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My new four-chapter story "Counseling" has been accepted by Lit. Fourth chapter will be up on Christmas Eve. Thanks, admins.

"Counseling" is about a celebrity who must deal with her friend being victimized by an evil Scientology minister. She must also overcome her own part in this friend's pain. Check it out at:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=688894&page=submissions

I would like more votes and feedback on my stories, especially this new one.
 
Hey guys,

I just posted my second submission in five years, it's the second chapter to the first submission: Dungeon Slave (creative title huh? lol).

here are the links Dungeon Slave Ch.1 Dungeon Slave Ch.2

This is a nonconsent story, I don't care for real violence against women whatsoever (or men which comes up in Ch.2), this is strictly a fantasy, one I used to entertain as an adolescent boy way back when from the "victim" perspective. I liked the idea of being molested and raped in the context of fantasy, so as most writers do I'm sure, I wrote what was a compelling fantasy for me.

In the first chapter a young woman from Long Beach, CA who works in advertizing is kidnapped by a masked man after late conversation at her favorite coffee house. She's taken to a secret location in Arizona and awakes there suspended in a large room with other victims high above the floor. She's naked with dildos plugged into all her orifices. Her captor comes into the room and uses a remote to lower her to the floor, he proceeds to instruct her as to her proper behavior, whips her and violently rapes her. The first chapter is told by Denise to an F.B.I. agent in a recorded session. She had escaped five months after the kidnapping, with no sign of her captor or knowledge of where the secret location was, a number of scars and a shaved head.

In the second chapter (which took me 5 years to get around to writing) Denise is accompanied by an F.B.I. agent as she seeks to restart her life. In the middle of the night Denise goes back to the street where she used to rent an apartment, which has since been rented to new tenants. When Denise gets excited and begins to yell outside the apartment building one of her old neighbors comes out in his bathrobe astonished to see the way she looks, and to see her at all after being interrogated himself after she disappeared. Denise tells the FBI man Jonas-Joe Lee to stay in the car, and insists that her neighbor, Jack, invite her inside his place. As she has Jack make them both a couple of drinks Denise finds the porno on Jack's computer and starts watching it. When Jack is shocked to find her watching one of his raunchy mother daughter gang bangs and tries to coax Denise to turn it off and come sit in the living room Denise becomes an aggressive guest. Having found Jack's handgun in his room she takes control of the situation. The rest you'll have to read to find out about.
 
Confessions of a Sex Tourist

Hi, I have been writing up my own sexual exploits around the world and also some local casual dating stories, the stories are factual.

Mongering is really about Sex Tourism, going on vacation in an area where you know women are available usually for a fee. It usually occurs where the economic situation of that country is relatively poor and consequently many women get involved in the oldest profession.

Because of the economic disadvantage of the girl, you can often get the girlfriend experience. Although paying for the girls company she acts like your girlfriend, in and out of the bedroom. Sometimes from this a happy marriage can occur, often though the man becomes her sponsor and is taken to the cleaners. Beware!

So would appreciate if some of you could give me some feedback, some of you may be disgusted though:) you can read my stories here
 
A story inspired...

Hi all,

My latest story has now been accepted and can be viewed at:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=400293

For a change I've taken someone else's fantasy as the basis for a story and thoroughly enjoyed getting inside their head for a while. It was fun to follow their idea and see where it led me and I'd love to hear what you all think about the result...

John
 
Hi everyone,
I'm brand new...after reading stories on this site for a year I finally took the plunge and submitted some of my work. One of the few times I've ever followed through on a New Year's resolution, LOL!

"The Chosen One" and Ch. 02 (BDSM, Sultan and harem girl fantasy) are here:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=400346
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=400937

Erotic poem "Passion Postcard" is here:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=401523

Any feedback is appreciated, erotica is a new genre for me ;-)

Enjoy!

~~LK
 
"Jessica Alba on the Beach"
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=375562

I wrote it like 6 months ago, but never announced it here. It's actually one of the few stories I've managed to finish. There may be a second chapter coming if I get the time to write (may take a while) and you are kind to me. ;)

"Two is four" Ch1 & 2
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=354708
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=374763

Here are two chapters of a Dark Angel story. Probably won't continue it unless I get a sudden inspiration.
 
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Love some feedback

I would love some feedback on my stories, I have two series and haven't heard much feedback lately....thanks! xoxo
 
Surrender, conversion, emotion--Giselle: a lesbian seduction story

Been writing all my life, but never posted here before. When I say "I," I really mean "we," as we are a couple and try to use each others' different gender insights to make our stories more realistic and well-rounded, though frequently one of us will predominate. We try to write from erotica from a psychological perspective rather than physiological. I think it's safe to say almost all our stories are about threshold moments, moments of surrender, conversion. We're interested in what happens in peoples' heads at these moments, and only secondarily in their bodies, though the two are obviously intertwined.

So far we've been pleased with the feedback. People really seem to respond here, and since the readers who have seen the story--20K views in 2 days? can that be true?--genuinely seem to be enjoying our work we thought we'd try to let others know about it.
 
Wanted to let everyone know that the follow up to my Halloween contest 2nd place story, It happened in the night, is finally available.
 
NEW STORY POST: Jen's back

Jen’s back, this time prowling Route 66 across the state of New Mexico in search of getting more kicks on her drive to Santa Monica. Come on in and share the fun with her and learn something about the Mother Road.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=404127 Tucumcari, New Mexico

The story starts with the Chicago end at Lake Michigan and continues in succeeding chapters with Jen working her way west to the Pacific Ocean. This is chapter one and should be read first. You can find these other chapters listed at the end of the above story--or you can go to the author page and click on caprine.

Enjoy your fantasies.
 
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The Forest Elf Ch. 3 now posted

After reading the feedback I received from the first two chapters of my story, I continued the story. Chapter 3 is finished and available for all to read.

I thank everyone who voted and provided feedback; the votes I receive and especially the feedback is what motivates me to continue writing.


If you would like to read the stories, here are the links:

The Forest Elf Ch. 1
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=390731

The Forest Elf Ch. 2
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=392599

The Forest Elf Ch. 3
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=400178

The Forest Elf Ch. 4
???? If there is enough interest, I will continue the story...

Thank you all for your feedback and encouragement.


Kuffsnkeys
 
Hello all...

I've not published any new stories for almost four years. Today, I've published Shadows In The Dark. This is my second attempt at a non-consent story. Positive feedback is always welcomed, as is constructive criticism. Thank you.
 
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Mixed Blessings- Punk Sci-fi

Hi everyone,

I've got a Science-fiction series going that crosses many of the categories if you'd like to check it out. I should warn you though, it's actually a story with a plot that weaves its way through Alex's life, so make sure you read all chapters through. Chapter five has just been accepted & I have a few more planned.
Here's the link to start it off for you:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=402633

Thanks for reading, rating, commenting and enjoy! :)
Ten
 
I've had this fantasy for years. After finding out the sexual tension was very real from the woman evolved in the story, I sent her an abbreviated story of the same context. She said she had to "polish one off" after reading it. Just wondered if it would have the same effect on others.
I enjoy this writing style, I'm working on my second fantasy,...um story right now, and look forward to submitting it.

Night With The Sales Rep
www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=403713

As well, any comments, tips, suggestions are most welcomed
 
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Sabah's Mother

The fourth and last of the Sabah series. Sabah, a being that feeds on the sexual energy of men, takes her victim/lover/ lover to visit her mother.
 
New Story Post...

in the Route 66 series. Jen has reached the state of New Mexico--the Land of Enchantment. It’s easy to see that Jen is indeed enchanted with that land. Ride along with her in her 1963 Corvette split window coupe as the twenty-three year old continues her 1963 odyssey across the USA on Route 66. This is the next to last in the series before she reachers her goal at Santa Monica. Be sure you read the series from the start in Chicago. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Yahoo! Go Swifty, Go!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=405308
 
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