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[Shendude]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Finally approved

She wears a demi style bra, it lifts her smallish breasts. it wraps around her back into her cape and cowl. Her arms are covered, but her shoulders are bare, except for the cape.

As for her legs, the suit covers her upper thighs and hips, while leaveing the crotch and surrounding areas bare. her legging to her ankles, and her boots ar calf high.

Her exposed flesh is darkened with makeup, except for her face, and the area just around her pussy.

Ah, thank you.

I'm working on some better pictures of it now.

I eagerly await looking at 'em.

hmmmm, but totally bare below the belt, I kinda like that, much more simple.

Well, superhero(ine)s make minor costume changes all the time.

 

[hotchkiss]

Great idea for a thread but as a newbie this will probably all go wrong but here goes.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=151922 is my latest post, its a vampiric sex story as are quite a few of my tales!
Hope this works and hope someone enjoys the narrative

TA HK

 

[DekeJeffery]

I'm fairly new here, and I rarely post on the discussion board, but I thought I'd post my two most recent submissions. I apologize in advance if my netiquette is incorrect...

My two most recent submissions are a 'First Time' story titled "The Awakening of Angie" ( http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=145279 ) and a 'Celebrities' piece called "An Evening with Rachael" ( http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=149024 ). Both are written from first-person, but they are also completely fictional (unfortunately).

I'm currently working on several other stories. One day, I might even finish them!

 

[Sabledrake]

The second chapter of Closer than Cousins is now posted! The story of Kit and Swan continues in this 18-years-later sequel to "The Neglected Son."

Sabledrake

 

[eric shawn listo]

Hey, new chapter of Exchanging Flesh up. Probably can be read w/o out having read the previous chaps. If you like experienced little round girls give it a try!

Thanks to belegon for my link!

esl

[co+l+or=green] eric shawn listo's erotic stories listed[/color]

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

My newest story is up (under my other identity Lady in Disguise). Racing to Passion is a celebrity story. The featured celebrity is NASCAR driver, Dale Earnhardt Jr.

Yes, this is the old CrimsonMaiden that used to post here. I had to change my name for personal reasons, but recently re-registered Crim to use on forums. For the forseeable future, I will be writing as Lady in Disguise. All of Crim's stories can be found under Lady in Disguise. They were transferred with the name change. Obviously, the reason it was changed has been resolved.

 

[Dingus Guy]

MY CM HAS RETURNED

My newest story is up (under my other identity Lady in Disguise). Racing to Passion is a celebrity story. The featured celebrity is NASCAR driver, Dale Earnhardt Jr.

Yes, this is the old CrimsonMaiden that used to post here. I had to change my name for personal reasons, but recently re-registered Crim to use on forums. For the forseeable future, I will be writing as Lady in Disguise. All of Crim's stories can be found under Lady in Disguise. They were transferred with the name change. Obviously, the reason it was changed has been resolved.

5 Nana salute I know you never left, but it is good to see your old moniker rise from the ashes. I just finished your "Lap" Dance of Passion story, and left you backfeed. Good work even if it is Nascar.

Speak to ya soon.

 

[Scribbleros]

amazingly hot story

My newest story is up (under my other identity Lady in Disguise). Racing to Passion is a celebrity story. The featured celebrity is NASCAR driver, Dale Earnhardt Jr.

Amazingly hot story. I loved it.

 

[mxslicer]

My latest attempt at a story.

It's in the mind control category.

Strange Technology Part 1: Discovery

A young man discovers a strange technology that allows him to control other people's bodies. In particular it explores the experience of changing gender from male to female.

 

[requerdos]

Dr. Mabeuse -

Nice blackmail story.

Place:
The setting and her displacement within it are clear (the grit under her expensive shoe is a good image). I especially like the reminder about half way through that brings us back to what's's going on in the world outside - good contrast to what's happening to her in side (both physically and metaphorically).

Persons:
HELENE is well developed and easy to picture. I have a few suggestions for her:
She probably wouldn't consider the afternoon meeting as B.S....she would more likely have been in charge of it. Let it represent all those times that she has "been late" to her own needs because of her career responsibilities.
With this in mind, its probably too early in the story to let her apologize for anything at all....much less tardiness.
Her anal passion is not surprising as it is the locus of control for this type of character. I'm glad you included it. Doctor might have done something more for her in this regard, but somehow anal sex seems too drastic a measure at this rendezvous...perhaps in Chapter 2?

DOCTOR is a man who knows what he wants. He's definitely an operator who could have access to photos, names, and personal information. It seems believable to me that he could be a prosecutor or a District Attorney who has seen too many perpetrators go free without punnishment. This meeting (run by 'him' to contrast with 'her' meeting earlier) is as well planned and executed as his finely tailored suit. I think the predatory images should be maintained (instead of "rampant stallion") until he becomes Zeus. The change in his character is appropriate after the spanking --which was a pleasant surprise--but maybe into a more military figure (e.g., Mars or Alexander the Great) to tie in more closely with the predator image?

Plot:
You're right, the sexual tension is tremendous and I'm glad for the climax to have occurred so close to the end where they both got what they were looking for: she to be treated like what she actually is and he to be the one to administer it.

requerdos

 

[blklongnthick]

New Interracial Love Story

My second installment of A Whore is Born centering around the exploits of a young japanese housewife and her love of black men. The story picks up in New York as Akiko is led around the city on a series of suprise sexual encounters. Read enjoy and feel free to send feedback.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=153402

 

[Guest]

First Story

 

[Belegon]

another new one...

Hi all, a new category for me and a new approach...

The New Neighbors

This is a voyuerism story and was co-written by myself and Biplaymate420. I wrote each section for Andrew and then turned it over to her and then she would write Joanne's part. Then we went back together to try and tighten things up. I am really pleased with the result and I hope others will be too. It was a lot of fun to write.

 

[eric shawn listo]

Hi folks,

New chapter of Comanche Lust now posted! Warning: not for the faint of heart.

esl

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=154306

 

[MagicFingers]

New story posted

"The Mountain Cabin Getaway Ch.04"
Sex on the rocks, and a tree, and a new twist!
Don't let Ch.04 bother you. It can stand alone, without having to go back to read the first day's adventures.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=152949
in the Erotic Coupling category.
Enjoy!

 

[GratefulFred]

What the critics are saying about my first two stories

On "My Big Fat Pornographic Wedding"...

This fim sucked since it was sold out and we couldn't get a seat inside the theatre. The only redeaming value to the flick was picking up some half spent joints that had fallen out by people in the audience. Two thumbs out.
RopeHer & EatHer
Chicago Fun Times

The Sleeper clit of the Summer. Groovy baby.
Awesome Powers
Hollywood Permanent Press

See it live sex action at...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=154569



On "The Incredible Shrinking Dude"...

I found the film to be the most disturbing film of any time. I still wake up in a cold sweat thinking what if I was "The Incredible Shrinking Dude"? How could I function? What would I do? Even now perhaps people are looking at me and maybe they suspect. It's too much I tell you...and for that reason I have decided not to seek reelction.
George W Bush
Crying in DC

I have decided after watching this film to send to congress a bill mandating one trillion dollars towards fighting off this Alien invasion and developing a defensive shield against their funky Alien rays. Our way of life depends upon it.
Dick Chaney
Commander and Chief

If only I could have made such a film....boohoo
Michael Moore
Rich Boy Documentaries, Inc.

See all the live sex action at...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=154572

 

[Shendude]

Re: What the critics are saying about my first two stories

On "My Big Fat Pornographic Wedding"...

This fim sucked since it was sold out and we couldn't get a seat inside the theatre. The only redeaming value to the flick was picking up some half spent joints that had fallen out by people in the audience. Two thumbs out.
RopeHer & EatHer
Chicago Fun Times

The Sleeper clit of the Summer. Groovy baby.
Awesome Powers
Hollywood Permanent Press

See it live sex action at...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=154569

That is an EXCELLENT story.

 

[GratefulFred]

Ok Shendude...

Here's the $20 I promised you for that post...

Don't tell anyone...

 

[wishfulthinking]

Hey, if $20 is the going rate...


My latest story is up.

The Novice: Audrey discovers lust, seduction and sin:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=154522

 

[catastrophe]

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[cookiejar]

New story in my sigline...

 

[Scribbleros]

New story in my sigline...

A well written story.

 

[Black Tulip]

Hey, if $20 is the going rate...


My latest story is up.

The Novice: Audrey discovers lust, seduction and sin:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=154522

OK, I'll read it, but only if you really, really, really promise to deliver the other goodies.

Can I use this opportunity to point to my sigline at the same time? A totally new experience because I wrote the story to fit the illustration by Rhinoguy. It's not bad, but it's not feeling good either. Any comments?

 

[HornyHenry]

My first story posted today!!!

It's in Humor and Satire (For a reason I might add!).
Check it out. It's a quick read and might bring a smile to your face.
"Fun With Fannie"
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=156182

 

[cloudy]

Yipee! The second chapter of "Atlantis Revisited" is finally up!

It's a new category for me, so not quite sure how it will be received, but it was fun writing it, so I guess that's all that matters.

If anyone's interested, there's a link in my sig. Thanks.