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OOC: Immortals War

Nice. I like the character UN.

I can say that Ren will be happy now that there is another full blood in this thread.
 
Yeah, I didn't want Ren to be the only full blood in the thread.

I was hoping someone would join him.
 
I was just having trouble with her history... cause I wanted her to be very involved with the social show in the 17th century so I almost made her a half blood but decided to go ahead and go full.
 
It is a good thing that you did.

WS told me to tell you that she loves your character and she has a feeling that her character and your character aren't going to "play nice".
 
ok, one charecter. I want to have a guy who fights for blood and can take down as many without combat experience to a certain extent as he likes. Is that acceptable? he will still only fight a few vamps at once, not always winning.
 
That's one way to put it. Oh, before I forget to mention it.... here is the thread.

Immortals War

Hope everyone has fun in it.
 
let3us2be1free0 said:
ok, one charecter. I want to have a guy who fights for blood and can take down as many without combat experience to a certain extent as he likes. Is that acceptable? he will still only fight a few vamps at once, not always winning.
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Is he a mortal or vampire?

What do you mean without combat experience? Do you mean the people that he fights against? Is he some type of warrior?
 
I like the idea Freebie but there is one big rule that I have. You cannot walk into a room with 10 characters and expect to walk out without a scratch. It also depends on how much training your vampire has.

Also remember one thing, the Spartans were trained from an early age (4 yrs old) for war and only war. They were trained to become the ultimate soldier, the ultimate warrior and they knew nothing else. Much of their other social training was done in fits and spurts and all was devoted to combat skills.

Are you going to be a full blood or half blood?
 
i know a bit about the spartants. A vampire trained for 200 years to do that would be more fearsome, i think. Im not sure if full or half blood. If half, he has human agressivness and vampire. if full, added streanth, but no human agression. what do you think is better? Im leaning toward human...
 
That is true but there are always others that have been training for longer than that.

It depends on how old your character is going to be. Some of the half bloods can become like full bloods with little to no emotions whatsoever so it is a difficult choice to make. Just go with your gut instinct and make your character like that.
 
Freebie, please just post up your bio and I will tell you if it is okay or if it needs tweaking.
 
bio:
name: Stalker
type of vampire: half blood
Faction: full blood for now
Age: 568
How old he looks: 37ish
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 135lbs
Hair color: Hair is a mustach thats white. The rest is burned off.
Eye color: crimson black
History: He was a child with no home, and a loving parent. She cared for him until onday she was raped before him, then tried in court and killed. He wanted revenge and seeked out streetfighters and assasins and such who taught him to kill. Eventuly he was trained by profesionals, and taught everything a human needed for the revenge of its lifetime. He was in the process of killing the first of many officals when he encountered the vampire. It was very ammused at his doings after it learned he was a human. He asked it to either help with the kill or go to hell. It gladly helped, then spent a bit of time teaching him how to kill like a vampire. Over time he grew skilled enough to treaten it. It decided to kill him, but he fled, and later on defeated it with a trained vampire hunter. The vampire offered to turn him, and the hunter tried to kill it. Hhe killed the hunter and acepted the offer, but said he didn't want his blood. The vampire took him to a master killer compared to human standards, and he turned him. He killed the vampire who brought him and has sence been training with the master. He took the name stalker, because thats what he does to his prey. He has long ago forgotten what name he had, and thinks his mother gave him one, but dosen't care about it, since him revenge is complete.
 
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Okay, let me see if I get this right....

Cobra's mother was raped and killed. Cobra set out to be trained by assassins and the like and was in the process of killing the killers when he came across a vampire. The vamp helped him then started training him until Cobra got too powerful and the vampire threatened to kill him but Cobra ran away. He somehow met a vampire hunter and hunted down the vampire. The vampire offered to turn Cobra and the hunter tried to kill the vampire. But this is the bit I am hazy on, did the vampire kill the hunter then offer to turn Cobra and Cobra accepted? And then because Cobra refused to drink the vampire's blood he took Cobra to his master and the master turned Cobra and after that Cobra kills the vampire and the vampire's master trains Cobra....

did I get that right.

(( Edit: Cobra = Stalker ))
 
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are you making fun of me? And stalker (cobra dosn't stick)killed the hunter. He did that cause the hunter was gonna kill the vamp. And the vamp was gonna make him more powerfull. so he kills hunter in order to gain power from vamp. simple, i think. He could already defeat the vamp, so what use was their in its blood? It made sense to a human. Sorry if its to long an explaination. You got the rest right, i think.
 
sorry to butt in here... but if Stalker... *shrugs* could kill the vamp he was up against... why involve the hunter at all?
 
thanks for defining the chain, nerd. Thge hunters there cause he couldn't overpower the vampire by himself, until after the master turns him. The vamp didn't kill him when he killed the hunter cause it was weakened. Thus my dude experiences alot of life ;) :cathappy: .
 
I'm not making fun of you.

Right now Stalker is a little too powerful. Cut down on his power somewhat - I know he's skilled and trained but please keep it reasonable. Right now you sound more powerful than WS's 2000 yr old vampire and Ren's Ancient. That's not possible. Remember, you are somewhat young and a half blood.

Also, can you make him a little bit shorter. If he was born that tall in the time frame you've given him, then he would have been born most likely a freak and his mother would have had a very hard time birthing him (Back then the stature of humans was on average 5'7" to about 5'11 with some reaching 6')

His hair would have grown back by now. Also his eyes need to be more human like when he's 'normal' and when he's 'changed' - look at the first post I made in the OOC in terms of what happens when the vampires in this thread 'change'.

The rest of your history is great. Just tweak it a little bit to pull back his power (you can always grow in power in the thread, don't worry).
 
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