OOC: Street Fighter – Strung By Fate [PM if interested]

[chronicle_tenko]

i just thought of a more interesting idea for the fights.....what if they were done over, say, yahoo messenger....then one of the two participants could copy/paste the whole thing into word, edit it, and then copy/paste the remainder into the thread

Not bad. But that involves the two people Exchanging addy's and being on at the same time. And the time becomes a limitation again.

And I liked your post lots. With Three exceptions.

If you can handle a Critique.

 

[FenixZero]

i just thought of a more interesting idea for the fights.....what if they were done over, say, yahoo messenger....then one of the two participants could copy/paste the whole thing into word, edit it, and then copy/paste the remainder into the thread

yeah fighting in real time can be alot more intresting. It might be a good idea to make the finals a bit more of a challenge.

 

[chronicle_tenko]

yeah fighting in real time can be alot more intresting. It might be a good idea to make the finals a bit more of a challenge.

Finals reminds me.

Does anyone know if we're round robining?

 

[dragonrazor]

i myself thought it was a little over the top...any advice you can give would be helpful

 

[chronicle_tenko]

i myself thought it was a little over the top...any advice you can give would be helpful

Well works well. Cept

1. Damage. You took none. Unless it's a squash (I.E. you are supposed to just dominate) you too get hurt. With a competitor Like Balrog, unless Rai is on the level of Akuma or Oro you'd be hit, and hurt as well. There was a reason he was one of Bison's top enforcers. And he's got everybit as much power and cunning as Vega or Sagat. (Gameplay too. Balrog is a monster.)

2. Injury. I know it happens I know we're mortal too. You can't write that you hurt someone. You broke his knee. That means that if he accpets it, or if it stands He can't fight for the rest of the tournament. You've effectively Benched his character for the entire thread. I don't care what Sagat doing says, I don't write it hurts or damages someone permanently. People can take stock and a bruised rib, or a sprained knee can and will effect someone. Write that you Dislocate it, Twist the nerves using a hold. Shatter his knee BACKWARD, Guy would never walk again.

3. It's in thread. We've posted now. Even if he puts something up we have to alter our posts. Well Me and Ken don't But say we decide Balrog wins. (Not likely since Masume sort of said he lost before he posted.) Then we have to alter the thread. Though Ryu has excellent comments.

The rest of your post is great. I'd rather know what I'm fighting against but that's a personal writing issue. If I don't know how you fight or what you do how am I supposed to write realistically what you do.

But I applaud your creativity and the nerve holds are cool. I think it was great. But for those three points.

Incidentally if anyone wants to leave critiques for me I know I'm not perfect and I would appreciate any comments.

 

[dragonrazor]

i myself was worried about that. I was thinking he should have had to wrap his ribs from the hits he took, and the final blow was one i was worried about a lot...

oh well, now we wait to see his version and the verdict

 

[Masume]

I myself was wondering about the part with the knee and lack of damage on Balrog’s part. Um, unless he has given an "ok" to having a limb broken then it's not really a go. As Tenko stated it makes him useless through the rest of the thread. That was my issue Other than that I loved the post. Looking forward to seeing Balrog's post. So...are we in a stand still until he arrives?

Vega is still there. Hmm...didn't get as much of a reaction as I had hoped with him.

 

[dragonrazor]

i think we are, yes

 

[Armphid]

I think you got a pretty good reaction for Vega. Everyone noticed him, and no one seems very pleased about it.

You could always move ahead with a background plot or a scene of exposition that the characters aren't aware of. Maybe Vega could go after Karin the way he hinted he would (though there's Sagat and Ken there, maybe not)

Still plenty of ground to cover, I'd say.

 

[Masume]

In the meantime, we can plan a few things. I'm guessing all matches will be "story" based. I think the final two or three matches we can set up a chat room or something somewhere and do that there like on MSN or something.

Also, since we're still voting it seems. Do not post match reactions until both are up. After this, match ends. There will be no matches until the next day in the thread. But you will be told what the next two matches will be before the "night" ends.

 

[Masume]

I think you got a pretty good reaction for Vega. Everyone noticed him, and no one seems very pleased about it.

You could always move ahead with a background plot or a scene of exposition that the characters aren't aware of. Maybe Vega could go after Karin the way he hinted he would (though there's Sagat and Ken there, maybe not)

Still plenty of ground to cover, I'd say.

Why thank ya. I believe he shall do just that.

 

[Masume]

I will have him bug Cammy as well. Just to get under Guile's skin! MUWHAHAHAHAHAHA *cough*

 

[dragonrazor]

should i edit my post, or leave it as is?

 

[Armphid]

Why thank ya. I believe he shall do just that.

Awesome. One of the things I liked best from both Street Fighter II V and the Udon comics was that Ken and Vega just seemed to hate each other on sight.

Plus, Vega's a wonderful psychopath. Can't wait to see him in full crazy.

 

[dragonrazor]

ok, out of boredom, i editted my post a little bit....gone is the kneecap thing, but in its place, i put a double connection...Rai got hit in the side, so his ribs are cracked. Balrog just got a foot to the side of the head


i'm off to bed now though

also, guy who's playing Balrog, feel free to use the Rising Fang move in your post

 

[ShinChuck]

Not sure if Dan is integral to anything that's currently going on, but if I'm needed I'll be back in an hour or two if he's needed for a match or whatever. I take it Balrog's gonna post his version of the fight soon? Do we vote on that or is it already decided? ^-^

 

[Masume]

Could be Dan vs. Ken or Ryu next?

 

[FenixZero]

I can't wait to fight! Dan, Cammy, Guile, Chun-Li are all good. Ken should come later, we gotta build some excitment for that one.

But personally I was hoping to take on Vega at some point two. The anime never features Ryu VS Vega and I've got some killer ideas for how the fight could go down.

 

[Masume]

So Ryu vs. Dan is cool with you?

 

[FenixZero]

Bring it on. Whoever you throw at me, I aim to misbehave.

 

[Masume]

Then it's settled. The next match is Ryu vs. Dan and Ken vs. Guile.

 

[FenixZero]

This is gonna be intresting...

 

[ShinChuck]

Sounds like a plan to me! *Thumbs up!*

 

[ShinChuck]

BTW, just to clarify, Rai defeated Balrog, right? Thank you. ^-^

 

[Masume]

Yes he has.