Chicklet said:Okay, so I've edited that part to put a little more info. It's about 3 pages long, the conversation where she agrees to go, and then her interview with the "agency." I'm going to keep that part, but put it in later in the story. (just a little FYI)
So next I'm putting Chloe on the space station, already in the brothel. This is going to be the begining of the story. I'm thinking that she's there, whimpering while some guy fucks her brains out. I'm not really sure yet, haven't started writing it, actually, but I'll keep ya posted, people!
Chicklet
That's the shit! Can't wait to read this one.
-T