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sybariticmistress said:
Hi all...I'm relativly new to Literotica. I've just posted my first attempt at writing an erotic story (or any story, for that matter). I'd appreciate any feedback, positive or negative, so I can get some idea whether I should keep writing, or just give up before embarrassing myself.

The title is "Sex and the Summer Job Ch. 1" Thanks!
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I read the story and I like it. Will you continue with the relationship between these two people in the next chapter, or describe other couples? I'll send you a PM through the story if you want to chat.
 
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Captain Midnight said:
I read the story and I like it. Will you continue with the relationship between these two people in the next chapter, or describe other couples? I'll send you a PM through the story if you want to chat.
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I'm delighted you liked it. Yes, I plan to continue exploring the relationship between the two characters in some detail. I do intend to introduce other couples as time goes by. I won't be so presumptuous as to say there's some great theme or elaborate plot behind this story, but I do want show how the more naive character evolves into someone more erotically adventurous. Speaking of naive, I wouldn't mind a chat if I can figure out how to do it here. I wasn't kidding when I said I was new to the Literotica site :)
 
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sybariticmistress said:
I'm delighted you liked it. Yes, I plan to continue exploring the relationship between the two characters in some detail. I do intend to introduce other couples as time goes by. I won't be so presumptuous as to say there's some great theme or elaborate plot behind this story, but I do want show how the more naive character evolves into someone more erotically adventurous. Speaking of naive, I wouldn't mind a chat if I can figure out how to do it here. I wasn't kidding when I said I was new to the Literotica site :)
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Thank you for the nice letter! You don't have a personal message (PM) account, but I'll try to write you through the "Feedback" on your story/stories and give you my E-address to write back.

I hope you enjoy writing!
 
Culture Shock

This story is a few weeks old and certainly isn't for everyone. Anyone with an interest in 'real' BDSM (as opposed to 'fantasy' BDSM) is encouraged to check it out. It concerns the journey from vanilla to online to meeting in real life, and focuses on the development of the main character, Elaine, and the ways in which she grows and ensures her safety.

It's long at 121,000 words so I can assure you I've done my level best to cover 'how things should happen in an ideal world' so people with an interest in this kind of thing have a yardstick against which they can measure their own experiences.

Anyway, I'm not interested in votes so please just write me if it's been helpful or interesting. I'd be glad to hear from you.

My latest offering: Culture Shock

Be well

SN
 
Hello everyone. I'm new around here and just discovered this wonderful thread. I certainly can't crow to any of my real life friends about my budding porn writing career, so its really nice to have a place to shamelessly plug my dirty little stories and not have to worry about becoming the subject of the juiciest gossip in town. I've submitted two stories so far and I'd like to invite each of you to read them and I would love any feedback you can offer. My only writing experience in the past 25 years has been limited to grocery lists and excuses to the school when my children have missed a day because of sickness. I now wish I had the nerve to have started writing sooner.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=274761

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=278075
 
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LonelyMom said:
Hello everyone. I'm new around here and just discovered this wonderful thread. I certainly can't crow to any of my real life friends about my budding porn writing career, so its really nice to have a place to shamelessly plug my dirty little stories and not have to worry about becoming the subject of the juiciest gossip in town. I've submitted two stories so far and I'd like to invite each of you to read them and I would love any feedback you can offer. My only writing experience in the past 25 years has been limited to grocery lists and excuses to the school when my children have missed a day because of sickness. I now wish I had the nerve to have started writing sooner.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=274761

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=278075
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Any more dirty little stories up your sleeve, maybe?

Please?

Maharat
 
Be patient with the Newbie

:eek: I was kindly advised that I should post a link to my story if I wanted it reviewed. I was even given directions on how to do that. Please everyone, be patient with me. I promise I'm a fast learner :) I'd love any feedback, good or bad.

Adele
 
Buried deep within the Halloween entries...

...lurks Chapter 7 of Staring At The Sun.

I'm really sorry it's taken so long to write but I hope that everyone who has read the preceding chapters enjoys and lets me know their thoughts.

There isn't a great deal of sex in this chapter but I have a feeling my characters will make up for that in the next few ;).

Thanks in advance to everyone who takes the time to read, vote and comment. All feedback is answered!

janiexx :)
 
Looking for exhibitionist, flasher, mooner, caught nude stories

I posted a great juicy true story on this thread. If anyone wants to contribute go here:

anyone ever caught nude, flashing, mooning..... thread

Here's my story for you to read I think it's juicy

Here’s a great story. Happened about 20 years ago. I had always been a super horny and fun guy I loved the outdoors and I loved hiking. One day I was hiking in Massachusetts and I brought my camera with me as I usually did on hikes. It was a lovely day in the summer I pulled up and I noticed three cute girls that we just starting along the hiking trail. I started walking and they stopped so I said hi as I passed by. They were all really cute. I started thinking in my horny guys mind of a plan that would get my juices really going and theirs too.

I decided to stop and let them pass by me and then they stopped and we kept passing each other. They were again ahead of me and I slowly caught up to them matching their waling speed. We started talking. They were from Canada visiting and seeing the mountains. I told them I was kind of bummed because my girlfriend just moved across the country. Of course that was not true but I had my plan! We talked and joked and we were almost back to the starting point so I went for it….


I asked if they’d take my picture because I wanted to send some pictures to my girlfriend that moved far away. I mentioned this as we were walking before plus I threw in the fact that I had done some nude posing for a friend of mine (that was true actually) so we stopped at a nice spot and I said this is perfect! Take my picture! One of the three started taking my picture and then I suddenly said this would be such a scenic area for a few nudes. I think that would be great. Let’s do it and before they could object I quickly got out of my clothes. I actually couldn’t believe I was being so bold. I was so nervous but at the same time I loved it.

We walked back to our cars and said goodbye and I told them I enjoyed the hike and thanked them for taking my pictures.

I took a pictures of the three of them as well to keep and remind me of how much fun it was to be a bold and daring exhibitionist. I’ve never done anything like that since but wonder if I’d be able to pull it off. With cell phones it would be too easy to get my arrested in a matter of minutes. But hey I might just try it if I can find another group of women hiking that seem like real free spirits. Any suggestions about trying this stunt again would be very very very appreciated. I’ll let you know if I get my nerve up to try this again.
;)
 
my latest story

My newest story was put up yesterday (10-23-06) at http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=280276
and I was pleased to receive five public comments, which is the most I've ever gotten here and I've now published more than 12 stories on this site.

I really do appreciate any reactions--I have received some great private feedback--but one or two notes raised an issue that might interest others. I've written two stories about the kind of young, strict female teachers who staffed the really fine schools I attended as a girl. It's hard for anyone to believe that pupils then were really awed when a teacher threatened to fail you in Conduct on your report card. It had almost the impact as if they had been allowed to spank, which they were not, of course. One writer found this non-erotic--yet, for me, I still get wet in my panties when I think of what those teachers put me through. I still recall seeing them put down failing grades in red ink--another thing they're apparently not allowed to do anymore for fear of discouraging students. Well, they did leave me with a complex--that's certainly true. Thanks for listening.
 
The Accidental Hooker

My newest story has just been posted. "The Accidental Hooker" is a story about a husband and wife that role play her being a hooker. But, sometimes role play becomes real play.
So far, the feedback has been positive, the voting not quite so positive. But that can be expected in the "Loving Wives" category. I promise you a good story, even if it doesn't conform to the LW trolls ideals.
Jenny
 
Deep Space

My first story went up this afternoon and some of the comments have been surprisingly positive...

It's not perfect and there's a glitch in the formatting that I dont know how to fix now its appeared. It certainly wasn't in the original word document.

"Find an Editor" is a valid comment but that wasn't the point of posting it, and I do intend to try to find someone to work with if I do any others.

It's in the Sci-Fi and Fantasy section, and it just got a cute little red H. (I know what it means, -ish, but how did it get "H"ed?)

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=280466

Do read it and I'd love to know what you guys think of it...

Partuicularly interested in my characterisation.

I was trying to make Kismet come across as a Strong yet subtle female, I'm not sure if I got the Balance right.

Sir_Nathan, I'm still working my way through "Culture Shock" But I'll let you know what I think when I finish it.
 
Sorry to double post this, but I don't think people were turned off by the title of my advertizing thread (try to have a little fun...).

Anyway, my story is called A Love Scene, Ch. 3, and is a continuation of my Love Scene erotic couplings series. I'd greatly appreciate feedback on it, and will respond/return feedback, if desired. One reader had this to say about it:

"Sara goes full out to both give and receive sexual joy with her lover. If you enjoy reading a story that relies heavily on the sensuously written language - this story's for you. From paragraph one throughout it continues to get hotter.
Intensely Sexual! Good Write!" - duddle146, via comment board

So, please read it if you get the chance. Enjoy!
 
Swords, Sorcery, and Kinky Sex

The first 3 chapters of my new story, "The Violet Lady" were recently posted. It's a fantasy story that combines lots of action (of the sexual kind) with lots of action (of the swordplay kind) and lots of plot twists. I hope you all enjoy it! Feedback welcome and encouraged.

Also check out my first story "Extra Credit Club", which is currently one of the highest ranked stories in the anal category!

http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=690130&page=submissions
 
I posted a thread earlier, but I see now that this is the best forum for an advertisement. Please excuse the double, I'll delete the other. My first attempt was posted today and I'd appreciate any feedback you'd care to give. Hopefully, it doesn't suck. I'm currently putting keys to keyboard to complete the next section, so if I'm making catastrophic mistakes, please do let me know.

Have a great day.


Alex

Link: http://english.literotica.com/stori...d=281517&page=1
 
Alexanderom said:
I posted a thread earlier, but I see now that this is the best forum for an advertisement. Please excuse the double, I'll delete the other. My first attempt was posted today and I'd appreciate any feedback you'd care to give. Hopefully, it doesn't suck. I'm currently putting keys to keyboard to complete the next section, so if I'm making catastrophic mistakes, please do let me know.

Have a great day.


Alex

Link: http://english.literotica.com/stori...d=281517&page=1
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Hi,

Your link didn't work for me so I've added this - I hope this is your story!

http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=759620&page=submissions

janiexx:)
 
The Gamblers

My story is about consensual "contract bondage." I thought this was an original idea...a novel fantasy. Silly me. Apparently many real people have already entered into such contracts to formalize their BDSM relationships. In any case, if you can envision a world in which women are legally free to sell themselves and are intrigued by the notion, you may be interested in reading my story.

This is my first fiction and I'd really appreciate any healthy criticism. Thanks.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=278587
 
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Janiexx,

Sorry the link didn't work, and thanks for putting up one that does. Very thoughtful of you.


Alex
 
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