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[evildigz]

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I just posted my first story "New Material", in the Lesbian section:

http://www.literotica.com/s/new-material

It's about four college age women who try out lingerie made from a high tech material. I tried to keep the story plausible, but it's probably a little over the top.

I'd like to improve my writing and I'm very open to criticism.

 

[NymphMyosotis]

Hello to you all, I am new here.

I would like to introduce myself here to you, fellow writers and readers. I am an aspiring writer who loves to write short erotic stories on the side. I posted my first story yesterday and I am quite pleased with the reviews it is getting. I guess my slightly ambiguous ending leaves many hoping to see more, which makes me wonder if I should write a sequel.

In the SciFi and Fantasy Section : Inside His World
http://www.literotica.com/s/inside-his-world

The story is about a woman, who, during her visit to a strange old mansion in the middle of the forest, becomes very unsettled when she meets her mysterious and charismatic host.

 

[NymphMyosotis]

In Reply to #2631 Innuendos

I read your story and posted a comment. ) Good work, you write beautifully!

Not sure how this replying works. It looks more like an independent post. ??

 

[Etaski]

I read your story and posted a comment. ) Good work, you write beautifully!

Not sure how this replying works. It looks more like an independent post. ??

You can click the "quote" button on the post you're replying to instead so there's no mistake about to whom you are replying, if you want it public.

Or, alternatively, you can click on Innuendos name and select "send a pm" and tell him/her privately instead. Your choice.

And congratulations on the first story and good reviews. First glance looks a bit like romance, yes? Cool.

 

[NymphMyosotis]

Testing

You can click the "quote" button on the post you're replying to instead so there's no mistake about to whom you are replying, if you want it public.

Or, alternatively, you can click on Innuendos name and select "send a pm" and tell him/her privately instead. Your choice.

And congratulations on the first story and good reviews. First glance looks a bit like romance, yes? Cool.

Ooops thanks. :$ Sorry for being such a Newbie.

Thank you for looking up my story. It might have a little touch of romance but it is slightly creepy fantasy.

 

[Etaski]

Ooops thanks. :$ Sorry for being such a Newbie.

No worries and no apologies; we've all been there. Your turn of phrase was just a little different and made me chuckle.

Thank you for looking up my story. It might have a little touch of romance but it is slightly creepy fantasy.

Ah-haaah, you're right; I was only searching key words the first time (mostly romance words, and considering the story I just submitted today, it was a bit of a contrast....).

But on second look, yes, a little romance, definitely sensual, and fairly creepy. Rrrrrr. You're going to have to explain that race more.

 

[NymphMyosotis]

No worries and no apologies; we've all been there. Your turn of phrase was just a little different and made me chuckle.


Ah-haaah, you're right; I was only searching key words the first time (mostly romance words, and considering the story I just submitted today, it was a bit of a contrast....).

But on second look, yes, a little romance, definitely sensual, and fairly creepy. Rrrrrr. You're going to have to explain that race more.

Yeah, I know. It has a lot of people wondering and at the same time, the problem is that it's slightly based on the book I'm presently writing, so giving it away might spoil the surprise element. I'll have to think about it. I could tell you in a private message.

 

[Etaski]

Yeah, I know. It has a lot of people wondering and at the same time, the problem is that it's slightly based on the book I'm presently writing, so giving it away might spoil the surprise element. I'll have to think about it. I could tell you in a private message.

*scratches chin* It depends on whether you plan to post more stories here that develop them (in which case I can wait like everyone else), or if that was all you planned to do until you finish your book.

If that was it, then yeah, pm me, I won't tell nobody.

 

[SweetDreemz]

My latest story is about a young girl who goes to work out of high school and is around older men for the first time. When she is surprised to find them ogling her, she starts dressing to encourage it, then seduces an older man. Lots of exhibitionism and masturbation (male and female).

Please let me know how you like it.

http://www.literotica.com/s/young-tease

 

[nicecthulhu]

Hi. My latest story was posted.
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-doctors-daughter
It's an erotic romance set in Canada (Upper Canada for you fellow Canucks) during the War of 1812.
Oh, and a very belated thank you to Dual_Triode for my previous submission.

 

[TNP_]

New story posted

Chapter 4 of Love in an Elevator has posted. Here's the link -

http://www.literotica.com/s/love-in-an-elevator-ch-04


And for anyone that might have missed the first 3 chapters here are the links to those -

http://www.literotica.com/s/love-in-an-elevator-ch-01

http://www.literotica.com/s/love-in-an-elevator-ch-02-1

http://www.literotica.com/s/love-in-an-elevator-ch-03

As always I'd love to know what you think of them, good or bad. Feedback, even in the form of a vote for the story, is always appreciated.

So this is it for my archive. I have no more completed stories to post. Well, not exactly. I have a few more stories that I won't post here because they are part of series that I started but have no intention of ever finishing.

And the only other story I have is a Harry Potter story which I cannot post here. Literotica apparently does not allow HP stories on the site.

So this is the end for now, until I have completed something new. And that, as anyone who reads the afterwords I usually include with a story, could be a long time coming, although I will do my best to finish the two multi-part stories I have posted here as quickly as I can.

Thanks for reading -

TNP

 

[moonlight84]

Hello,
My first story just got approved yesterday:

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-runaway-aristocrat

I hope you can give me a feedback. What you like and especially what you don´t like as it will help me to improve my writing. Thanks in advance!

 

[AnnaHouseWife]

Sexual Autobiography: Confessions of a Teenage Housewife

Hi everyone. I'm writing a book about my sexual awakening as a woman. It's called "Confessions of a Teenage Housewife," and it's true short stories. You can read a excerpt of the 1st story.

It will be available in April. I would love feedback. Thank you all in advance!

Anna

 

[gregy70]

I'll give it a read Anna. Bride at 18..Wow!

 

[kromen]

I'm submitting a sequel to Liquid Bullets in 24 hrs. My characters deserve it, and so do the few people that saw the first story. I'll come back when it gets approved, but would love to have more people check out part 1. It's a non-con, but in an unconventional way. Let me know what you think.

 

[Innuendos]

I read your story and posted a comment. ) Good work, you write beautifully!

Stopped by top update on my work and saw this - Sorry, I didn't realize you'd responded here to my posts - thanks for the feedback! I've read some of yours as well, excellent writing. Digging the romance genre, here.

Anyway, to the original point for those keeping up, or those who don't read a work until it's been finished:

***

"Sweet Dreams Are Made of This" is now a completed work of 12 chapters, spanning a 12-month period in the lives of Jahn Halvers, Jennifer Reed, and Fiona Reed. Written in the Romance genre, it is intended to portray in a reasonably realistic fashion a unique kind of relationship, examining cause and effect, and the motivations of those involved.

My writing is story-intensive, so expect that while there is all the usual varying flavors of sex and sexuality, it's intended to be an erotic complement to the main work.

The story starts here:
http://www.literotica.com/s/sweet-dreams-are-made-of-this-ch-01

** edits

and the Final chapter is now processed:
http://www.literotica.com/s/sweet-dreams-are-made-of-this-ch-12

 

[kromen]

Chapter 2 of Liquid Bullets is up. Detective Almond tracks down the last femme fatale of the Succubus Crew, far South of the border. Here is the link, and the first part is in my signature.
http://www.literotica.com/s/liquid-bullets-ch-02

 

[oOScarletWingsOo]

Two for two on the monthly contests this year with Forces of Nature.

It's a quick read.

Comments welcomed.

 

[HandsInTheDark]

Becoming Marie

http://www.literotica.com/s/becoming-marie-1

First submission here. It's longish. It contains many non-consensual elements, but the point of the story is to explore the line between consent and non-consent, and it's intended to be a little disturbing and thought-provoking in that regard. And while I'd consider it a romance story, in a dark sense, there's a notable absence of candles, flowers and chocolates. My goal is to write a non-consent story that women will respond to with, if not hot, wet arousal, at least a sort of uneasy erotic fascination.

The opening scene will put some people off (electric shocks are involved), but the rest of the story is considerably softer than that. That said, if "ruthless bastard" isn't an adjective you like applied to men, please skip this story.

It's filed under sci-fi, but the science aspect intrudes very little, I promise.

 

[EctoJohn]

A Walk on the Beach

I just got my newest story accepted, the first one I wrote in almost 2 years.
I'm hoping people will read it and enjoy.

A Walk on the Beach

It's a short story about a man's exhibitionism at the hands of his lover during the coarse of an evening told from his point of view.

 

[JayDavid]

The Lake House Lessons

I just got my first submission approved and would love feedback. It is the first chapter of a longer story about a virgin who is about to graduate high school, and how his life begins to change.

Here's the link.

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-lake-house-lessons-01

Jay David

 

[Rainyday10]

The Gardner

Hey there!

I'm Jane, and I'm new to Literotica I've just had my first story approved, and it would be great if you could check it out, and if you like it do keep an eye out for more to come! All feedback is welcome also! Thanks so much!

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-gardener-15

'The Gardener' - in the Romance category - Is a 2 page story about old childhood friends, Crystal and Jared, who unexpectedly reunite in a very..well, adult way

 

[JayDavid]

The Lake House Lessons

Chapter 2 of The Lake House Lessons has just been posted. Let me know what you think.

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-lake-house-lessons-02

Jay David

 

[SuedeKitten]

Menagerie Ch. 01

Hi guys,

Long term lurker here, although I've only recently joined. Like several others posting on this thread recently, I've just had my first submission approved (I'm extremely happy) and would like to share it with you:

http://www.literotica.com/s/menagerie-ch-01

It's primarily a non-consent/reluctance story with a sprinkling of bdsm. I hope you like it and I'm looking forward to writing (and reading) more in the future.

Cheers!

 

[RedButterflySlut]

Hi guys,

Long term lurker here, although I've only recently joined. Like several others posting on this thread recently, I've just had my first submission approved (I'm extremely happy) and would like to share it with you:

http://www.literotica.com/s/menagerie-ch-01

It's primarily a non-consent/reluctance story with a sprinkling of bdsm. I hope you like it and I'm looking forward to writing (and reading) more in the future.

Cheers!

I really enjoyed it a lot! The concept was hot, and I like how brought the main character from reluctance to enjoying herself. There was also a bit of suspense and fear in the beginning, which tied it in nicely.