Looking to help train a submissive, online
- Thread starter WriterDom
- Start date
BeachGurl2
Sarcastic Smart Sexyass
- Joined
- Oct 2, 2005
- Posts
- 4,919
This should be fun.WriterDom said:
Like your word choice
WriterDom
Good to the last drop
- Joined
- Jun 25, 2000
- Posts
- 20,077
Tool of the week
tawse
(noun plural but singular or plural in construction) British : a leather strap slit into strips at the end and used especially for disciplining children
A Scottish implement banned in 1968 to the delight of many school children. The most feared carried the brand name Lochgelly and were produced in Fife, Scotland. You can find the real thing on Ebay. Mine is not traditional in that it has a wooden handle. But still it is very effective and I've heard of them doing a lot of damage in the wrong hands. Not a tool to be taken lightly.
Unless you are a real masochist this probably isn't your friend. It is 22 inches long and 3 inches wide at the leather.
tawse
(noun plural but singular or plural in construction) British : a leather strap slit into strips at the end and used especially for disciplining children
A Scottish implement banned in 1968 to the delight of many school children. The most feared carried the brand name Lochgelly and were produced in Fife, Scotland. You can find the real thing on Ebay. Mine is not traditional in that it has a wooden handle. But still it is very effective and I've heard of them doing a lot of damage in the wrong hands. Not a tool to be taken lightly.
Unless you are a real masochist this probably isn't your friend. It is 22 inches long and 3 inches wide at the leather.
bustyblondebombshell
Literotica Guru
- Joined
- Oct 12, 2003
- Posts
- 953
WriterDom said:
that looks absolutely delicious!
BeachGurl2
Sarcastic Smart Sexyass
- Joined
- Oct 2, 2005
- Posts
- 4,919
Well, now, wouldn't that depend on the person who wields it?WriterDom said:
WriterDom
Good to the last drop
- Joined
- Jun 25, 2000
- Posts
- 20,077
painfully still
she waits
she-sleen
her ass offered high
nipple, like daggers against the sheets
ears tuned to the sound of footsteps
wanting the pain
wanting the pleasure
wanting to please
random thoughts spiraling
making her dizzy
her sex a swollen throb of need
tightly she closes her eyes
all she sees is his cock
precum welling at the tip
just inches from her lips
waiting on the command
to suck, to please, to swallow
she waits
she-sleen
her ass offered high
nipple, like daggers against the sheets
ears tuned to the sound of footsteps
wanting the pain
wanting the pleasure
wanting to please
random thoughts spiraling
making her dizzy
her sex a swollen throb of need
tightly she closes her eyes
all she sees is his cock
precum welling at the tip
just inches from her lips
waiting on the command
to suck, to please, to swallow
chronicle_tenko
Just Idiot
- Joined
- Apr 7, 2006
- Posts
- 12,402
Ow. I'd rather be hit with the Canmex brand door chain I swiped from work before that thing. At least the chain won't open me.
WriterDom
Good to the last drop
- Joined
- Jun 25, 2000
- Posts
- 20,077
Feedback needed. Started a new story.
It starts with very little character development. Just the tension between the Master and sub. I guess I could go back, but I'm thinking it will just be a short stroke piece if you know what I mean. Not much here but I'll add more as I go.
The inspection
She stood before him weak-kneed and on the verge of trembling. Her nipples were hard from the coolness of the room and her excitement. Spreading her legs wide, she clasped her hands behind her head and cast her eyes downward. She could feel his approving eyes on her as he moved closer. She was completely naked but oddly did not feel any embarrassment. She wanted to please Him. She was born to please Him.
He slapped the tip of his riding crop hitting her inner thighs.
“Wider,” he said.
She gasped as he slapped it upward against her almost dripping pussy lips several times. Then moved it back and forth saw-like between her lips.
“You are very wet. This pleases me.”
She sighed. Little words of praise from him always felt like a warm jet spray of water against her pussy. Mere words, but his words affected her like no other.
He placed the crop longways across her mouth. Instinctively she bit down and held it there. His strong hands began pinching both nipples. Harder and harder until a moan escaped her lips.
“Whose breasts are these?” he asked.
“Yours Master,” she mouthed through the crop.
He circled around behind her. She felt a nibble on her shoulder. He took his index finger and ran it down from her hairline to her ass crack. She shivered.
He took the crop from her mouth.
“Hands to ankles,” he said.
She bent over fully. Two fingers roughly entered her wetness.
“Whose pussy is this?”
“Yours Master.”
“And what is its purpose?”
“To serve and to pleasure you Master.”
She felt a finger wet with her juices press against her anus. She bit her lip as He slid it all the way in.”
“And this?”
“Your ass, Master.”
“It’s purpose?”
“To serve and pleasure you, Master.”
It starts with very little character development. Just the tension between the Master and sub. I guess I could go back, but I'm thinking it will just be a short stroke piece if you know what I mean. Not much here but I'll add more as I go.
The inspection
She stood before him weak-kneed and on the verge of trembling. Her nipples were hard from the coolness of the room and her excitement. Spreading her legs wide, she clasped her hands behind her head and cast her eyes downward. She could feel his approving eyes on her as he moved closer. She was completely naked but oddly did not feel any embarrassment. She wanted to please Him. She was born to please Him.
He slapped the tip of his riding crop hitting her inner thighs.
“Wider,” he said.
She gasped as he slapped it upward against her almost dripping pussy lips several times. Then moved it back and forth saw-like between her lips.
“You are very wet. This pleases me.”
She sighed. Little words of praise from him always felt like a warm jet spray of water against her pussy. Mere words, but his words affected her like no other.
He placed the crop longways across her mouth. Instinctively she bit down and held it there. His strong hands began pinching both nipples. Harder and harder until a moan escaped her lips.
“Whose breasts are these?” he asked.
“Yours Master,” she mouthed through the crop.
He circled around behind her. She felt a nibble on her shoulder. He took his index finger and ran it down from her hairline to her ass crack. She shivered.
He took the crop from her mouth.
“Hands to ankles,” he said.
She bent over fully. Two fingers roughly entered her wetness.
“Whose pussy is this?”
“Yours Master.”
“And what is its purpose?”
“To serve and to pleasure you Master.”
She felt a finger wet with her juices press against her anus. She bit her lip as He slid it all the way in.”
“And this?”
“Your ass, Master.”
“It’s purpose?”
“To serve and pleasure you, Master.”
bustyblondebombshell
Literotica Guru
- Joined
- Oct 12, 2003
- Posts
- 953
I'm liking the direction this is taking.........
and I'm sure I can stand like this, hands to ankles for as long as it takes to please..........
and I'm sure I can stand like this, hands to ankles for as long as it takes to please..........
WriterDom
Good to the last drop
- Joined
- Jun 25, 2000
- Posts
- 20,077
“On your knees, pet.”
Master’s cock was hard and pointing to the ceiling. Bouncing off her nose. She could smell her Master. It had been a month since she held his cock in her mouth. She had thought of little else. It was like his cock reached a G spot in her mouth she never knew she had.
“Lick my balls and you will be rewarded by the precum.”
She attacked his shaved ballsack like a hungry kitten licking milk. She pressed her face in tightly so she could breathe His scent. A trickle of juice escaped her pussy and ran down her thigh. She was happy. She was Home. But still her mouth felt empty. She craved the fullness. Wanting his heavy thick cock to reach her hungry throat.
Master’s cock was hard and pointing to the ceiling. Bouncing off her nose. She could smell her Master. It had been a month since she held his cock in her mouth. She had thought of little else. It was like his cock reached a G spot in her mouth she never knew she had.
“Lick my balls and you will be rewarded by the precum.”
She attacked his shaved ballsack like a hungry kitten licking milk. She pressed her face in tightly so she could breathe His scent. A trickle of juice escaped her pussy and ran down her thigh. She was happy. She was Home. But still her mouth felt empty. She craved the fullness. Wanting his heavy thick cock to reach her hungry throat.
bustyblondebombshell
Literotica Guru
- Joined
- Oct 12, 2003
- Posts
- 953
WriterDom said:
And i'll wait as long as it takes, just as you left me...
.... been working on that gag reflex too.....
WriterDom
Good to the last drop
- Joined
- Jun 25, 2000
- Posts
- 20,077
She attacked his shaved ballsack like a hungry kitten licking milk. She pressed her face in tightly so she could breathe His scent. A trickle of juice escaped her pussy and ran down her thigh. She was happy. But still her mouth felt empty. She craved the fullness. Wanting his heavy thick cock to reach her hungry throat.
“You may lick the shaft but not the head.”
Her tongue licked up and down the smooth skin of his cock. She gently cupped his balls in her hand. Her clit throbbed as she thought about the treasures within them. Master always came in abundance on his first orgasm. And even though Master was generous with her orgasms, nothing pleased her like his pleasure. For those 10 or 15 seconds she was euphoric. In those moments she felt fully his, grounded, like a long lost wanderer who found her way home.
A slow trickle of precum oozed from his glans. It was clear and always very sweet.
He had fed her precum before. But he wasn’t predictable. Each meeting brought on a different twist. Usually a delightful twist.
“Now that you’ve milked enough, I will apply it to your lips like lip gloss. But resist the urge to lick your lips.”
He rubbed the shinny cum across her lips and gave a smear under each nostril. She squirmed as she breathed him in. She wanted to be turned loose on his cock and give him pleasure. Suck him like no other woman had. Let him find pleasure both in her tongue and her throat. And get her just reward of squirt after squirt of his precious cum.
He helped her to her feet and lead her to the bed. He laid on his back and she sat beside him.
“May I offer you the service of my mouth now, Master. Please Sir.”
“Yes, since you asked so nicely.”
His hand tangled in her hair as she began sucking his rigid cock. Each time she breathed out she moaned with pleasure. The outside world could have caught fire and she would not have cared or noticed. She was doing her Kegals as she sucked Him. She could feel him growing harder. At the same time her orgasm was building. Amazing. Before Him, she rarely came from intercourse. Now she came from blow jobs. She looked up at Him pleading with her eyes. She knew she was allowed to cum, but only after feeling the first squirt paint the back of her throat.
“You may lick the shaft but not the head.”
Her tongue licked up and down the smooth skin of his cock. She gently cupped his balls in her hand. Her clit throbbed as she thought about the treasures within them. Master always came in abundance on his first orgasm. And even though Master was generous with her orgasms, nothing pleased her like his pleasure. For those 10 or 15 seconds she was euphoric. In those moments she felt fully his, grounded, like a long lost wanderer who found her way home.
A slow trickle of precum oozed from his glans. It was clear and always very sweet.
He had fed her precum before. But he wasn’t predictable. Each meeting brought on a different twist. Usually a delightful twist.
“Now that you’ve milked enough, I will apply it to your lips like lip gloss. But resist the urge to lick your lips.”
He rubbed the shinny cum across her lips and gave a smear under each nostril. She squirmed as she breathed him in. She wanted to be turned loose on his cock and give him pleasure. Suck him like no other woman had. Let him find pleasure both in her tongue and her throat. And get her just reward of squirt after squirt of his precious cum.
He helped her to her feet and lead her to the bed. He laid on his back and she sat beside him.
“May I offer you the service of my mouth now, Master. Please Sir.”
“Yes, since you asked so nicely.”
His hand tangled in her hair as she began sucking his rigid cock. Each time she breathed out she moaned with pleasure. The outside world could have caught fire and she would not have cared or noticed. She was doing her Kegals as she sucked Him. She could feel him growing harder. At the same time her orgasm was building. Amazing. Before Him, she rarely came from intercourse. Now she came from blow jobs. She looked up at Him pleading with her eyes. She knew she was allowed to cum, but only after feeling the first squirt paint the back of her throat.
WriterDom
Good to the last drop
- Joined
- Jun 25, 2000
- Posts
- 20,077
Under siege
the heart flutters
feeble knees betray legs
the Force before you
Hot as Sun yet
you do not melt
or burn
every neuron
keenly aware
never have you
such feelings
on edge, hoping
you survive a single touch
a caress of cheek
you want it all
not knowing entirely
what all is
only that the flood
long since washed you away
leaving you Mine
long before I ever touched you
before you even knew
you were simply, Mine
the heart flutters
feeble knees betray legs
the Force before you
Hot as Sun yet
you do not melt
or burn
every neuron
keenly aware
never have you
such feelings
on edge, hoping
you survive a single touch
a caress of cheek
you want it all
not knowing entirely
what all is
only that the flood
long since washed you away
leaving you Mine
long before I ever touched you
before you even knew
you were simply, Mine
WriterDom
Good to the last drop
- Joined
- Jun 25, 2000
- Posts
- 20,077
I need to smell the two percent fear
mixed with ninety-eight percent excitement
I need your strong will, while not broken
but bent in submission as you kneel
I want to guide my trembling pet
deeper into the mysterious caverns of her desire
I want a river of musk running licentious
torrents of ecstasy streaking tan thighs
I need screams like a wanton she-beast
nails raking crimson down my burly back
ending with
softhearted snuggling of two pressed as one
riding the sweet waves of euphoria
pastel giggles deep into the night
mixed with ninety-eight percent excitement
I need your strong will, while not broken
but bent in submission as you kneel
I want to guide my trembling pet
deeper into the mysterious caverns of her desire
I want a river of musk running licentious
torrents of ecstasy streaking tan thighs
I need screams like a wanton she-beast
nails raking crimson down my burly back
ending with
softhearted snuggling of two pressed as one
riding the sweet waves of euphoria
pastel giggles deep into the night
chun_gong
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Mar 8, 2006
- Posts
- 295
Ladies out there in "subbie land", jump on this Dom. (If you're local, all the better!!) He's a real catch, the kind you don't want to let get away! With his stong hand, firm guidance, and warm heart - you couldn't hope for anyone better.
j
(If you're local, all the better!!) He's a real catch, the kind you don't want to let get away! With his stong hand, firm guidance, and warm heart - you couldn't hope for anyone better. j__little_one
Experienced
- Joined
- Aug 31, 2006
- Posts
- 40
Do think I would please you, Sir? I'm just enjoying one of your stories ;-)
