OOC: Raven of the City

[Azerin]

I'm.... um... well, i had some RL problems setting up my home network... and failing miserably... i think i also messed up connecting to the internet slightly... i dont know...

anyways, Jack is still sort of here... doing nothing...

 

[ariosto]

Ramon and Vince, present and accounted for.

 

[Ticklish Girl]

Alison is still in.

 

[THEBRAT]

The only time I won't be online is the week of September 17 Jury Duty!

My shoulders not broke I've got the begings of Artharitis and I broke the seal in my shoulder joint so it pops out if I sneeze violently!

 

[SexyChele]

Oh, Brat, thank goodness it isn't broken. I'm sorry to hear about arthritis now being a problem. Don't have it myself, but I know folks who do and it is very painful from what I understand.

 

[THEBRAT]

Yes it is very painful I already have Arthitis in my Right Hip!

I may disappear for a while my Mother is bleeding internally and the Doctors can't find where she is bleeding from she has already lost three pints of blood!

 

[Azerin]

eck... I'm sorry to hear that...
I hope both you, and your mother both get better soon...

 

[THEBRAT]

Thank you but my Mother is slowly dieing piece by piece

 

[sojournerwolf]

Good to see everyone who is still here and willing to write

*S* Good to have those of you who have decided to stay! I would like to try and get the plot into some sort of focus and develop it from there, as well as giving some sort of anchor to the sub plots.

I would like to return the focus of the thread to the women being beaten and/or killed and tie it in with the mysterious drugs that Raven has found. I would also like to try and find a tie in with Santiago and Alison.

Let me know if this works for you all.

Thanks

 

[SexyChele]

I agree...that's why I set up the scenario as I did with the dead body and note. Hope it can be worked in, if not, then feel free to change to suit.

Yes, Alison and Santiago really do need to be tied to the main plot somehow. And what about Clarrissa? An interesting twist there!

Sorry, SW, I'm able to post this evening or tomorrow until maybe late. If the story needs to move along either you or Ariosto can move my character as you see fit, if she needs to be involved.

 

[THEBRAT]

I am going to be gone for a couple of days going up to My Brothers place so I will see ya peeps when I get back

 

[Wind_Walker]

Time to join?

I am new to the lit....but not to RP sites, this one seems to stand out. Having read your thread, and seeing a new cast call perhaps this would be the time for new members to join it???

I see hints of "the Evil" and a few characters who might work at that definition, but no real defined thing or person...

Since you are trying to "retrack" this, perhaps I could supply the part of the "Evil"?

It wouldn't necessitate a part that would steal the stage, so to speak....but give everyone a character to play against?

Everyone has hinted, perhaps this is intentional, or perhaps you are lacking a member....Please let me know, I will abide by your decision

Sincerely,

Wind Walker

 

[sojournerwolf]

about the evil

Wind Walker, would be happy to have you join us. Perhaps on the bad guys side. Take a look at Santiago and Allison Chambers posts and characters, see if you want to tie in there someway? Or if you have a suggestion outside of them, let us know here.

Thanks!

 

[Clarrissa]

Greetings SW,
Not exactly sure where to go with Victoria and how she can be tied into this if at all. Had ideas at first then a few characters dropped out and some things changed a bit.

Any suggestions would be welcome.

Clarrissa

 

[Ticklish Girl]

For Ariosto

Hi, Ari. Tried to PM you but I got a message saying your box was full.

Just wanted to say that I liked the twist you introduced to the story. I had a couple of different ideas for how to go on, but I wanted to check something with you first. (I don't want to go galloping off in a totally weird direction, LOL.) Just wanted to know: Is this Lee character somehow connected to the drug Raven is investigating?

If you don't want to spoil the surprise for anyone reading the thread, you can PM or email me.

 

[sojournerwolf]

my apologies

Sorry for the delay in posting; RL and this computer have been somethingof a bear. Will try to catch up tonight on "Raven"

 

[sojournerwolf]

closing the thread

I hate to do this, but I have to take a hiatus from Literotica SRP for a while. I apologize for the inconvenience and regret leaving as I have thoroughly enjoyed writing with you all.

Since part of my hiatus involves work on more Raven stories (the first has already been accepted by a publisher and I am trying to put together a proposal for a serial) I feel it best to go ahead and close the thread for now anyway.

Again, my apologies and regrets; I wish all of you the best in your writing and the threads

 

[SexyChele]

Sojourner, good luck to you in your endeavors. I think I join many here who wish you only the best in whatever you put your hand to. You have always been kind, patient, and encouraging to writers both experienced and novice, and I, for one, look up to your talent.

Best wishs and good luck, my friend. And may you have cause to stop by and see us from time to time.

You WILL be missed, SW -

 

[Ticklish Girl]

We will miss you, SW. I've thoroughly enjoyed working with you on Raven and the Hawkes thread. You are a very talented author, and I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors. I hope to see you again sometime down the road. Take care.

 

[BLACK BART]

Best Wishes!!!!

Royce,

I have said it and sensed it from the beginning of knowing you, and having the honor of writing with you in the same story line......


You are an incredible writer, you write large and still have an extra ordinary sense of relating to an average writer, making them better than they normally could be, and encouraging them!

Good luck in your future, I will be waiting for the December issue for your first release of Raven, and all issues in the future....