Looking for an beta reader, please

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I'm a reasonably-well established writer here, with generally good grammar and spelling. I have a sci-fi tale almost done for the AI: A New Era 2026 event. It will come in at rather over 20k words and is set in a post-Singularity world, with the protagonist reacting primarily and verbally with the Singularity, but also physically with two men, one at a time. It starts slowly and there's nothing kinky, just pretty normal M/F sex. I would appreciate hearing from anybody willing to take a look at it. Thanks.
 
Hi, I'd be happy to beta read. Please send as Word or PDF document.
 
Hi, I'd be happy to beta read. Please send as Word or PDF document.
Thank you. May I have a suitable email address, please? I don't think one can attach those to the DMs. It will in any case be a week or two. It needs some tuning first.
 
@TarnishedPenny, I got your story by email and managed to read it today so I've emailed you back with my thoughts and a copy of the document with some tracked changes and comments. Hope it's of some help and good luck with the event.
 
@TarnishedPenny, I've also been working on a sci-fi tale of AI gone very wrong. Well, two actually. But for the contest, I think I'll use my story Prototype (not the full title) if I can get it done and off to my editor in time for the event. Shouldn't be a problem. It's on the publication schedule for Amazon and ZBS for next month. That was before I started writing it. The version for Amazon is less graphic than for ZBS, but I think either would work for her.
 
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