spankmytentacle
Imaginary Playmate
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- Jul 22, 2016
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I'm looking for a beta reader to give a light read and "sanity check" to the fourth chapter of an ongoing story. I'm just looking for a "WTF, this sentence makes no sense" level of beta reading. I'm not expecting a horrendous level of effort from anyone for free.
This chapter runs about 4,500 words and is a tender story of a young, virginal girl (18+) being introduced to the beautiful world of adult pleasures by an older woman.
Spoiler 1: The young girl falls for the older woman.
Spoiler 2: The older woman is married.
Spoiler 3: The older woman is the young girl's mom.
Spoiler 4: The daughter unexpectedly discovers she's a natural submissive for her mom.
It involves incest, lesbian sex, very light bondage, and dom/sub dynamics. So if you're still reading, ping me and let me know you're interested in giving it a quick read. If you're interested in the story, the first three chapters are here:
https://literotica.com/s/jennys-journey-ch-01-1
https://literotica.com/s/jennys-journey-ch-02-1
https://literotica.com/s/jennys-journey-ch-03-1
So, as the kids say, hit me up or whatever.
This chapter runs about 4,500 words and is a tender story of a young, virginal girl (18+) being introduced to the beautiful world of adult pleasures by an older woman.
Spoiler 1: The young girl falls for the older woman.
Spoiler 2: The older woman is married.
Spoiler 3: The older woman is the young girl's mom.
Spoiler 4: The daughter unexpectedly discovers she's a natural submissive for her mom.
It involves incest, lesbian sex, very light bondage, and dom/sub dynamics. So if you're still reading, ping me and let me know you're interested in giving it a quick read. If you're interested in the story, the first three chapters are here:
https://literotica.com/s/jennys-journey-ch-01-1
https://literotica.com/s/jennys-journey-ch-02-1
https://literotica.com/s/jennys-journey-ch-03-1
So, as the kids say, hit me up or whatever.
