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If you want the best pharmaceuticals you invite second cousin thrice removed Myrtle, who is a chemist.
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Hypoxia
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You don't know my cousin Jeanne and her imprisoned BF like I do. Prime stuff.
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One throws in uppers, the other adds downers, resulting in an alcohol-flavored speedball mix. An uncle with throat cancer can be given spiked enemas. Watch out when the shit hits the fan.
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Many shitty stories here. And I usually skip the Fetish and Anal categories so I'm unsure how much fecal fiction exists. Fuck the shit right out of a guy, hey?
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so you miss the watersports too?
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I write of lovers pissing on each others' feet in the shower. Close enough.
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two fetishes in one!
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No, just organic anti-fungal medication.
Q: If athletes get Athletes' Foot, what do astronauts get?
A: Missile toe.
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sounds like time to start the Winter Holidays contest entry.
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I'm new here, so sorry if a month is considered a dead thread. Figured I'd pipe up because I've got two stories on the go that have become much more involved than I expected. Point being, one is this theme exactly.
Protag runs into ex's sister. Has been years in between. I initially just ran with where the flow took me. Dived straight into the meat of it and found it interesting to play this one like they never really got on previously. So there's tensions involving dominance and real intentions.
Came back around to fully fleshing out the meeting and reasons for it all. Ended up deciding on the sister seeking revenge for something/things. Haven't decided if it's cleaner to just leave it vague or dive into details. Best I can think of might be that her sister (the ex) is the favourite, the golden child relatively, and this sister's partly resentful of her happily marrying earlier, and partly due to family dramas, parents give her shit about various things etc.
At this point, the offer is essentially, she'll scratch his back and wishes for protag to be her plus one to the wedding. He has zero interest, so she offers to provide incentive. Things progress, some walls come down. I've reached a point where they're both now really into it, and aware of the other enjoying it, but they're keeping up the vibe of them being hostile towards each other.
It's already grown to be far more than I thought I'd manage, so I could just leave it as its current, set up and action sequences, ending up where it is now and they're both very willing. Feels like it might be interesting to explore a Part 2 where protag goes through attending the wedding, and the confusion and bullshit that would occur, with potential oddities and bumps in various roads.
I've already thought of one potential spanner to throw in the works. Protag is currently comfortably over the ex, which is part of why they were so reluctant to engage in drama. But seeing her again could be either proof this wasn't true, or the total opposite, and the sister enters into something less casual with him, turning it all nuclear. It could also be twisted further to being the real revenge is actually that the sister is aware the ex has doubts about the wedding, with lingering feelings about protag and maybe mistakes were made. So it could be revealed the sister has been corrupting any chance of that happening smoothly.
I feel like it's less realistic to have the ex be iffy about her current relationship though. Might be cleaner to just have the sister be using the protag in a, drop the bomb and watch the chaos kinda way. And even then, it could result in them parting neutrally or entering into something more than they expected.
This and another are my first two goes at stories, so I haven't got any previous examples to check out. But I'm interested in any and all opinions on what sounds more interesting etc.
Protag runs into ex's sister. Has been years in between. I initially just ran with where the flow took me. Dived straight into the meat of it and found it interesting to play this one like they never really got on previously. So there's tensions involving dominance and real intentions.
Came back around to fully fleshing out the meeting and reasons for it all. Ended up deciding on the sister seeking revenge for something/things. Haven't decided if it's cleaner to just leave it vague or dive into details. Best I can think of might be that her sister (the ex) is the favourite, the golden child relatively, and this sister's partly resentful of her happily marrying earlier, and partly due to family dramas, parents give her shit about various things etc.
At this point, the offer is essentially, she'll scratch his back and wishes for protag to be her plus one to the wedding. He has zero interest, so she offers to provide incentive. Things progress, some walls come down. I've reached a point where they're both now really into it, and aware of the other enjoying it, but they're keeping up the vibe of them being hostile towards each other.
It's already grown to be far more than I thought I'd manage, so I could just leave it as its current, set up and action sequences, ending up where it is now and they're both very willing. Feels like it might be interesting to explore a Part 2 where protag goes through attending the wedding, and the confusion and bullshit that would occur, with potential oddities and bumps in various roads.
I've already thought of one potential spanner to throw in the works. Protag is currently comfortably over the ex, which is part of why they were so reluctant to engage in drama. But seeing her again could be either proof this wasn't true, or the total opposite, and the sister enters into something less casual with him, turning it all nuclear. It could also be twisted further to being the real revenge is actually that the sister is aware the ex has doubts about the wedding, with lingering feelings about protag and maybe mistakes were made. So it could be revealed the sister has been corrupting any chance of that happening smoothly.
I feel like it's less realistic to have the ex be iffy about her current relationship though. Might be cleaner to just have the sister be using the protag in a, drop the bomb and watch the chaos kinda way. And even then, it could result in them parting neutrally or entering into something more than they expected.
This and another are my first two goes at stories, so I haven't got any previous examples to check out. But I'm interested in any and all opinions on what sounds more interesting etc.
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There's definitely going to be a lot of drama in this kind of story, it only depends on what kind you want. Is this a kind of revenge story where the ex sleeps with her sister, or a sibling rivalry situation, or maybe they do fall in love and they have to work at the relationship being accepted by her family. A lot of possibilities.
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"Little sister, don't you kiss me once or twice, and say it's very nice, and then you run
Little sister, don't you do what your big sister done."
--Elvis
Then there's the old U.G. cartoon of a street tramp who saves a society girl from a plummeting piano or the like. To reward him for his brave action, she takes him home to the McMansion, showers with him, and gives him fresh clothes. And sex. Society girl's little sister rewards him also, with sex. Then society girl's mother. Then society girl's dad presents himself, trousers dropped, bent over. That's when street tramp runs...Little sister, don't you do what your big sister done."
--Elvis
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What about, the sis has a thing for ex new groom herself, and that's why she's seeking to blow it. Therefore the happy ending becomes a stable quad of sisters and both guys.
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To be honest, I hadn't even branched out that far thinking about it. I've actively tried to keep things pretty simple so I don't get muddled. But any of this would be in a second entry. Which is part of what's making me think a part 2 would be interesting to explore. Part 1's mainly about convincing the protag to go along with things.
But, there is an element of that. Less specifically with the groom himself and more just a general theme of jealousy that the sister is marrying before her. I haven't specified in the story as I don't think it really matters, but in my head the active sister is younger than the other. So there's a theme of the ex being naturally "ahead" of her in life. I've touched on the parents being pushy or an irritation in a way that makes this sister feel like she's under pressure to find someone herself and overall be more like the other. So there's an undercurrent of this all being a rebellion against all of that. I'm imagining a possible wedding sequence being a bit of a cat amongst the pigeons.
Hah good point. I don't think I'll go down the second route with this story. I've imagined it being the opposite, with them being furious. Definitely need to consider how the parents would factor into it though. Protag's mentioned the family would find it weird, but it's the mother who may take a swing at him. So the first bit is definitely in there.
Partly wanting to keep it focused on the sister so it's only one ball to juggle. Something to consider though, with a twist or turn. Can take it a step at a time and leave the door open for a later addition if I continue.
Appreciate the feed back.
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parents could be a sequel.
