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Hey not really new but nobody has been reading my tawny's hair and janiexx stories.. those are really good you know! dang
 
My first story just went up yesterday afternoon ... a group sex story called "And for Dessert: Fantasy Fulfilled". Please give it a look and a vote and I would really appreciate any constructive criticism.
 
My first story has been posted

My first effort, "The Window" has just been posted. It's about a girl next door with a frustrating twist. I welcome your comments and constructive feedback. I hope to write more - please encourage me!
 
my original Earth Day idea bogged down and is now my Earth Day 2008 draft in progress

Old Porch Swing is the substitute 'quick and dirty' single scene stroke story that grew to 6800 words...well, not quick, but still dirty....I think.

What do you think?

Should I try a sequel? if so, what should happen next?
 
The latest chapter of Hurt posted this morning.

If you don't like things like plot and character getting in the way of your stroke, this one's probably not for you. And it does get a bit heavy, now and then.

But if you'd like to get wrapped up in a story and get off, maybe you'll dig it. The kind comment of one reader:

Mind-blowing erotic!! This is the best quality I have read for a very long time. Brilliant character development. I would love to read more installments.
 
The penultimate chapter of "Staring At The Sun" appeared yesterday so finally this story is drawing to an end. The 14th and final chapter should appear within the next few weeks.

As always, thank you to everyone who's taken the time to read and vote on this. It's the first time I've attempted a story of this length and I've learnt a lot on the way.

All feedback and comments I've received have been invaluable in helping me write this and I really appreciate it!

Thanks!
janiexx:)
 
Been a while...

But I finally got something up.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=305831

*After I submitted, I did find a few things that needed my attention (which means I need to get a better editor); hopefully that version gets replaced soon. But the story is still there.

Anyway, lesbians, vampires and virgins. It's par for the course in the Non-Human Category, but any suggestions will surely go a long way. Thank you!
 
Three new stories out.

I didn't plan it that way... I wanted to space them out but Lit didn't see it that way.... :rolleyes:

Blacks Beach... first time... two girls go to a nude beach for the first time and run into a "nice" couple... Fun for all

Down Old Mexico Way... A vacation that he'll never forget and she won't either, even if she is marrying someone else...

Running..... A spanking on a treadmill... and attacking hubby on the floor... anniversaries are great... well, almost....

See my sig and give them a read... have fun... ;) :D
 
The Favor

Been more than a year, but I've finally posted a new story called The Favor.

It's in Erotic Couplings, but it's got elements of Loving Wives, Romance, Group, and Fetish.

It's the story of a man with a hard-on and a sleepy wife. He sets out to arouse and seduce her by means of an erotic story. He regales her with the tale of a pregnant neighbor and the sexy favor she asks of him.

Is he successful? Is there more to his story? Please read and find out.

click to read The Favor
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The Thank You Dinner

Hi all,

My second submission The Thank You Dinner is now up. It's been rated as Hot by the PTB. I'd like to thank whoever they may be! :nana:

Please give it a read and leave a comment. I'm still learning the ropes and I appreciate all constructive criticism.

Happy Lit Reading,

Me71
 
If a Tree Falls in the Forest...

Under the heading of "Good news - Bad news"...

My latest story, "Confessions From An Affair Ch.3", has been eliciting many very sweet emails and a very high score so far (That's the "good"). Unfortunately it has only garnered 9 votes so far.

I'd like to cordially invite you to take a look for yourself. I think you will enjoy it. Chapter 4 should be out Friday or Saturday.

Happy reading

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=306210
 
Along a similar vein, my story Date Night has been getting wonderful responses (it was getting straight 5s until someone gave it a 1...not their cup of tea, I guess), but it just hit 10 votes. I would love to hear some more responses to it, and get feedback. Plus its a true story (minus the fact that the characters are married) so you can learn a little about me in the process :)
 
Well here they are, my newest stories.

Black Magic is a story about a woman who wants to have sex with a black man. As the story unfolds; , Gloria is talking about her fantasies with her boyfriend Arnie....

"One of Arnie’s favorite fantasies was the one which involved Gloria using a cock-like black vibrator. She would fuck her hot pussy with it while pretending that it was a black man’s cock. Tonight, he had a surprise for her. He’d bought Gloria a similar big black vibrator. His mouth watered and he licked his lips while watching her luscious full-figured body promenade toward him."

Read it to see what happens next!

Mother Nature, was writen for the Earth Day Contest.........

"Deep in the woods of Tennessee in the midst of its rolling mountains and tall pines lays a small, crystal clear lake. Up a winding pathway north of there is a cozy cabin. It is away from the bustling noises of the city that, along with the sounds of the forest, made it a perfect hideaway for John and Deana. Here they could relax, commune with Mother Nature, and get in touch with their inner spirit."

A great way to celebrate Earth Day is to commune with Mother Nature. Read it and see what this couple does.

FRIENDS, ENEMIES, AND TROLLS, DON'T FORGET TO VOTE.
 
Please read my story

I posted this in the AH and Vermillion said it should be posted here. so here it is again. Sorry.

Hi, I'm DG Hear and my latest story just came up. Since most of you have read the Earth Day submissions and are looking for something to read. (haha), I would like feedback on my latest. My editors said it's one of my best. So if you have 20 minutes to waste, I would appreciate feedback on this one. Here's a direct link to the story, If I did it right.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/s...d=306484&page=1

Thank you for any comments, positive or negative.

Also thank those of you who read and voted on my two 'Earth Day' stories. I do appreciate it. They may not win any awards but I did obtain the little 'H' next to them, thanks to you.
Your fellow author (using the term loosely)
DG Hear
 
My first short stories

The Rainstorm
"Stranded in your car, on the side of the road, in what seemed to be the worst rainstorm of the century. We were on our way to the movies when the rain came down so fast and with such force you had no choice but to pull over..."

I've always been a big fan of the rain and decided to incorporate it into one of my stories

The Scenic Route
"Driving down the road you try your best to keep focused on the street, but I keep stealing your attention. Wearing a red halter-top and a short black skirt, I was irresistible. Noticing your glances I smile and begin to tease you by slowly lifting my skirt..."

This is what happens when you combine a couple who loves sex and a back road.


Hope you enjoy these stories :)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=306260

Next to come... I'm currently editing a longer story, hope to have it up soon. It's about a girl and guy who are friends and have always wanted to get together but of course timing has never been right. Until just recently...
 
Out There and Beyond is finished

It is the story of a woman that gets abducted into a mysterious place, and she is left to find out where she is by herself. As a slave she is told little and discouraged to find out more.

Her new owner is harsh but fair, and she is divided between her growing feelings for him, and her conflict at being a pleasure slave.

A touch of domination, a touch of non-con, and lots of dialogue ...

Out There and Beyond

Please tell me what you think.

Maharat
 
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