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I posted my first story, and am seeking honest feedback about the plot, and the writing quality.

Since it is "Loving Wives" themed, it triggered quite a flurry of comments from folks that read stories with themes that they detest, and from those who do not understand what "fiction" is.

I hope that you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it :)

https://www.literotica.com/s/taking-back-the-hall-pass
 
I posted my first story, and am seeking honest feedback about the plot, and the writing quality.

Since it is "Loving Wives" themed, it triggered quite a flurry of comments from folks that read stories with themes that they detest, and from those who do not understand what "fiction" is.

I hope that you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it :)

https://www.literotica.com/s/taking-back-the-hall-pass
Feel free to delete their comments.
I keep the constructive critical comments and delete the ones from those demented creepers. They thrive on seeing their vitriol postings and it’s quite satisfying to make them simply disappear.
 
https://www.literotica.com/s/i-know-whats-coming

My first story!! Also I turned off comments for a while how can I put the back on and how do I read them?
On your author home page, in the menu on the left side of the screen, is Works. Go to Works, Stories, Published Stories, and click on the gear next to your story. A popup will appear, which lets you turn on and off comments (and voting).

Also, my story "Still Picture" has just been published. I'm really proud of it, but I suspect only a minority of Literotica fans will like something mostly written in period speech. Are you one of them? Take a look.

-Billie
 
A new story; it is about cheating and betrayal.

https://classic.literotica.com/s/my-year-with-michelle-ch-02

Michelle's house in Queens probably looks like this. But while this probably would go for about $50,000 in 1975, the date of the story, it is now listed for $1.3 million!

https://ssl.cdn-redfin.com/photo/269/bigphoto/664/3563664_0.jpg

The elevated station in Queensboro Plaza, which appears late in the story.

https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/a/a4/Queens_Plaza_station_5BBT_jeh.JPG
 
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I posted my first story, and am seeking honest feedback about the plot, and the writing quality.

Since it is "Loving Wives" themed, it triggered quite a flurry of comments from folks that read stories with themes that they detest, and from those who do not understand what "fiction" is.

I hope that you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it :)

https://www.literotica.com/s/taking-back-the-hall-pass
You'll notice that most of the complainers are anonymous, but not all of them. After years of watching this, I think there are a lot of readers who secretly enjoy this but claim otherwise.
 
New to the forums, and to be honest, a little anxious about advertising my story here, but am interested to give it a go anyway.

So far I've written 2 CFNM stories, each with 2 chapters so far.

The first was a complete fabrication (which will be obvious) but a cheeky bit of fun, called "A Very CFNM physiotherapy - part 1 here, and part 2 here"

The second story, written more recently, is a true story. Once again the theme is CFNM (though I swear I have other interests as well), entitled "From Sweetness to Naughtiness - part 1 here, and part 2 here"

That's all for now. Thanks for reading this post.
 
Tiafell - The Femboy Elf Chapter 14 is live!

Tiafell and his friends take this chapter off, this one is the bad guys' time to shine!

Gashua and Adrui, the two kingdoms that govern the world, call a truce and form a joint army in an attempt to stop the threat that Trista and her forces pose to the entire world. Unfortunately, their enemies are prepared for them when they arrive at Basilix Castle, their home base and a fierce bloody battle begins. We'll get to see what Tiafell and his friends are truly up against, all I will say is "yikes"! Later, Alto and Vasati finally return after being absent for a few chapters but trouble finds them as well.

Since this chapter involves a clash between armies in a fantasy setting, it's the most violent chapter yet. While it's clear that thousands die in horrific ways, it isn't super detailed either, worse is seen on cable TV honestly.

Anyway, hope you enjoy, comments and feedback are welcome!
 
Tiafell - The Femboy Elf Ch. 15 is live!

Tiafell and his friends arrive at Steelweld, the Amazon Village to receive training in the art of melee combat as per Marlon's instruction. After having an audience with Cleyene the Chieftess, the four youths begin the first step in their evaluation to determine their training regimens and if they are even worth training at all. Let's just say this first step is... "unusual". They'd better rest while they can because in the next chapter, they are going to get pounded into the dirt and not in a sexy way!

Anyway, hope you enjoy! Comments and feedback are welcome!
 
New story published today.

The Turbulence Club

I know it's been done but it is every red-blooded American Male's fantasy and I wanted to put my own spin on it.

Let me know what you think!
 
My newest story is up: Upstream. A hiker finds a hidden slice of paradise.

I tried something different here, with lots of deliberately descriptive language to evoke a sense of place.
 
Hi all! I just published my first story here!

Dimensional Analysis: the story of two women servicing patrons at a sex club using portal devices.

If this sounds like your cup of tea, I’d love to hear what you think of it! Thanks!
 
Awhile ago Sweetnpetite proposed a thread where authors could notify readers and other writers of new postings and give a brief description of their stories. It was a great idea, but the thread's since faded into oblivion. This is a resurrection.

Feel free to post notifications and ads for new stories here. Naturally, I'll start.


"In Pharaoh's Boat" http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=97990
This is an attempt to merge sexual and religious fantasies, two big interests of mine, and something I'm trying to find a way to do in a story. I really don't know how well it works and I'd be very interested to know what people think.


---dr.M.
Good Idea! What kind of Platform would be best for this story to reach American homes?
 
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