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[Recidiva]

BRAIN CHEMISTRY...now thats a workable and might I add ingenious reason..for just about anything..I like it!

No body will buy the momentary angle?...damn Diva, this gets better and better

Well, it's one of those weird things. I noticed early on that some things...if I see them the first time, I'm totally disgusted.

Then later on, when I want to masturbate? What pops into my head? Oh, you got it. And so it goes.

Hopefully if I get JUST THAT reaction...that's what I'm looking for.

 

[joeys-game]

Well, it's one of those weird things. I noticed early on that some things...if I see them the first time, I'm totally disgusted.

Then later on, when I want to masturbate? What pops into my head? Oh, you got it. And so it goes.

Hopefully if I get JUST THAT reaction...that's what I'm looking for.

*nods*..defn been there

Bloody hell..I'm dying to read said story now..keep me posted please

 

[Recidiva]

*nods*..defn been there

Bloody hell..I'm dying to read said story now..keep me posted please

Thank you. I'll post a link when it comes up. I'd appreciate any feedback, too.

To hone my craft, so to speak.

 

[joeys-game]

Thank you. I'll post a link when it comes up. I'd appreciate any feedback, too.

To hone my craft, so to speak.

Thanks Diva.
Honeing is a good thing, isn't it?..(sounds erotic, don't you think?)..LOL.jk

 

[Recidiva]

Thanks Diva.
Honeing is a good thing, isn't it?..(sounds erotic, don't you think?)..LOL.jk

It's interesting, this is the first time submitting a story has a little thrill of it's own. And I'm actually trying to get positive feedback before it's posted, 'cause I'm nervous.

Salvor's gonna read it first and he's nice to me, so he'll say nice things.

And if he doesn't, it's TOO LATE!

OOOoooOOOooo.

 

[joeys-game]

It's interesting, this is the first time submitting a story has a little thrill of it's own. And I'm actually trying to get positive feedback before it's posted, 'cause I'm nervous.

Salvor's gonna read it first and he's nice to me, so he'll say nice things.

And if he doesn't, it's TOO LATE!

OOOoooOOOooo.

Nervous is good. We need to feel that way sometimes..and the thrill prolly feels pretty damn good too.
I'd say you have a win-win already!

 

[Recidiva]

Nervous is good. We need to feel that way sometimes..and the thrill prolly feels pretty damn good too.
I'd say you have a win-win already!

Yes, I'd be all sad if I'd wussed out. Now I can go down under a hail of poison arrows with joy in my heart.

 

[joeys-game]

Yes, I'd be all sad if I'd wussed out. Now I can go down under a hail of poison arrows with joy in my heart.

Its that feeling of joy that counts..*grin*

 

[Recidiva]

Okay, here goes:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=564441&page=submissions

Newest - Turnabout.

My first feedback:

"I've read sicker stories---I think------

They are developed by sick minds and enjoyed by the same"

...so I did it right!

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Okay, here goes:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=564441&page=submissions

Newest - Turnabout.

My first feedback:

"I've read sicker stories---I think------

They are developed by sick minds and enjoyed by the same"

...so I did it right!

Okay, you now have a second comment. Nice job of writing.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Recidiva]

Okay, you now have a second comment. Nice job of writing.

Rumple Foreskin

Thank you

If you could point out some rough spots if any remain in your memory, please PM or send me feedback - I did start a story discussion thread.

I'm not up to taking myself seriously enough to ask someone to edit my work, as I don't want to waste their time. I do take my readership seriously enough to try to get it better. I someone were to point me in the right direction in their point of view, I'd appreciate it.

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=538018

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Thank you

If you could point out some rough spots if any remain in your memory, please PM or send me feedback - I did start a story discussion thread.

I'm not up to taking myself seriously enough to ask someone to edit my work, as I don't want to waste their time. I do take my readership seriously enough to try to get it better. I someone were to point me in the right direction in their point of view, I'd appreciate it.

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=538018

Reci, one PM heading your way. Just remember, all that is just IMHO-type stuff. And the last time I checked, there were no Pulitzer, Booker, or Nobel Prizes for literature hanging on my wall.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Recidiva]

Reci, one PM heading your way. Just remember, all that is just IMHO-type stuff. And the last time I checked, there were no Pulitzer, Booker, or Nobel Prizes for literature hanging on my wall.

Rumple Foreskin

And all hugely helpful. Thank you so much.

I really do want criticism on this one, or I wouldn't have asked. I've been trying to glean good and bad from a sentence of feedback here and there. But several clear and right sentences are infinitely better.

 

[ABSTRUSE]

I just posted my first nonconsent piece.

ABSTRUSE, I owe you one. I did it.

I feel dirty. I like it.

You owe me nothing but a cup of coffee in a S. American country yet to be disclosed where you will slip me an envelope containing a coupon for $1.00 adult diapers, a novelty pen from an obscure road side attraction and proof Bigfoot does exist, be he doesnt really care.

 

[Recidiva]

You owe me nothing but a cup of coffee in a S. American country yet to be disclosed where you will slip me an envelope containing a coupon for $1.00 adult diapers, a novelty pen from an obscure road side attraction and proof Bigfoot does exist, be he doesnt really care.

Awaiting your call to tell me which booth.

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Awaiting your call to tell me which booth.

the one near the window, I like to people watch.

 

[Recidiva]

the one near the window, I like to people watch.

As you wish.

 

[ABSTRUSE]

As you wish.

We'll meet in Argentina. I want to sneak onto the balcony of the Casa Rosada and pretend I'm Evita.

 

[Recidiva]

We'll meet in Argentina. I want to sneak onto the balcony of the Casa Rosada and pretend I'm Evita.

Okay, but I will not cry for you!

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Okay, but I will not cry for you!

Don't cry for me Recidiva, the truth is I never left you, all through my wild days, my mad existance, I'm Argentina and always will be.

 

[Recidiva]

Don't cry for me Recidiva, the truth is I never left you, all through my wild days, my mad existance, I'm Argentina and always will be.

Have I said too much? There's nothing more I can think of to say to you...

But I'm sure I'll think of something more soon enough.

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Have I said too much? There's nothing more I can think of to say to you...

But I'm sure I'll think of something more soon enough.

Stand Back.....Buenas Aires!

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Damn, but that was one deep, intellectual conversation. Focused as it was on geography, politics and the musical stage, even Ami would be impressed.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Read it. Liked it. Commented in the Story Review Forum.

Love seeing people branch out into new territory, Recidiva. Keep doing it

 

[Recidiva]

Read it. Liked it. Commented in the Story Review Forum.

Love seeing people branch out into new territory, Recidiva. Keep doing it

Thank you!

I really do love seeing this through other eyes, where it comes into focus, and where I'm thoroughly blurry.