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Part three of the naked hiking club is live now! Bit of a break from the forest scenes, but an important step for character and plot development. And not to worry, forest scenes will return for part four, hopefully soon!

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Happy All Saints Day, everyone.

I have posted a new story in FanFics/Celebrity. My recurring character Lisa gets her start working in the Hollywood stunt industry and gains some notoriety, then acquires a few new paramours. Special appearances by Dean Simonds from Carnage Jackson’s Journel of an Agent series (thx, friend), James Franco, Charlize Theron, and Drew Barrymore. Enjoy!

“Lisa In Hollywood”

https://www.literotica.com/s/lisa-in-hollywood
 
Hi everyone. I'm new here but I've been writing erotica for a long time. Recently, I've been working on a Trilogy. It's an erotic space opera called "Defending the Crusade. Book 1 is "Defiling the Crusade", Book 2 is "Denying the Crusade" and book 3 is still being worked on.

The trilogy follows Captain Joan Kendrick. She is the first female captain of the Holy Command, put in the command of their latest prototype space battle ship, the Crusade. The Holy Command is the military wing of the Lord's Domain. The Lord's Domain is a highly religious government. One in which shuns certain aspects of science, is misogynistic and is invasive all in the name of The Lord. But there is a group call the "They Unrest" who are seeking to make women and LGBT+ people equals.
Since this is Captain Kendrick's first mission, a priest name High Father Jacob Wul is on board to oversee the crew and their actions to report to the Divine Council of the Lord's Domain.
All hell breaks loose when the Crusade has a first encounter with an alien.
The books are a balance of erotic and story. At least I hope so.
I'm looking for critique on these books, please. Let me know what you think. Don't worry about hurting my feelings. I'm too old for that. :-D.
Thank you for your attention. Please enjoy. And I hope you all enjoy it a lot! ;-)

https://www.literotica.com/s/defiling-the-crusade

https://www.literotica.com/s/denying-the-crusade

Third book is in the works.
 
I finally took the leap and posted part 1 of my first story, and by first, I mean it's my first foray into any fiction writing. I would love feedback from people interested in craft as much as story. The series is four parts, and I have finished writing it, although only the first part has been posted so far. It's strongly non-con, so if that's not your thing, skip it.

Stolen Protons: I awoke to an alien sitting beside me, patiently repeating that I was his slave and asking if I understood. I was cold, naked, and unable to move, in a strange room, with no idea who or what he was, or who I was, for that matter. Fuck no, I didn't understand! What a stupid fucking question.
 
Hello, Literotica Folks!

I'm excited to share my first story, "The Summer Night He Taught Her," and would love to hear your feedback. This tale is based on a true story about my ex-girlfriend's encounter with an older tennis pro. The overall arc of the story is factual, but I've filled in the details and sex scenes to create a compelling narrative. Please note that the story involves drug use, as it was a key element in her letting down her guard.

The drug use is included because it was a pivotal part of the experience. It raises the question: would she have gone through with the seduction if she hadn't been impaired? Did the tennis pro take advantage of her vulnerability? I believe he did, but perhaps that's just the narrative I've constructed over the years to make sense of it all.

I'm eager to hear your thoughts and any constructive criticism you might have. Thank you in advance for taking the time to read and provide feedback!

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-summer-night-he-taught-her-1
 
I have been writing as a hobby for some time.

Recently I have published a lesbian fanfic featuring Karen Wheeler from Stranger things.

I would like to get some feedback on it, specially from other women. Constructive criticism is welcome.

Ashley
 
I have been writing as a hobby for some time.

Recently I have published a lesbian fanfic featuring Karen Wheeler from Stranger things.

I would like to get some feedback on it, specially from other women. Constructive criticism is welcome.

Ashley
You should include a link here, so others can find it easily!
 
I have started writing a follow-up series to my previous story "Dead Together". Mage & Moonshadow (Ch. 1 is 6.4k words, SF&F) is an Urban Fantasy story about the mage investigating the events.
 
https://www.literotica.com/s/nikki-s-first-bull-ch-01-08

Out now in Loving wives

Nikki has a boyfriend she's been dating for five years, who is quite hesitant to ask her hand in marriage. So, when her father asks her to go on dates with a man of his choice, she accepts. They are supposed to be just formalities for Nikki, but both she and her boyfriend Paul find out that her date is not what they've expected at all.
More than a handful of you guys have asked me to continue the series 'Nikki's First Bull'. So, I've written the second part. Out now in Loving Wives. 1763014049078.png
I promise you. Nikki is as teasing and daring as ever. Link: https://www.literotica.com/s/nikkis-first-bull-second-part
 
This is weirdly my story and not my story.

@your_reverie_to_keep has done an absolutely remarkable job of bringing a letter I wrote to friends to life with their voice work.

The depth of emotion, the perfect inflection and rising cadence as things intensify, the simply knowing when to slow down and when to speak with intense need to get the words out... Just ugh! So beautifully done

This is someone to keep on your radar for audio narration of stories. I believe this is the beginning of a marvelous run in voice work for Rev, and I hope others agree. This is a display of raw talent and skill at how properly reading something can turn the most basic of words into something intensely emotional and powerful.

Give it a listen, it's fully safe for work:

I Love You - Audio by your_reverie_to_keep

For what it's worth, I have never advertised my writing more than I am with this rendition of my words. And it's not because of my words, it's because this type of voice work deserves recognition. I hope others agree.

If you want to read along, the words are here. But honestly? Just close your eyes, sit back, and listen. Then give Rev a follow and some encouraging words!
 
New Mind Control story: Panty Party: Live in Las Vegas

A bit of a departure from my usual fare, this abandons realism for female gooner fantasy tropes. Features hypnosis, straight girls going gay, public and dubious consent

I wrote it quickly last weekend, and there are probably some things I would do differently if I took more time, but sometimes a story appears fully fleshed out in my mind and I need to get it down as quickly as possible.
 
New Mind Control story: Panty Party: Live in Las Vegas

A bit of a departure from my usual fare, this abandons realism for female gooner fantasy tropes. Features hypnosis, straight girls going gay, public and dubious consent

I wrote it quickly last weekend, and there are probably some things I would do differently if I took more time, but sometimes a story appears fully fleshed out in my mind and I need to get it down as quickly as possible.
Nice story, I posted a response to it in the comments section.
 
This is weirdly my story and not my story.

@your_reverie_to_keep has done an absolutely remarkable job of bringing a letter I wrote to friends to life with their voice work.

The depth of emotion, the perfect inflection and rising cadence as things intensify, the simply knowing when to slow down and when to speak with intense need to get the words out... Just ugh! So beautifully done

This is someone to keep on your radar for audio narration of stories. I believe this is the beginning of a marvelous run in voice work for Rev, and I hope others agree. This is a display of raw talent and skill at how properly reading something can turn the most basic of words into something intensely emotional and powerful.

Give it a listen, it's fully safe for work:

I Love You - Audio by your_reverie_to_keep

For what it's worth, I have never advertised my writing more than I am with this rendition of my words. And it's not because of my words, it's because this type of voice work deserves recognition. I hope others agree.

If you want to read along, the words are here. But honestly? Just close your eyes, sit back, and listen. Then give Rev a follow and some encouraging words!


I listened to this and it was great. The letter in of itself holds powerful words. Then Reverie gives those words even more power with her raw (yet lovely) voice.
 
@Actingup and I just published a new collaborative story overnight, It Just Ain't Going to Happen!

It's a Winter Holidays competition entry, but we (Acting, really, he bullied me into helping) had the bright idea to write a nontraditional Loving Wives story without cheating 😅

A college-age daughter tries to push her estranged parents back together using trickery, music, weather, and 18th century philosophy!
 
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