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[MorganKelly666]

Well, I don't usually post on here, but I recently submitted to the "Letters and Transcripts" category for the first time, and apparently it's not a hugely read theme.

The feedback I have received has been positive, but some of it is coming from hardcore fans, and we know how they can sometimes see no wrong in your work. It's also somewhat different stylistically from my other stuff, so I was hoping to get some comparative feedback.

So, here's the link, and I've got a whole bunch of other stories that I'd always appreciate feedback on, too.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=154843

Thanks in advance.

xoxo
cat

I read it, and though I am probably biased because I may be one of those fans who have liked all of Cat's stuff, I highly recommend checking it out.

 

[catastrophe]

I am probably biased

Groupie bias strikes again! *grin* Thanks Morgan.

 

[GratefulFred]

Way to go Henry..

Since I am a Fred sort of that story seems quite autobiographical.

Loved it and do keep it up.

Sexual Humor rules!



My new collection of "Unwashed Shorts" is up and running...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=156407

15 short catchy sexy twisted tales for the price of none. Feedback is your right to give. Voting is your privledge to take.

 

[Shendude]

Re: Way to go Henry..

Since I am a Fred sort of that story seems quite autobiographical.

Loved it and do keep it up.

Sexual Humor rules!



My new collection of "Unwashed Shorts" is up and running...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=156407

15 short catchy sexy twisted tales for the price of none. Feedback is your right to give. Voting is your privledge to take.

Most of those were... odd, to say the least, although some were funny. No rofl stuff, but good for a laugh. Many of 'em are kinda confusing, but some were pretty interesting. I particularly liked "Threesome" & "Ah...Choo" which had interesting ideas behind 'em.

Out of curiousity though, where is "Jismism" & those other things you promised in the World-Building thread?

 

[GratefulFred]

Just for you Shendude

(c) GratefulFred

Jismism - Intro

The philosophy of Jismism dates back centuries to the time of Shakespeare whereas a young squire named Derf started a cult dedicated to spreading his seed without impregnating. This wasteful sexual act of just ejaculating outside of the pussy was seen as an abomination, and the church sought out the death of Derf who had gone into hiding. Derf knowing that eventually he would be caught wrote his words down in a book before ejaculating all over it.

Derf was caught and as the blade was about to be swung down ended his young life he screamed out the words "Blow Job" which was the first use of the expression. The church did try to burn "The Philosophy of Jismism" but were unable to burn through the hardened white coating. Recently a number of girls have just finished a 2-year project of licking the pages clean and the book is now on file in the Library of Porno College in Amsterdam.

More of Jismism to cum...and since my next stories complete I'll build ya a porno world dude.

Thanks for taking the time to go through my unwashed shorts.
No one catches "Work Sucks" the first time around.

To see all the "Unwashed Shorts" go here if you dare!!!
http://www.literotica.com/stories/s...y.php?id=156407

Next up is every republican's greatest nightmare, for in the year 2004 Hillary's gonna get savage get laid and "Kill Byll".

Don't change that bat channel

 

[snowy ciara]

YAY!! I'm not pending anymore...

for now at least..

Two stories posted, or one story in two parts, whatever..

Emillya and Joe

E and J, Round Two

 

[cheeryorchid]

Love Letters a rampant

My Letter/Transcript FINALLY posted.
It's called The Goodmorning Kiss, it posted hmmm yesterday.

The Goodmorning Kiss is a love letter written by a woman and left on her pillow beside her sleeping lover when she has to leave him for the last time before they will be together forever. It gives an erotic account of the reasons waking up to him are her favorite moments in the day; and what she'll be squirming about on the plane.

PLEASE read it and VOTE. Thanks ever so much.

 

[Barnaby]

My Writer's Block Is Over!

Most of what I've published in the last 8 months has been rewrites of older stuff or stuff I've just struggled through. I've started and abandoned a half dozen pieces. Now, finally, the dry spell has ended. I think this is my funniest piece but also realistically hot. The idea came when my 21 year old friend Natalie, subject of my previously published INTERVIEW PROJECT NUMBER FOUR (recently the top voted story in the letters and transcripts category!) called and asked if I would help her dye her hair purple as her boyfriend was out of town. As this was the oddest invitation I'd had all year, I readily accepted. The real-life event was a comedy of errors and Natalie suggested I consider basing a story around it.
The girl in the story is a combination of Natalie and Meg (TIP number three) with a bit of another young lady I used to know thrown in. The guy is me. (Yes, I really do talk like a sitcom character.) I feel the characterizations and the dialogue are the best I've accomplished to date. My lovely and oh so understanding wife nearly choked to death from laughing so hard and Natalie gave it two purple thumbs up! It's hot, it's sexy, it's romantic and it's funny! I think women readers in particular will appreciate it. Please try it and vote! Thanx! Encouragement will definitely help keep the Writers Block away. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=157194]PURPLE DAZE or "I'D DYE FOR YOU."[/URL]

 

[vargas111]

WOPI Chronicles

The WOPI Chronicles

A (Mind Control, FemDomme, Humor, Pregnancy) story set as a battle between the North Atlantic Security Organization and Women of Power International (WOPI) a secret and unorthodox feminist organization with a dark side even it's President does not know about.

I have received some very positive feedback on chapters 1-10, The last chapter showing what happens to all the characters has been pending for several days, but must be almost ready to come out.

Stay tuned and read the first 10 chapters (each one is fairly short and episodeal, semi self-contained) to be ready for the Finale.

As always, please comment. If publicly, please do so with your address so I can reply. I try to reply to all comments, public or private

 

[Desamy]

First Story - Midnight Mischief

My first story is finally up and waiting for you to read, comment and vote on as you see fit! Please do give me feedback on the page of the story - I'd love to hear from you.

Midnight Mischief - Horny wife fantasizes about her man

 

[BlackShanglan]

Amazingly, something short from me ...

Below is a link to quite likely the shortest thing I will ever post. I thought, given its brevity, that it would make a good target for slings and arrows. Votes, feedback, public comments, private jeers all welcome. It's a letter from King Arthur to Mordred.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=156413


Shanglan

 

[X Writer]

X Writer's return...

Well, it's good to be back in the erotica biz, and have I got a tale to tell...

Let's face it, I feel kind of weird promoting my own writings, preferring that they be recommended to others by word of mouth, but hey, I guess we all have our thing.

I've taken to penning a Novella, based on the X-Men, called:

xXx-Men: Man Mutant Machine 24/7

The first two chapters are out, with the 3rd shortly to be submitted, and the 4th to follow, maybe two weeks from now.

For the record, even if you have NO idea who these characters are, it is written in such a manner that you will have no problem knowing who and what is going on...

...of course, being erotica, it's pretty much a given as to what is going on...LOL

Check them out, and let me know what you think...

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

I have three new ones posted under my *in Disguise* identity.

Clandestine Pleasure: Toys & Masturbation story

Lusting for Labor: Lesbian story

Subliminal Desires Ch. 01: Mind control story


The first two stories were written for fun and as mainly stroke stories. The third story is the first chapter in a four part story (the next three chapters have all been submitted and should post within the next few days.)

Any feedback is greatly appreciated!

 

[The Mutt]

Please check out my new story: A Mutt is Born.
Thrill to the adventures of a average guy transformed into a sex slave by the awesome sexual cunning of a wicked Mistress.
Depravity, perversion and the power of true love!
No one admitted after the last paragraph.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Helene Blackmailed Part 2

Helene Blackmailed Part 2 is now up

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=158418

The story involves some light bondage and reluctant sex and describes the feelings of a woman who is--guess what?--blackmailed into a BDSM relationship.

---dr.M.

 

[eric shawn listo]

Hey folks,

The final chapter of my novel "Exchanging Flesh" is up. So it can now be read in it's entirety. I've been submitting chapters to the category it best suits rather than to Novels and Novellas. This seems to garner more views and votes cause people know what to expect.

esl

 

[wishfulthinking]

Chapter 9 of Innocent Pawn is up:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=159062

This isn't the final chapter - I tried, really, but it just didn't happen!

This chapter is about Bella finally getting revenge on her captor.

 

[GratefulFred]

Sexorcist - not the prequel

In order to combat some of the nightmere's you may be having as a result of being talked into seeing that horror flick, please check out my light comical version of a battle of light verses tinted shades.

"Sexorcist" less the word "the" is up and worth a peak. All those giving any type of feedback will get an original creative response in lymric form in return. That also holds true for any of my other tales.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=159510

 

[Shendude]

Re: Sexorcist - not the prequel

In order to combat some of the nightmere's you may be having as a result of being talked into seeing that horror flick, please check out my light comical version of a battle of light verses tinted shades.

"Sexorcist" less the word "the" is up and worth a peak. All those giving any type of feedback will get an original creative response in lymric form in return. That also holds true for any of my other tales.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=159510

Not bad. Kinda funny, but not all that sexy.

 

[GratefulFred]

That's my style...

Can't get more topical then this story and it is submitted under humor and satire so it does work.

And because of your feedback...

Shendude...shendude have you any wood?
Yes ma'am...yes ma'am...three inches stood...
One inch of hard on...two I'm so damn big...
And three I'm freaking gigantic...make you squeal like a pig...

Ok any others...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=159510

 

[hotchkiss]

Another new story

Hiya All in Lit land,

Quick note to let anyone who's interested know I've just had another story accepted.

Its the first part of a series (yes again, I know I should finish some of the others, but the second part is almost done as well).

Its a lesbian bdsm manipulation series that I've penned whilst recovering from jetlag after a most eventful trip across the pond to Orlando (we were there during the hurricane!)

take a peek if you would: -

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=159466

hope that worked

Ta hotchkiss

 

[wishfulthinking]

Captured ch.2 is posted:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=159755

It is about beautiful Carly who is captured by a [sexy] pirate. think bodice ripper and usual cliches Enjoy

 

[Black Tulip]

Captured ch.2 is posted:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=159755

It is about beautiful Carly who is captured by a [sexy] pirate. think bodice ripper and usual cliches Enjoy

Goodie, goodie. I'll be off in a minute to enjoy.
I liked your part 9 about Bella and Leonn, by the way. Specially the touch that she took control but kind of had to give in in the end. I know, I'm an incurable romantic at heart.

If any one's interested. I have a new story up in the nonconsent category. Any feedback would be very welcome.

Link is in my sig.

 

[Marsipanne]

I quite literally jumped for joy seeing 'captured ch.2' posted.

I have a HUGE thing for bodice-rippers. Sigh. Certainly a weakness of mine. Thanks for the new installment, I enjoyed it very much.

eta: you MUST continue it, by the way. The premise is very... titillating.

 

[Desamy]

Morning Mischief

Just dropping a note to let you all know my second story, Morning Mischief has just been approved. You can find the link for it in my signature.
I hope those of you that enjoyed the previous story love this one just as much!
Please vote and comment.

Desamy