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[Captain Midnight]

The New Softballers, Part 1

Part 1 of my five-part series, "The New Softballers," has been approved and will be available for reading later in the day.

This is a lesbian story about a college softball team and the various relationships that develop among team members.

I've asked some women to check it out and have incorporated their suggestions into the story, but I will look for feedback and fine-tune each part of the story before it goes up.

I hope people like it!

Captain Midnight

*** The bird is a gyrfalcon.

 

[slyc_willie]

Pretty Baby, Pt. I

My 'magnum opus,' as it were, has begun. The first in a six-part series has been approved. I wrote this entire story during a week-long sabbatical of sorts, so caught up I was in the character and development of my heroine, Alyssa.

Please, have a look:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=284816

Part II will follow shortly.

Slyc

 

[Guest]

I have a Christmas Story out called SEEING SANTA AT THE MALL.

I think it's pretty cute. Check it out and tell me what you think.

Don't forget to vote and leave a comment, por favor.

Gracias.

 

[sybariticmistress]

Sex and the Summer Job Part 2

Part 2 of my "Sex and the Summer Job" series is posted for your reading pleasure. Anyone interested will really need to read Part 1 for it to make any sense. I'd love feedback -- positive, negative or neutral. Please everyone, be patient with any technical flubs or breeches of etiquette when I post on this thread. I'm very much a newbie and I'm learning my way around.

That aside, I hope you enjoy my latest offering. I expect this story line to ultimately have four or five installments if there's enough interest for me to carry it through to the end.



Sex and the Summer Job, part one.
Sex and the Summer Job, part two.

 

[mrhoodoo]

the morning after (sex in the morning)

This is about sex in the morning after a night of passion...waking up next to my lover, recalling the erotic events of the night before and inspiring a morning of renewed sexual awakening.

This is my first submission here and am just looking for some feedback.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=282468

 

[smy3th]

I have an entry in the Winter Holidays Contest ("Merry F-ing Christmas" - see my signature for link), that I am pretty excited about. It is far better than anything else I have ever written, though it is up to you to judge how good or bad that may be. I'd love to have more feedback on it.

 

[DianaP]

Thanks!

Thanks to all of you who read my first story and left an anonymous public comment or sent an email. This feedback is incredibly important and helpful in making the next story better. D.

My story is about consensual "contract bondage." I thought this was an original idea...a novel fantasy. Silly me. Apparently many real people have already entered into such contracts to formalize their BDSM relationships. In any case, if you can envision a world in which women are legally free to sell themselves and are intrigued by the notion, you may be interested in reading my story.

This is my first fiction and I'd really appreciate any healthy criticism. Thanks.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=278587

 

[janiexx]

Daniel Craig - Watch out!!

My latest story is up today called "Nobody Does It Better" - a fun tale about Seth and Janie's adventures while they indulge in a spot of role-play.

It's Part 3 of the famous "Tawny's Hair" series, even though Tawny does not feature in this chapter .

I hope everybody takes a little time to read and enjoy. I, for one, know that Seth would have been great as the real Bond, but I'm not so sure about me being Pussy Galore...


Janie xx

PS - Chapter 9 of "Staring At The Sun" should appear very soon now.

 

[Unsung Muse]

"CAKE"
Winter Holiday Contest entry (link in sig) ... just posted ...
ALL constructive criticism & feedback greatly appreciated!!!

(one day I'll write something lighthearted & cheerful)

 

[slyc_willie]

Pretty Baby Ch. 02

Part two of Alyssa's journey of sexual discovery is now out! Come see how Alyssa's innocence is spoiled even further as 'A Barrier is Breached.'

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=285470

This is the second of a six-part series.

 

[Guest]

I have a new story in Erotic Coupling

THOSE WHITE SATIN PANTIES

I would appreciate your feedback and /or comments.

Thank you.

 

[janiexx]

Chapter 9 - Staring At The Sun

The latest chapter of this work appeared today and I would love to hear any comments from readers.

I'd also like to publicly thank my very loyal bunch of regular readers who have given me tons of encouragement and wonderful feedback since I started writing this story.

Thank you very very much.

janiexx

 

[Captain Midnight]

The New Softballers Part 02 Is Up

Thanks to everyone who voted for The New Softballers Part 01.

Now Part 02 is up. It details the lovemaking of a second couple who have an "alternative" lifestyle.

Here are links to both parts if you are interested:



[URL=http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=285511[/URL]

Part 03 has been submitted and will hopefully be up later this week.

There will be four different couples mating in each of the four chapters. In the final chapter, the first three couples will throw a party for a woman seeking her first lesbian lover.

I welcome any feedback you might have -- there have been no public comments yet.

Captain Midnight

 

[KrystaBelle]

My two new(er) contributions to Literotica are here:

My Forbidden Desire (http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=282233)

Dirt and Oil
(http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=284112)

Both of them are erotic couplings, and they both are fantasies about the boss. They are stand alone stories, but I would recommend you reading Forbidden Desire first...

 

[sandyb]

SandyB's New Novel

I have a new story (short novel) just posted recently: Dreams of the Wild. See link in my signature. I'd appreciate any feedback, constructive criticism,catty comments, lewd suggestions, or whatever.

 

[sethp]

Read Janiexx's STory's right now or die!

God will kill you eventually but for sure he will kill a small kitten for every minute from now until you read one of Janiexx's stories!

You don't want cute kittens to die do you? No!

So what are you waiting for! Read one now don't delay!

 

[Pariscorey]

Newburyport

I have just posted the third chapter of Newburyport under novels and novellas. This is a continuing story of a New England woman who, by chance encounter, changes her life dramatically. It seems to be getting favorable comment and I would like input from some more experienced writers on my work.

 

[cawastedyouth]

Been a while...

A new one from me, a continuation of the world created in 'Because of the Night',

Tattered Spirits is a much more tender story with a much deeper direction of the darkened background within the society's world.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=286095

Hope you enjoy.

 

[slyc_willie]

Pretty Baby Ch.3

Alyssa's saga continues as she steps into the world of the high-priced call girl. But it's not all fun and sex when Gary comes back and Alyssa realizes she has feelings for him.

Check out the latest here:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=286237

Please, take the time to read the tale and tell me what you think. Chapter four is due soon!

 

[Captain Midnight]

The New Softballers, Chapter 03 of 5

Here is a new "The New Softballers" chapter for you. Please don't hesitate to send your feedback!

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[Curse_Of_Undeath]

The follow-up for "Tramps Like Us" is online now, called "Love Me Tomorrow" .

Looking forward to feedback, as always. A follow-up is in the works .

 

[janiexx]

The follow-up for "Tramps Like Us" is online now, called "Love Me Tomorrow" .

Looking forward to feedback, as always. A follow-up is in the works .

I have a feeling this may be reviewed in the New Story Review thread...

Keep an eye out for it later!

janiexx

 

[Curse_Of_Undeath]

I have a feeling this may be reviewed in the New Story Review thread...

Keep an eye out for it later!

janiexx

Believe me....

I WILL!!!

 

[cawastedyouth]

More on Tattered Spirits

This has to be my favorite chapter in Tattered Spirits, it is now available for any commenting and suggestions.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=286102

I will let you all know that comments are very important to the direction Tattered Spirits will take.

Thank you!

 

[starrkers]

My first story has just been posted. New Blood
It's erotic horror about two people locked in a room by mysterious strangers.
Please let me know if I should pack up my keyboard and go back to reading only.