bit more depth to them. I also just want to take my time, I guess, because as I approach the end of the book, I know I'm going to mourn the loss of these imaginary friends. It's not something I expected, but it's real.
So, my question. I have a ton of stories waiting in the wings. Over a dozen. Is it ok to take a one week break from the novel and finish one short story during that time? I am certain my readers will absolutely hate it. Even though the vast majority of my readers hate me and the story, they certainly are not ambiguous about wanting me to get more stuff out, faster. They complain endlessly in the comments and by email about wanting the next chapter.
I'm not asking for permission, obviously. I'm just asking if ethically, do you feel a responsibility to wrap up a novel before working on anything else? Am I being cruel to the readers who I have hooked into this story? Do I have a moral duty to release them from their suffering as quickly as possible?

