My 200th submission

1400 words in on the silent auction story, so guessing I'm giving this a go.

So far what I know for sure is that this won't be a 750 word stroker. I have populated it with two females and six males. But it might still be a stroker. My FMC seems to be letting her freak flag fly. Still uncertain whether to have her pull a train or whether each of the two women "pairs" off with three of the guys - and if so, whether they get simultaneous airtights.
also still puzzling over an incest angle (thinking I will not go there), but definitely expect the two women to pleasure one another.

If this continues to success, it will be number 199, and that means that the parked insomnia story will become number 200,and, because the MMC is a Literotica writer, it sort of fits the "meta" flavour suggested by some. it also pulls together multiple themes present in my past writings. Not all of them, but many. I took out the watersports bit, because it just didn't fit. And no TM has appeared so far.
 
Decided to go a different way.

Have published as number 199 a How To essay on Writing In-Law Incest. It grew out of a DM conversation with a fellow member, an excellent and experienced writer, who was embarking on writing their first incest story, and asked me for some tips. It is suitable for the milestone journey because even after so many stories, this is a new category for me, and ties back to my frequent ventures into incest erotica writing.

So the insomnia story, already ready to go, will be number 200. I will just wait a few days to submit.

Intend to continue on with the silent auction story, hoping that 200 is a milestone, not a requiem. I started a thread over on the AH seeking assistance with a problem I'm having with that one, if you are interested. Trying to figure out how to work in the separate scene where the son goes off and makes love to the caterer . They later return to the main group. But is the separate scene a separate story? If not, how do I manage the transition to it?
 
Decided to go a different way.

Have published as number 199 a How To essay on Writing In-Law Incest. It grew out of a DM conversation with a fellow member, an excellent and experienced writer, who was embarking on writing their first incest story, and asked me for some tips. It is suitable for the milestone journey because even after so many stories, this is a new category for me, and ties back to my frequent ventures into incest erotica writing.

So the insomnia story, already ready to go, will be number 200. I will just wait a few days to submit.

Intend to continue on with the silent auction story, hoping that 200 is a milestone, not a requiem. I started a thread over on the AH seeking assistance with a problem I'm having with that one, if you are interested. Trying to figure out how to work in the separate scene where the son goes off and makes love to the caterer . They later return to the main group. But is the separate scene a separate story? If not, how do I manage the transition to it?
Nice work!

So this other story, my thoughts aren't all that different now than before. I think it's a separate chapter if the events that transpire away from the main story don't directly impact it. You want to decide how narrow you want to focus the main story and submission. If the side stuff isn't really playing all that big a role in the main story, including it in the submission could interrupt the flow and distract from the action. If it's more a side route and self-contained little romp before we get back to the main action, then I'd think it makes more sense to separate it out into a separate submission, chapter 2, or chapter 1.5, however you want to label it. If it's a separate submission, you don't really need much of a transition, it's more written out as a self-contained unit, then when you get back to the main story, you're more picking up from where the first chapter left off, rather than from where chapter 2/1.5 left off.
 
and they said I'd never live to see the day...
not really. never discuss my erotic writings with the medical team.
I did have a lady friend with whom I shared my secret identity back in the day when I got sick. She claimed to love my stories, but always said that I was going to live... darn it.
but she vanished during COVID never to be seen again.

Which must have a story angle somehow- everything in my life seems to.
 
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