Naughty School Girl

[BlackSnake]

Re: Snake's story

660 words....Edit it a bit, tuck it there, add a set up and ending, then please submit....I'll vote "5"

You think it will make a good story?

 

[sirhugs]

Re: Re: Snake's story

You think it will make a good story?

It got me warm just reading it. It is a tad cliche, and your dialogue could use some spicing up, but its a great start.

 

[BlackSnake]

Re: Re: Re: Snake's story

It got me warm just reading it. It is a tad cliche, and your dialogue could use some spicing up, but its a great start.

Thanks, I'll work on that. Maybe read one of those romance novels or something.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

660 words....

did you count them by yourself, or is there a place with an "auto count" ? It would really help to know how many words are in a story, without having to count each one of them.

Overall, the story is not bad, and I think it isn't uncommon. A young student makes a deal with a professor: sex against better grades.

And maybe there could be a 2nd part. I mean, at first, the girl has sex with the professor until she gets an A.

But someone (like the principal) notices: This girl changed her grades from F to A ... that's very suspicious. He orders her to his office and starts to ask.

So, either she instantly tells him, that she had sex with the professor, or she could say something about "learning a lot". Anyway, in the end, she could try the same deal: "You can have sex with me, if you don't tell anyone about my cheating" ...

 

[sirhugs]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Snake's story

Thanks, I'll work on that. Maybe read one of those romance novels or something.

just go to Lit stories and read a while- try " top stories".

 

[BlackSnake]

I'll do it.

 

[Guest]

did you count them by yourself, or is there a place with an "auto count" ? It would really help to know how many words are in a story, without having to count each one of them.

Any good word processing program should have word count built in, as well as spell/grammar checker.