"One Night in XXX” Story Event: Official Support Thread

[LoquiSordidaAdMe]

I kinda feel like I'm off track, again, or something is wonky, but I'm just going to keep going and see what happens I guess.
I'm rambling. I feel like the story isn't progressing because I'm talking about the most boring stuff. I can't seem to find that fine line between enough detail and jesus christ I don't need to know that.

Yes! This exactly! I'm right there with you CWM.

 

[Hypoxia]

Chimps, guerrillas, 'rang'tangs, gibbons, bonbons er I mean baboons, etc are great apes, not monkeys. I have been close to chimps and spider monkeys. I can tell the difference. Humans are apes too, though not too great, usually. And not so colorful as mandrills.

"One Night With Mandrills." Oh, I hope not. "Thrills! Spills! Pills! Chills! Mandrills!" Good for a poster.

 

[CoffeeWithMonkeys]

Yes! This exactly! I'm right there with you CWM.

I'm going to walk away from it for today, I feel like I'm typing in circles not making any progress.

 

[JamesMiehoff]

There's a drive-in almost to Dallas when driving I-45 from Houston. Starlight or Galaxy or some such. The good thing about the location is that it can run almost year round due to lack of snow.

Never been in, but IIRC it has a bunch of screens. In my youth, we used to go to a quad screen drive in. It was awesome when they replaced the speakers you hung on the window with low powered FM transmitters for the different screens. If you could get a good spot, you had your pick of four movies and you just needed to program them into your FM radio to pick up the soundtrack.

I also remember one somewhere in Wisconsin. It was screened by trees from the road and the last summer it was running they must have decided, "What the hell?" and ran X-Rated movies there. Only reason I know this is because the top floors of the Holiday Inn were higher than the trees. Once I accidently discovered this, I made a point of stopping there on our drives between Chicago and Minneapolis. The wife normally didn't get into porn but for some reason this tickled her voyeuristic bone and that meant mine got tickled too.

Too many good drive-in memories.

james

 

[Zeb_Carter]

There's a drive-in almost to Dallas when driving I-45 from Houston. Starlight or Galaxy or some such. The good thing about the location is that it can run almost year round due to lack of snow.

Never been in, but IIRC it has a bunch of screens. In my youth, we used to go to a quad screen drive in. It was awesome when they replaced the speakers you hung on the window with low powered FM transmitters for the different screens. If you could get a good spot, you had your pick of four movies and you just needed to program them into your FM radio to pick up the soundtrack.

I also remember one somewhere in Wisconsin. It was screened by trees from the road and the last summer it was running they must have decided, "What the hell?" and ran X-Rated movies there. Only reason I know this is because the top floors of the Holiday Inn were higher than the trees. Once I accidently discovered this, I made a point of stopping there on our drives between Chicago and Minneapolis. The wife normally didn't get into porn but for some reason this tickled her voyeuristic bone and that meant mine got tickled too.

Too many good drive-in memories.

james

In the suburbs of Chicago there was a X-Rated drive in, instead of trees they had giant flood light pointed out of the theater area so you couldn't see the screens from outside of the drive-in. If I remember, it didn't last long.

The wife and I went once, it was really too bright inside the flood lights to do anything but watch the movie which was hard to see. We left early and went dancing instead.

 

[Hypoxia]

I vaguely recall a coastal drive-in theater, screen aimed at the ocean, showing pr0n to paid customers and to any boaters risking the rocks offshore.

 

[Zeb_Carter]

Well, I finished One Night In Denver 1973. No drive-ins in it though.

I don't know where to post it now though. It could go in Group, Loving Wives, or Erotic Couplings.

I think group would be the best...

I did come up with two other stories while thinking about this one. One will be a Loving Wives adventure, the other a Incest/Taboo or Exhibitionist/Voyeur. There may or may not be any contact by mom and son. He may just look and enjoy.

 

[ChloeTzang]

Well, I finished One Night In Denver 1973. No drive-ins in it though.

And I’m almost done One Night in Xanadu and I’m working on One Night in Roanapur.

 

[NotWise]

And I’m almost done One Night in Xanadu and I’m working on One Night in Roanapur.

I did One Night in Gormaz right away, let it rest, added some 1500 words, and had a very helpful beta read. I'll let it rest again until we get closer to the date. Then I'll take my last shot at it. I don't think I've ever had a story at this state so long before a deadline.

I wish I had that much progress with Wolves of Winter.

 

[JanusGoneAwry]

Chimps, guerrillas, 'rang'tangs, gibbons, bonbons er I mean baboons, etc are great apes, not monkeys. I have been close to chimps and spider monkeys. I can tell the difference. Humans are apes too, though not too great, usually. And not so colorful as mandrills.

"One Night With Mandrills." Oh, I hope not. "Thrills! Spills! Pills! Chills! Mandrills!" Good for a poster.

Uhhhh baboons are old world monkeys not apes but you probably meant bonobos. Mandrills while very colorful are also not apes.

Just say’n

 

[NotWise]

Uhhhh baboons are old world monkeys not apes but you probably meant bonobos. Mandrills while very colorful are also not apes.

Now you're trying to introduce Hypoxia to reality. The best you can hope for is a temporary remission, which he might curse you for.

 

[rebel_code]

I submitted my latest and am now free to tinker a little more with "One Night in Taipei". Don't see much more that can be done with it, but that's OK. The original is a one-pager that was done as a break from a larger story that was taking too long. Still it's sitting there with a 4.60, which amazes me. I'm going to ask for it to be removed, so that this one can go up as the One True "One Night in Taipei" story and start out on an equal footing with the rest.

Pending: "Newlywed's First Kiss": Her first time, as honeymoon couple makes room for a third. (Group Sex)

 

[Hypoxia]

Uhhhh baboons are old world monkeys not apes but you probably meant bonobos. Mandrills while very colorful are also not apes.

• The Pongidae, or "great apes", are a taxon including the gorillas, chimpanzees, and orangutans, but not humans.
• An ape is a member of the Hominoidea superfamily of primates. There are two extant branches of the superfamily Hominoidea: the gibbons, or lesser apes; and the hominids, or great apes. The family Hylobatidae, the lesser apes, include four genera and a total of sixteen species of gibbon, including the lar gibbon and the siamang, all native to Asia. The family Hominidae (hominids), the great apes, includes three extant species of orangutans and their subspecies, two extant species of gorillas and their subspecies, two extant species of chimpanzees and their subspecies, and one extant species of humans in a single extant subspecies.

I am a trained taxonomist. Beware.

Oops, I forgot baboons and their spin-offs, mandrills. They're monkeys, not apes. Sorry. Just don't let them in your house.

ONE NIGHT IN THE MONKEY HOUSE probably won't fly here. Darn.

 

[CoffeeWithMonkeys]

I'm thinking I might seek out someone to read over this before I submit it anywhere. It's just...boring...or something.
I get stuck in that void where I don't know if I need more detail or if I'm boring everyone to death with too much detail.
Having aspergers and writing is difficult because my aspergers mind NEEDS every detail, but I know most of the rest of the world couldn't care less what color and style someone's shirt is.

 

[yukonnights]

I'm thinking I might seek out someone to read over this before I submit it anywhere. It's just...boring...or something.
I get stuck in that void where I don't know if I need more detail or if I'm boring everyone to death with too much detail.
Having aspergers and writing is difficult because my aspergers mind NEEDS every detail, but I know most of the rest of the world couldn't care less what color and style someone's shirt is.

Have you had time to set it aside for a couple of days? Most of us have to do that before we can see it with any fresh clarity.

 

[CoffeeWithMonkeys]

Have you had time to set it aside for a couple of days? Most of us have to do that before we can see it with any fresh clarity.

I'm going to have to. I've been worried with the deadline getting close so I've worked on it a little bit every day.

 

[CalliopeDelgado]

I'm in, because it's a reason to finally write the story ... "One Night in Edinburgh"

 

[yukonnights]

I'm in, because it's a reason to finally write the story ... "One Night in Edinburgh"

Another old-timer Looks like we joined Literotica the same year, 2007. Good luck on your story!

 

[ElectricBlue]

Mine's dead in the water for this collection - I've lost interest and the deadline is too close.

For those who might have been curious, Dzamin Ude is on the Mongolian side of the Chinese/Mongolian border, where the train passes through. I did the trip in 1984 when Reagan was talking about winning nuclear wars and joking about bombing Moscow, and Chernenko was still tottering about in the Kremlin. Historically fascinating but not very erotic. "Show me your border guard and I'll show you mine" doesn't quite work....

 

[Zeb_Carter]

Just to warn everyone... nobody dies in either of my stories. Just so y'all know ahead of time.

 

[Vix_Giovanni]

Mine's dead in the water for this collection - I've lost interest and the deadline is too close.

For those who might have been curious, Dzamin Ude is on the Mongolian side of the Chinese/Mongolian border, where the train passes through. I did the trip in 1984 when Reagan was talking about winning nuclear wars and joking about bombing Moscow, and Chernenko was still tottering about in the Kremlin. Historically fascinating but not very erotic. "Show me your border guard and I'll show you mine" doesn't quite work....

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

This sounds so good, EB!!! why tease if we can’t read it!!! Start it off with sex on the train?

 

[ChloeTzang]

Mine's dead in the water for this collection - I've lost interest and the deadline is too close.

For those who might have been curious, Dzamin Ude is on the Mongolian side of the Chinese/Mongolian border, where the train passes through. I did the trip in 1984 when Reagan was talking about winning nuclear wars and joking about bombing Moscow, and Chernenko was still tottering about in the Kremlin. Historically fascinating but not very erotic. "Show me your border guard and I'll show you mine" doesn't quite work....

What do you mean!!!!! That’s wonderful. A train. Mongolia. A foreigner. A beautiful Mongolian girl. True love. Hot sex on the train and in the morning....

Chloe looks for her whip. Write, EB. Write!

 

[Vix_Giovanni]

What do you mean!!!!! That’s wonderful. A train. Mongolia. A foreigner. A beautiful Mongolian girl. True love. Hot sex on the train and in the morning....

Chloe looks for her whip. Write, EB. Write!

Whip him into it, Chloe! I neeeeed this story!!!!

 

[Vix_Giovanni]

I forgot my train of thought haha.

I’d also like to add a second entry. One Night in Yomitan. To celebrate Tanabata.

 

[LoquiSordidaAdMe]

Mine's dead in the water for this collection - I've lost interest and the deadline is too close.

I feel you. I haven't given up yet, but my hope is fading. I'm 12k words in and I haven't gotten to the erotic part yet. The story is much more complicated than I realized.