More Mature Stories?

[sirhugs]

I love mature themed stories. A lot has to do with my penchant for older men when I was younger and my thrill at a younger man now that I'm more mature. To quote Joni Mitchell, "I've looked at life from both sides now" and I realize I know a thing or two about being the younger woman and then later being the older woman. This inspired me to write story where I could explore the not one mature relationship, but two and see the story from the POV of a younger woman and an older male and also, a younger man and an older woman.

My intention was to make it a quick read. Kind of a Hallmark kind of story, but I got deep in the weeds with the sex. Each scene I wrote goes far too long and into too much detail. But it all feels necessary. And then I decided that the two mature members of these trysts, would have not only more experience, but far less inhibitions. And so I chose to go for it. That said, this story pushes the boundaries of the MATURE genre, and I know I should have cut something out. But I'll be damned if It know what that is because every groan and moan just works.

The story is THE RIGHT WRONG PERSON and I am anxious to see what people on this thread think.

better to post to story feedback than story ideas .

 

[KindredFlame]

I thought this was an idea?

 

[KentBloke63]

I'm slowly working through the alphabet with my Fuck Older Women Near You! series. A twentyish young man sleeping with a succession of mature (and very experienced) ladies.

Any link?

 

[KindredFlame]

Any link?

Great idea for a story. I was watching something last night on some porn channel when the advert for fucking older women advertise came up. I thought about trying a story, but I think it would be better done by a bloke.

 

[000zing]

I can't remember which thread it was from some fair while back - about a predatory older (married) couple who make a play for much younger couples almost as a hobby. Individual (unknowing) seduction scenes or foursomes, various scenarios possible.

 

[Rob_Royale]

I can't remember which thread it was from some fair while back - about a predatory older (married) couple who make a play for much younger couples almost as a hobby. Individual (unknowing) seduction scenes or foursomes, various scenarios possible.

It's a great idea. I have a story in the works that features such a couple. They are both business owners and employ young people. Their favorites get invited for weekends at their place in the country. The wife is very dominant and bi and she brings her newest female employee who she knows had a crush on her husband when she was their babysitter. He brings a young stud that his wife has already enraptured but not yet fucked. The young people knew each other in HS and have a history too which makes things even hotter.

 

[000zing]

Pretty well exactly that kind of thing. Could it work with teenage sweethearts, even? The older couple plan to fuck each unbeknownst to the other... until the big reveal when presumably the starry-eyed youngsters realise their mutual infidelity. Great fun.

 

[OldDog_NewTricks]

Elizabeth Taylor was asked once about having eight failed marriages. Her response was something to the effect of...

"I haven't had eight failed marriages. I've had eight different marriages at eight different stages of my life."

I can see a story in there somewhere, but don't have the talent to write it.

 

[sirhugs]

Elizabeth Taylor was asked once about having eight failed marriages. Her response was something to the effect of...

"I haven't had eight failed marriages. I've had eight different marriages at eight different stages of my life."

I can see a story in there somewhere, but don't have the talent to write it.

don't sell yourself short. give it a try. Enlist a beta reader or two, then an editor. You just might surprise yourself.

 

[Reenigam]

Pretty well exactly that kind of thing. Could it work with teenage sweethearts, even? The older couple plan to fuck each unbeknownst to the other... until the big reveal when presumably the starry-eyed youngsters realise their mutual infidelity. Great fun.

Kind of cruel but, yes, I like the scheming element here. Nice, juicy description of the young girl being deflowered and how the lady takes her satisfaction from the boyfriend. I can guess how embarrassed the two youngsters are when realisation sets in!

The devil would be in the detail and how you set it up.

 

[Carnevil9]

Any link?

Sure it's in my signature. Try here: https://www.literotica.com/authors/Carnevil9/works/stories

The stories all have "Fuck Older Women Near You For Free" in the titles.

Don't signatures show for anyone else?

 

[KindredFlame]

Elizabeth Taylor was asked once about having eight failed marriages. Her response was something to the effect of...

"I haven't had eight failed marriages. I've had eight different marriages at eight different stages of my life."

I can see a story in there somewhere, but don't have the talent to write it.

Liz Taylor and Richard Burton is a story in itself. I don’t mean to official story either.

 

[Smiling4you]

Sure it's in my signature. Try here: https://www.literotica.com/authors/Carnevil9/works/stories

The stories all have "Fuck Older Women Near You For Free" in the titles.

Don't signatures show for anyone else?

There is a choice under preferences in each person's account to see signatures

 

[SteelPoint]

Pretty well exactly that kind of thing. Could it work with teenage sweethearts, even? The older couple plan to fuck each unbeknownst to the other... until the big reveal when presumably the starry-eyed youngsters realise their mutual infidelity. Great fun.

Very much so. The age difference would add something extra, IMHO. Nowhere near enough older people appearing either in stories or videos.

 

[KindredFlame]

They often say age is just a number. Myself at 25 and my wife being 40 I included her in as many stories as I can. But in our lifestyle club we have more than a few older couples. Ok there skin might not me a taut as it once was and there are few more lines and wrinkles. They all enjoy mixing with different generations. When being double teamed by an elderly couple I always know I am in for a good time, as with age cums experience.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Don't signatures show for anyone else?

When I'm on my phone on these forums I cannot see signature lines. Only on my PC.

 

[KindredFlame]

Being female I find it difficult to find older women to have some fun with(except within our club environment) however I was shopping a few days ago and I was asked out by the till assistant. I was taken aback to be honest because I have shopped in this store for the last 7 years and this elderly woman has always been polite, she knows me and my wife by first names and we know her family, some intimately. I never knew she was interested in female sexual companionship. But when she and I had coffee a few days later she explained that she had been forced to marry when she became pregnant by a family member (non consensually) she had always wanted a woman’s touch but back then it was unheard of and illegal. We have not yet gone any further but time will tell.