Lady In Red: The High School Dance To Remember...

[sex-maniac69]

David:




I found them."hey i have something i need you ask you guys,But if your busy ill come back later," i said.

 

[Ravenloft]

Dain:

Still in kneeling before Bri Dain turned his head to look at David. His eyes were always so expressive and David knew without words that they were INDEED quite buissy. Not that Dain being on his knees wasn't clue enough.

 

[Guest]

Sensing a possible argument, Briannah broke in. "What is it Dave?" she asked him, not leaving her current position before Dain.

 

[sex-maniac69]

David:



I cringed at the way dain looked at me."Its kinda important but i can tell what you guys are doing is much more important, one more thing before i go if you guy dont wanna get caught id go somewhere more private," i said and dropped my head sadly murmuring "I guess i wont get to tell danielle how i feel beacuse i dont know how," and i walked away

 

[sex-maniac69]

David:



I stopped when i heard briannah's voice.


"You two are 2 of the best friends ive had all year and i know how close you and danielle, Bri," i hesitated." I know you two know how i feel about her but i cant find the words to tell her and i wonder if you could help,?" iasked.

 

[sex-maniac69]

David:



I heard footsteps and i glanced back down the hall.
It seems Danielle is looking for me.She looks beautiful in every light.

I sit and patiently wait for bri or dain to say something....

 

[Friendly Dragon]

John

As Tammy and I danced, the sweet smell of her beautiful golden hair filling my senses, my mind began to wander, back to the first time we met.

It was at a party held by my friend Carl -- not really my scene so I didn't particularly want to go, but he kept pestering me and I guess I just couldn't think of a good enough excuse not to.

The party got pretty rowdy, as Carl's parties tended to, and so I decided to stay out of the way and keep a low profile. I was about to leave when I saw her, sat alone, lost in her thoughts.

She looked so beautiful, so thoughtful, but yet so lonely, even - or perhaps especially - amongst so many raucous people.

I hesitated, unsure whether I should approach her. Part of me, the shy part, told me that she must already have a boyfriend. But my heart told me that if I didn't go and speak to her, I could be making the biggest mistake of my life. Fortunately for me, I listened to my heart.

I asked if I coud sit with her, and as she looked up she smiled - such a wonderful, warm smile - and I knew my heart was right. We talked for what seemed like hours, but was over all too soon. We got on so well together, and I asked her for her number.

That weekend, we had our first date, and by the end of the evening I knew that this was the woman I wanted to spend my life with. We just seemed so right together, we shared so many interests, the same sense of humour, and often we even found ourselves thinking of the exact same thing at the same time.

That was almost a year ago, and what a wonderful year it had been. But tonight...tonight could be the most important night of my life.

As the song wound down, our eyes met.

"I love you."

 

[Guest]

OOC: Why reading a story is important...

...if you guy dont wanna get caught id go somewhere more private

Had you been READING the story, you would have seen that Briannah and Dain had been nestled in a small corner along the backstage area in the Auditorium. ~sigh~

 

[Guest]

Briannah stayed in her current position of being almost entirely underneath Dain. Turning her head, she glanced at David again. The look in her eyes wasn't all that pleasant. "Look Dave," she began. "Danni is going through a tough time right now. I'm sure you saw the spectacle her boyfriend made? Give her some space."

David just looked at her blankly. It looked the like poor boy was about to cry. He stood there for several more minutes, looking down at the couple.

Dain noticed that his hard on was starting to go down. He sighed deeply. "Did you see the way she's been gawking at that DJ tonight? It looks like Danni's getting over her boyfriend fast...and it's not with you!" After a pause, he added, "I don't know how you found us back here, but could you please give my girl and I some time alone? We have lots to celebrate!"

Giggling softly, Briannah lifted her left hand and flashed her new, beautiful heart shaped emerald at David. Taking the hint, he turned to walk away.

 

[sex-maniac69]

David:


I stopped in my tracks.

"Thanks ever so much for NOTHING!!!," i felt as if they had ripped my heart out and were playing catch with it.

"oh and one more thing,Congradulations," i said as turned to look at them before leaving,my eyes swelling with tears.

That was a very big mistake asking them, i can see they care nothing for their friends just themselves.

I solomly walked past daneille and hed for the parking lot.

She only looked at me with a worried glance.

I have a heartache reliever in my glove compartment.Shiny metal with a trigger.....








OCC: if you could be any ruder even a fictitious persons heart can be broken

 

[poohlive]

Ooc: Maniac... no offense, but you were rude to interupt them in the first place. Let's just drop this ok? Bri and Dain (snicker) are in the corner oozing over each other. (lol, i love the verb oozing) and David... you just congradulated them, and now you are going back to dance with Danni. No suicides... no nothing. Come on, this isa high school, what are you doing with a gun?
ummm... don't answer that.
In this thread there are no weapons bigger or more dangerous than a pen in this thread. That's McPooh talking... and it goes. Come on, we all joined this thread to have some fun, am I right? So... maniac, have some fun. Thats an order.
(yeah, who died and made you leader, Pooh?)

McPooh grabbed Like a Virgin. He always did like that song, and he would have guess that there weren't going to be many virgins after tonight. He sighed... oh to be young again.
"This goes to all the ladies out there..." he put in the cd.
There were a few giggles as Madonna started singing. He had always wanted to say that.
Yes sirree, love was in the air. He glanced back at the clock... hey only two hours until this thing was over. He had to smile just a little. Too many things had happened here and he just wanted to go home, go to sleep, and forget about all of it.
Yeah, love was in the air.

 

[sex-maniac69]

David:




(OCC:Thanks Pooh your complete ly right and i hope they will forgive me.)


Danni and i arrived back at the dance an took seats waiting to dance again.I reached in my pocket and found something a CD id recorded i took it over to the DJ And asked if he'd play it




"I know all the words
but i cant really speak them
to you
pause
and i hide all the pain
ive gained from my wisdom
from you
pause
if i left here with nothing
Ill have nothing to live for
without you
Pause
without you I cant figure
why id go on...."

Its some thing id put together for her


[Edited by sex-maniac69 on 12-08-2000 at 09:43 PM]

 

[Ravenloft]

OOC: Unless we get some serious help in here I think I am totally clueless on what to post... I am sorry we have hurt your feelings SexManiac, but in all honesty you may have killed the thread... Or given it a mortal wound at any rate... I agree that Tiggs and I arn't helping the situation eather... Damn... This is sad... Just damn... I forgive you dude, but sadly I don't think that will save the thread. Again, I am just stating my intuition on this. I am lost as to what I can post and if I can't post then certainly tiggs can't post... And Dain and Bri will fade away...

 

[Guest]

I have already e-mailed Hecate and requested that she delete this entire thread. This is exactly why I think it is valuable AND important to keep contact via mail or IMs with other characters in a RP. Without, things can get messed up and out of hand. Maybe someday I can finally have my romantic love story here? ~sigh~

I never meant to hurt your feelings Maniac. I guess I got kind of agitated by some of your posts. To me, it seemed that you weren't keeping up with the story line very well. If you had, you would have seen that Danni had a "thing" for the dj. Also, you would have seen that Bri and Dain were celebrating their engagement together AND that they were nestled away in a small corner of the BACK STAGE area of the auditorium. No one would have known that they were there unless they saw them walk back there...and I stated that no one had.

I suppose it had been fun while it lasted. ~sigh~ I must not be good enough at starting threads. I am sorry all.

 

[sex-maniac69]

OCC: I want the thread to thrive and i dont want to kill the mood or plot or anything.And im sorry for interrupting your characters moment.My characters a sad person is all but there will be no death.This is a happy thread.Ill have my character figure out how to tell her on his own.One more thing i really like your characters i wish i had friends like them at my prom.I dont feel right make to many desicions for daneille i want the person who plays her to have a say ,but the threads close to being over.




David: i shakely asked her to dance again.This could be the last night i see her.I see her b/f come back in .I have some payback for before the end of the night,god i love her.....

 

[poohlive]

Whiah... something's happening here.
What it is ain't exaclty clear...

I know when to step in, and when not to.
What? The dishes? Oh ok....
Umm, I think I hear my mother calling me. I have to go now.

 

[sex-maniac69]

OCC:Tiggs dont let them delete the thread just because i screwed up.I oloowed it i just want my character to have a better time then i did at my prom.Tiggs your great at threads im at fault here.I saw the Dj thing it just didnt register.Im sorry

 

[Guest]

On one note, this thread (even with the shit that's happened) is better than my prom. ~sigh~ I never went to one. I went to ONE Homecoming along my Jr. year, but that was it (AND that's another story). I'm sorry that there were communication problems, but the thread is still dead. ~sigh~ I don't know what to post, Ravenloft doesn't know what to post, and it's been days since Ezzie has even been back to post. The romantic feeling is gone...dead. It's time to move on. Whenever Hecate checks her mail, this thread will be gone too. (Litterly.)

 

[sex-maniac69]

OCC:maybe you guys will join a romantic thread im working on in the ORP id like to work with you two alot more youre great.Maybe you guys could e-mail me and we can still be friends.I shoudnt have gone to mine all i got from it was heartsick.

[Edited by sex-maniac69 on 12-08-2000 at 11:55 PM]

 

[Hecate]

By request of Tiggs the thread is closed and will be deleted shortly

Hecate