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First post from a newb

Hello everyone,

I have written a number of short stories which the few people who have read them seemed to enjoy so I have posted one here http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=387937 called Natasha's Hospital Appointment.

I'd very much like to hear any feedback you may have.

There is another submission pending called The Night Nurse (these are the only two 'medical' type stoires I have written so there is no need to type-cast me) which should be available in a day or two.

Thanks in advance if you find time time to read it and give feedback.

Sir
 
Hey all,

Just posted a new story in the BDSM category, entitled 'What are Sisters for?'

It's the first chapter, and I plan on continuing it later. It's about a couple who are having chronic financial trouble. In the past they had always appealed to the wife's sister for help, but the sister and her husband decided they couldn't help them out anymore. Instead, they made a counter-offer: the couple could become sex slaves for the sister and her husband, in return they would be taken care of.

The story contains some elements of lesbian sex, incest, and transgender sex.

If this appeals to any of you, I hope you enjoy. Feedback always welcome. :)

Story link: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=388237
 
Having the time of my life

I recently began posting a series of stories that relate to my galactic heroine, Vera, whose journey is shaping up to be epic and erotic.....not necessarily in that order. I'll do my best to keep up with her, she leads an eventful life. The name of the series is: The Vera Chronicles.
Thanx, DL
 
The Vera Chronicles describes the adventures

of a woman marooned on a lush alien planet. She is rescued from the crash of her lifepod by a tribe of monkeyfolk who nurse her back to health and desire. As she recovers her memories she has a variety of encounters - sexual and otherwise. Not very original but that's where it starts.......who knows what will happen?
Comments and feedback are appreciated....
Thanks, DL
 
Dragonlipz said:
of a woman marooned on a lush alien planet. She is rescued from the crash of her lifepod by a tribe of monkeyfolk who nurse her back to health and desire. As she recovers her memories she has a variety of encounters - sexual and otherwise. Not very original but that's where it starts.......who knows what will happen?
Comments and feedback are appreciated....
Thanks, DL
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Dragonlipz
I'll read and comment on yours if you read mine and send me comments?

My series is called Spreading Seeds Chapters 1-12.
Deal?
 
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Dragon:
I read you storied and made a comment.
Sorry I gave you a 2 because as clever as teh premis is there was no reason for her to be so attracted to momkie fold as she appeared to be.
Maybe thier cum is addictive to earthlings???
Sorry but try again.
 
After a four-year hiatus I've posted another chapter of Those Autofellatio Blues, which was fairly well-received when I was posting stories back then, and I promise that I'll post another installment before 2012.
 
New "Author"

Hi all. Well, I decided to post my first stories (actually just chapters 1 and 2 of a single story). I'm still trying to decide whether to write additional chapters.

I set out to take real people I know and create characters based on them. In addition, the situations in the story come from real life experiences, with some fantasy thrown in to spice things up. I'd be interested in hearing people's feedback. Please feel free to leave feedback on the story page or contact me directly through the Lit "feedback" method.

I'm not entirely happy with it for a couple reasons, but I won't mention them - I don't want to bias any readers except to say that one person's feedback was that he or she had a difficult time differentiating the characters, which I can understand. In my mind, they're all vividly different because I know them in person, but to someone else some of them might run together. Anyway, here it is:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=844010&page=submissions

Enjoy (hopefully)!

Erica :)

PS: please don't complain that Chapter 2 isn't in the right category. I didn't choose it. The Lit editors did.
 
Very Kinky

Dreamthiev said:
Hey all,

Just posted a new story in the BDSM category, entitled 'What are Sisters for?'

It's the first chapter, and I plan on continuing it later. It's about a couple who are having chronic financial trouble. In the past they had always appealed to the wife's sister for help, but the sister and her husband decided they couldn't help them out anymore. Instead, they made a counter-offer: the couple could become sex slaves for the sister and her husband, in return they would be taken care of.

The story contains some elements of lesbian sex, incest, and transgender sex.

If this appeals to any of you, I hope you enjoy. Feedback always welcome. :)

Story link: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=388237
Click to expand...

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Read it all and found it disturbingly attractive. Don't know if I liked it, except for the lesbian stuff, very disturbing that people could be that way.
Well written and would like to read more of the story though.
Jack
 
Barnaby's Back With Benefits!

Here I am with my first story since the summer of 2007! THE BENEFITS OF STAYING IN TOUCH is similar to my old story, PURPLE PASSIONS. Both are light-hearted, fun erotic stories inspired by a real-life dinner with sexy friends. This one is also my longest piece to date! Both of the young women upon whom it's based read it and got horny. Special thanks to my new, non-Lit editor, a young lady I met through the Net. After she read it, she offered cybersex...and she's a lesbian!!

I'm a strong believer that if you can't have fun doing something as fun as sex, what's the point so in my stories, you'll always find friends being friends. In this case, that has its own benefits! Please check out my return and let me know what you think!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=390313
 
Okay New first time story writer to literotica with lots of interesting ideas rattling around in my head for stories. But i'm digressng, I've got new story with plenty of hits so far little over 22,300 hits and an average score of 4.10 but only 2 comments. What gives? What do I need to do to get more feedback about my stories as this is the first of hopefully many more to come. Shrugs can some folks read my Halloween submission and give me an honest critique of my work? Public or private comments are appreciated. :)


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=389645
 
Up to now I haven't been advertising my BDSM stories on this thread, instead opting to use the BDSM cafe advertisment thread, but I have decided to change that.

I have had a BDSM story - "This Lifetime Ch 1" posted and would appreciate any comments/feedback.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=391166

I want to thank Asylum Seeker for voluntarily editing it and to point out any mistakes are all my own.

Thanks,
s
 
New Author with Love/Hate Reluctance Romance theme

Hi I am CruelToBeKind7, and I just started posting here on Lit. My story, "Arch Enemies," is a tale of two beautiful high school seniors, Erin and Brady, who use to be best friends but after a break-up years ago, now argue all the time.

They have a great love/hate relationship where they are verbally mean to the other but physically are very sweet. They are scared and relucatant to show true emotions so they are warring it out right now.

The story has done pretty okay so far, so I would love if others read it and vote/ send me feedback to hear some new thoughts or critiques.

Here's the link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=846166&page=submissions

Thank you all for your time, and I hope you like my stories! I can't wait to hear from you!
CrueltobeKind
 
My new erotic coupling "Quiet Time" is up. It's a simple scene about a husband and wife reconnecting. Modest build up to a climatic finish. Would love to know what you think. It's already posted in my sig line.
 
Shameless plug. Check my sig, oldest to newest tales, a little something for everyone.
 
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