lyrics for ya to read.....

[Valdimer]

ok, here are some lyrics that i have written for the band that im in, we dont have any music to this particular song yet, but still, i would like your feedback on this, tell me whatcha think! if it stinks, let me know, just be honest!

thanks!



Dominatrix


Bleedin for days
Mind peeled away
Anguish, agression
Let's start another session!

A session of pain and joy
The dominatrix toy
Beatin the livin shit outta you
What the fuck are you gonna do?

Scream you motherfucker
Just another goddamn sucker
Led by a chain all your life
I wanna hear you scream!

CHORUS

Dominatrix
She'll take you down
Fuck your mind
Leave you blind
Instruments of pain
You're just a bitch
What to do now?
She'll make ya twitch

Life barely sustaining
Yet another day
The grinding of the heavy metal
To an alternitive industrial hell!

She's the one you belive
Pools of blood on your sleeve
You still cry out for more
"Give it to me you fuckin whore!"

CHORUS

Crack the fuckin whip
Just dont let your mind slip
Keeps ya in the realms
of exstacy
Convulsions of pleasure
Come to me

I am the demon that drives her force
Her master of pain, of course
The dominatrix does my bidding
Of exstacy and sinning

She'll hurt you till you can't breathe
Anymore
Let you collapse and fall to the floor
Then I'll pick you up
And hang you from the chain
TIme for the session
To commence agian!

CHORUS
repeat, then end song

 

[Weevil]

I've changed my opinion on the D12 album. I kinda like it now. More hip hop should be fun like this.

 

[Nicole]

So Vladimer are you trying to tell us your a submissive?

Or maybe a sub at heart ..... Hmmmmmmmmm Me thinks you like pain too

This post was edited because I spelt Vladimer's name wrong, I'm sorry and it won't happen again.

 

[Valdimer]

pain is only good if its pleasurable, as far as me being submissive, i can only smile sheapishly and say, no. lol

 

[Valdimer]

if anyone would like me to slap some more lyrics on here, i have a shitload more, just let me know. now i need a cigarette........

 

[Valdimer]

due to popular demand, here are some more lyrics for ya....


The Metal and The Man

You've read about him in the papers
You ee his face on T.V.
And that this path of killing
Makes its mark on history

"I want to feel your blood
running down my fingers
as the warmness fades away.
I wanna taste it down inside me,
While your body slowly decays."

Those words were spoken
To invoke fear inside
The intensity is quite clear
You've never felt him so near

CHORUS
The hair on your neck stands high
The adrenaline starts to flow
Your the next victim on his list
Soon death will attempt the final kiss

The deadbolt stands no chance
You take your last and final glance
Hearing the footsteps coming
Your heart begins its pumping

He bursts through the door
Thier bodies collapse on the floor
The knife is pulled, held oh so high
You know now, this is your last goodbye

CHORUS

Your arms pinned against the bed
The knife circles around your head
The blade runs down your skin
The metal and the man commit the sin

CHORUS

Fresh blood dripping down
From the face and running down the blade
Your body will lay lifeless
Forever more, in the grave

He cleans the steel
The blood is wiped away
But his lust for this wont end
Until his final day

There's stains on the wall
More blood will surely fall
You hear the children crying
In pain there's only dieing

It's all my twisted mind
To inflict pain upon mankind
I leave the crimson on the wall
I'm sure I must kill them all!

CHORUS

instrumental fade till end of song