My story idea

[BedtimeStories77]

You boys are perverts. God, I luv ya!

 

[Flashlight7.5]

one problem

Two questions need to be answered if the writer goes with the original premise of the girl seducing two of her father's friends and then the father (following by a fourway with them and the girl):

1. Why is she seducing the two friends? Is it just for sex, or is there another purpose?

2. Why aren't the friends freaking out and reporting the father to the police once he jumps on the pile?

 

[AsylumSeeker]

BL (Before Lit)

Back in the day, before Lit, when imaginative young studs were forced to pen stories for personal pleasure, I wrote a story like this. In my mind the father's head (job) was on the chopping block. So the daughter(s) having heard of the father's career demise hurriedly sought an appointment with the boss (or the boss was invited into the home, depending on the version) and was surreptitiously pleasured unbeknownst to the father in a very erotic way.

The girls could be twins, too.

Looking for a twist? Maybe the boss is a woman, prefers girls. Or is the mother of a love-child?

 

[sirhugs]

Two questions need to be answered if the writer goes with the original premise of the girl seducing two of her father's friends and then the father (following by a fourway with them and the girl):

1. Why is she seducing the two friends? Is it just for sex, or is there another purpose?

2. Why aren't the friends freaking out and reporting the father to the police once he jumps on the pile?

#2 is easy...cause they want more of her. and don't want their deeds revealed.

#1 is a range of possibles....cause she wants to try 2 at once? cause she secretly wants Dad but wants to try older guys first? cause she wants to compare their cocks? cause she's seen the outliine of their cocks when they look at her in her bikini and know they are huge? to validate her own uncertain sexuality? as a sorority initiation?

 

[GuyJD]

ok so this is the basic idea of a story i have been thinking of writing
young girl seduces 2 of her daddy's freinds into double teaming her. unknown to her, her father catches them but doesn't them know. then when confronted she seduces daddy as well. thats the basic plot. what do you think? any suggestions?

Personally, I like the idea. You can call it, "Daddy's Little Princess" and she can be an 18 year old who's trying to make, what she thinks is, grown up decisions since she's in college. You know? The rebellious type of teen.

You mentioned a "young girl" so I'm assuming you meant 18 yrs. old or older, since this site will not post an underage type story. If, however, your idea refers to an underaged participant (which I don't particularly write about), there are other sites that would accept that story. PM me if you need to know of them.

 

[GuyJD]

Back in the day, before Lit, when imaginative young studs were forced to pen stories for personal pleasure, I wrote a story like this. In my mind the father's head (job) was on the chopping block. So the daughter(s) having heard of the father's career demise hurriedly sought an appointment with the boss (or the boss was invited into the home, depending on the version) and was surreptitiously pleasured unbeknownst to the father in a very erotic way.

The girls could be twins, too.

Looking for a twist? Maybe the boss is a woman, prefers girls. Or is the mother of a love-child?

I actually read a story like this, except it was the guy's wife who seduced the boss instead of the daughter, in order to help her hubby keep his job.