TheLobster
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Congratulations, you have just invented emoji.I've considered trying to write a 1P with no internal monologue. I think it would almost exclusively be a reporting of events, but done in a way to keep the voice intact by the use of words and structure. Maybe with a couple one-word things, like emotion: