Just one Line.

[redgarters]

From a country music themed WIP for Valentines challenge:

And as we just sat there for a while, the silence between us started filling the void in my chest with warmth, because not everything has to be said. Sometimes you say it best when you say nothing at all.

 

[PennyThompson]

Sometimes you say it best when you say nothing at all.

omg you just activated me like the fucking Winter Soldier, listening to Allison Krauss in my dad's car

 

[redgarters]

omg you just activated me like the fucking Winter Soldier, listening to Allison Krauss in my dad's car

One of the best love songs of all time

 

[MillieDynamite]

We have a tradition in my family of watching two movies every Christmas, Notting Hill (which features that song but by a different artist), and Love Actually. So as soon as I clicked on your link, I'm watching those movies with my dad and mum.

omg you just activated me like the fucking Winter Soldier, listening to Allison Krauss in my dad's car

 

[MillieDynamite]

 

[Dodola]

One of the best love songs of all time

Keith Whitley did a good version too

 

[Z_TheWriter]

From my only published story:

The circle of now only guys was almost magnetically drawn with her to the base of the tree, but there they stopped. Several laughed a bit uncomfortably and looked around at each other. Cool guy university students did not climb trees, at least not at night during a party while trying to get girls drunk and into their bed. They might look uncool while trying to get up, or get moss on their nice pants. There was also no beer in the tree.

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

From a country music themed WIP for Valentines challenge:

That line is right up there with “Freedom’s just another word for nothing left to lose.” When it come to all time great lines in songs.

 

[LegendInMyOwnMind]

(Clearly established that the brother who speaks is months over 18, though younger than his sisters)


By this time, I had become more aware of their looks. Erica had long, honey blonde hair, while Jasmine's shorter hair was a luxurious dark red. Jasmine was bigger in the boobs and ass, but puberty had been inordinately kind to both of them. If they weren't my sisters, I'd have given the devil a mortgage on my soul to be with either of them, but there's no way in hell I'd be able to choose between them.

(From an as-yet-unpublished story, 10000 words and not finished.)

 

[HelenL]

New Year WIP: And, fuck her, she was right. Rachel was seriously turned on by the prospect of playing groupie to this epitome of female rockers. And her equally hot... friend.

 

[Statius]

WIP

Don't get cocky, you still need rest."

"No intention of getting 'cocky', unless it's the one you wear, ha! Okay, I'll stop."

 

[Soixenta]

And when the bottle was empty and I’d finished crying – thought I’d finished crying – Marcus told me to sleep in his bed, while he took the couch. No, it was alright, he insisted. Never buy a couch that’s not comfortable for sleeping, that’s what he’d learned from ex-wife.

I was about to remark that she sounded like a sensible woman, then my brain caught up. Oh. I hadn’t even known he used to be married.

(From the second chapter of "Mage & Moonshadow)

 

[yowser]

The world was my oyster, or whatever the expression is, although I'm not all that fond of oysters myself.

 

[LegendInMyOwnMind]

(Clearly established that the brother who speaks is months over 18, though younger than his sisters)


By this time, I had become more aware of their looks. Erica had long, honey blonde hair, while Jasmine's shorter hair was a luxurious dark red. Jasmine was bigger in the boobs and ass, but puberty had been inordinately kind to both of them. If they weren't my sisters, I'd have given the devil a mortgage on my soul to be with either of them, but there's no way in hell I'd be able to choose between them.

(From an as-yet-unpublished story, 10000 words and not finished.)

I did an internet search and found the source about puberty being inordinately kind. In a 1990s Pinky and the Brain cartoon, the Brain said it sarcastically in a non-sexual situation to a Dolly Parton parody character. My MC is quite sincere (and quite horny).

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

The hair on his chest and stomach screamed masculinity, where my smooth body whispered, ‘use me.’

 

[MelissaBaby]

From my Holiday WIP, just poking a little fun at some of my older friends at Lit.

She put on a pair of gym shorts and a battered Nirvana T-shirt.

“You look adorable,” I said, “But I wouldn’t take you for a Nirvana fan.”

“Oh,” she said, looking down at the shirt, “It’s my mom’s.”

 

[redgarters]

The hair on his chest and stomach screamed masculinity, where my smooth body whispered, ‘use me.’

Oh, that's good

 

[redgarters]

From my Holiday WIP, just poking a little fun at some of my older friends at Lit.

She put on a pair of gym shorts and a battered Nirvana T-shirt.

“You look adorable,” I said, “But I wouldn’t take you for a Nirvana fan.”

“Oh,” she said, looking down at the shirt, “It’s my mom’s.”

I'm somehow feeling seen and violated at the same time...

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

From my Holiday WIP, just poking a little fun at some of my older friends at Lit.

We're a self deprecating lot...From one of mine:

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“Did you find me a t-shirt?”, Bonnie’s voice called from the bathroom. I opted for an old ‘Hotel California’ shirt with the lyric, ‘You can check out anytime you want, but you can never leave.’ written on the back in stylized script. My dad picked it up at one of the Eagles farewell tours when I was a kid, and it had been a favorite of mine ever since I had stolen it from him.

 

[MillieDynamite]

Who's self-deficating?

We're a self deprecation lot...From on of mine:

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“Did you find me a t-shirt?”, Bonnie’s voice called from the bathroom. I opted for an old ‘Hotel California’ shirt with the lyric, ‘You can check out anytime you want, but you can never leave.’ written on the back in stylized script. My dad picked it up at one of the Eagles farewell tours when I was a kid, and it had been a favorite of mine ever since I had stolen it from him.

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

Who's self-deficating?

Oh, come on, It's not like you have someone do that for you...

 

[MillieDynamite]

I saw a preview for a new show, and someone said, "Don't be so self-deficating."

Oh, come on, It's not like you have someone do that for you...

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

I saw a preview for a new show, and someone said, "Don't be so self-deficating."

That's either brilliant or extremely bad writing.

 

[MillieDynamite]

It's something called the paper, and the ESL reporter says to the head of the paper, after he apologized for how heavily he edited her story.

That's either brilliant or extremely bad writing.

 

[MelissaBaby]

It's something called the paper, and the ESL reporter says to the head of the paper, after he apologized for how heavily he edited her story.

I watched that show and though it was pretty mid, but I crushed on that Asian actress.