Sci-Fi Futuristic Underground Slave Trade
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MsLinnet said:
Hi Chicklet,
Looks like you are bogged down with work or something just as futile. I was just wondering how this project was going I am looking forward to reading it when it is written.
Luv N Stuff
Lin
hey linnet,
yeah i've got a million things going on, as always, and I LOVE IT!
Chicklet
One thing I have never understood about NC is why it can't be nice and comefy NC. Why doesn't the villain ever tie the struggling girl to the bed and then, you know, be really nice to her. Make her feel important and wanted and sexy and all that. You know. Nice to her.
How about, for example, while the most beautiful man in the world is pleasuring her with his tongue, four beauticians are doing her nails etc and giving her a really excelent makeover. Meanwhile other henchmen are redecorating her house, updating her wardrobe and all her whiteware. Then they leave just before the hubby gets home.
Perhaps a sort of futuristic candid camera.
It probably wont fit into this context, but it had to be said.
How about, for example, while the most beautiful man in the world is pleasuring her with his tongue, four beauticians are doing her nails etc and giving her a really excelent makeover. Meanwhile other henchmen are redecorating her house, updating her wardrobe and all her whiteware. Then they leave just before the hubby gets home.
Perhaps a sort of futuristic candid camera.
It probably wont fit into this context, but it had to be said.
I've been reading this thread with anticipation, as any women in peril situation is a great story. From the woman-in-prison to the women forced to work in a brothel, mix in a bit of sci-fi and that rattles a few chains!!
Some way along the line someone pointed out that this story line is along the same lines as a book by Charm Brights (found on BDSMBooks.com). Well it is the main plot in the space trilogy written by Charm Brights. However, very little of each of these books describes the actual brothels for the miners, as this is were the main characters always end up, at the end of the story. So it's not the main plot.
So we could do with more about the miners/prisoners, and yes a great twist is our prositute not being able to communicate with the miners. this is mentioned in the first of the Charm books were our "heorine" is sent to one of the cells with a group of prisoners who speak a different language to serve them as whore and house keeper.
Sorry to blow on the parade of those that intend to write this story, but if its has every bit as good as the books mentioned above it should go a long way.
Some way along the line someone pointed out that this story line is along the same lines as a book by Charm Brights (found on BDSMBooks.com). Well it is the main plot in the space trilogy written by Charm Brights. However, very little of each of these books describes the actual brothels for the miners, as this is were the main characters always end up, at the end of the story. So it's not the main plot.
So we could do with more about the miners/prisoners, and yes a great twist is our prositute not being able to communicate with the miners. this is mentioned in the first of the Charm books were our "heorine" is sent to one of the cells with a group of prisoners who speak a different language to serve them as whore and house keeper.
Sorry to blow on the parade of those that intend to write this story, but if its has every bit as good as the books mentioned above it should go a long way.
Re: comfy n/c
I probably would, but I suspect there would not be many others
Actually, I was making light of a serious wish really. That 'female suicide bomber' is another example of comfy NC. infact both my tales here are too. It just seems a genre that only I am interested in, or atleast not enough to make a hard distinction. The other approach that is seldom used is a facination with her mind and her pleasure. All my story ideas seem to use that, too.
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An annoyance of mine: male characters in these things are generally INTENSELY limited. Either you have the strong man who likes to call you a slut, or the jeering, drooling rape gang. Spicing that up somehow would be a good start.
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any specific directions you would prefer suggestions in? Oh, here is another idea: another agent is sent along as a contact (visits her as a client) but then the mining colonies declare independence or something. The agent keeps bringing her encouragement but eventually she figures out they are lying. Not villanous, just keeping her spirits up while getting a good screw. Becoming overly dependent on that, maybe just still coming after she tells him not to. I see this as a weak secondary character.
Another twist could be him egged on to rape her while they are both undercover. That could be either a betrayal or secretly gentle.
Chicklet said:
I probably would, but I suspect there would not be many others
Actually, I was making light of a serious wish really. That 'female suicide bomber' is another example of comfy NC. infact both my tales here are too. It just seems a genre that only I am interested in, or atleast not enough to make a hard distinction. The other approach that is seldom used is a facination with her mind and her pleasure. All my story ideas seem to use that, too.
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An annoyance of mine: male characters in these things are generally INTENSELY limited. Either you have the strong man who likes to call you a slut, or the jeering, drooling rape gang. Spicing that up somehow would be a good start.
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any specific directions you would prefer suggestions in? Oh, here is another idea: another agent is sent along as a contact (visits her as a client) but then the mining colonies declare independence or something. The agent keeps bringing her encouragement but eventually she figures out they are lying. Not villanous, just keeping her spirits up while getting a good screw. Becoming overly dependent on that, maybe just still coming after she tells him not to. I see this as a weak secondary character.
Another twist could be him egged on to rape her while they are both undercover. That could be either a betrayal or secretly gentle.
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You guys are pricks!! Real slave trades are working right under our noses. Why do you need a fantasy of space aliens when Americans will do just fine? I guess reality bites huh?
Dr. Khan
(Dont bite me...cuz it hurts)
Dr. Khan
(Dont bite me...cuz it hurts)
Don't write a story for me. Its too much work and I might not like it for some silly reason that noone can guess.... Besides, your never going to get through all the story ideas youve shown interest in.
Any specific technology required for the tale you are writing?
Any specific technology required for the tale you are writing?
OH.. MY.. GOD! Your my sister!
Nah just kidding. I went and read your 'Pirates Bounty'. I enjoyed that. What is hard to explain is why I would not ask someone to write it. I guess it is that to me that exact fantasy would mean a different thing coming from a woman than a man. You might like my Q&A tale. Its a bit similar.
Nah just kidding. I went and read your 'Pirates Bounty'. I enjoyed that. What is hard to explain is why I would not ask someone to write it. I guess it is that to me that exact fantasy would mean a different thing coming from a woman than a man. You might like my Q&A tale. Its a bit similar.
infodump, ready or not.
If you use a spinning section to create effective gravity, most people would realise that your effective weight gets less as you approach the axis of rotation. What people might miss though, is that if you are at the axis where there is no weight and push off towards the 'floor', the experienced force on you towards the floor does not necessarily increase. Rather you would begin to feel a sideways breeze from the difference in your velocity from your fast-rotating environment's atmosphere. If that breese is enough to get you up to (rotational) speed with your surroundings then you would also fall faster. If the breeze is not powerful enough to bring you up to speed or nearly do so, then you would simply drift weightlessly towards the floor. Risk of injury comes from the fact that the floor is rushing sideways past you, like the ground compared to someone jumping from a moving train.
If you use a spinning section to create effective gravity, most people would realise that your effective weight gets less as you approach the axis of rotation. What people might miss though, is that if you are at the axis where there is no weight and push off towards the 'floor', the experienced force on you towards the floor does not necessarily increase. Rather you would begin to feel a sideways breeze from the difference in your velocity from your fast-rotating environment's atmosphere. If that breese is enough to get you up to (rotational) speed with your surroundings then you would also fall faster. If the breeze is not powerful enough to bring you up to speed or nearly do so, then you would simply drift weightlessly towards the floor. Risk of injury comes from the fact that the floor is rushing sideways past you, like the ground compared to someone jumping from a moving train.
I don't know if this is erotic or just wet, but what about using water spouts to keep someone helpless in the center of a room in zero gee. That could either be a dancer in the center of a spinning section buffeted from different directions to stop her drifting off center, or men with magnetic boots using fire hoses to knock a fugitive away from anything they can hold onto. It could also be a sport.
A sport could be just treating a person as a ball, or you could have fixed 'beams' of fast moving water criss-crossing a room and the trick is to catch them with your feet or hands (or some sort of surfboard?) just right so as to bounce yourself around the room without touching the side. If you get your torso in the way then you will almost certainly be given more speed than you can dump before hitting a wall. The 'ball' could be something quite heavy, eg an iron sphere that weighs 50 kg. It doesn't generally get up to much speed because the players don't have the leaverage to put much force into it. It just drifts around like a juggernaut towards one goal or the other.
pure flight of fancy there.
pure flight of fancy there.
Another reason for water spouts could be to redistribute free water in a large spinning station. If the water began to congregate, the whole thing could start rocking like an unbalanced washing machine. To avoid this, fountains at the centers of lakes along the 'floor' could shoot water jets across the hollow center of the spinning cylinder to continually balance it out.
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Chicklet,
I was wondering if you had anymore thoughts on my personal interest story? I've tried contacting ilovewriting and haven't had any luck. Maybe you could, I noticed the 2 of you have chatted about stories before. Thanks, hope you're still interested.
I was wondering if you had anymore thoughts on my personal interest story? I've tried contacting ilovewriting and haven't had any luck. Maybe you could, I noticed the 2 of you have chatted about stories before. Thanks, hope you're still interested.
Way back when this thread started with Chicklet, we had a great idea -- sci-fi with a prostitution ring. Along the same lines of Charm Brights books. We seem to gone of on a tangent.
Yes the point is opening it up to discussion but the original idea was a brainstorming sessions, we now seem to got away from this subject.
Lets get back to this idea, how we doing with a story. This is a great storyline, with different directions it could go in. We need to get back to the sex rather than the "theories of relativity." I'm sure most like lots of sex without the full descriptions of technology. Its not Star Trek, we want to know if we can save the planet, not the statistical significance of the coeffiecient, etc, etc.........
So Chicklet can we get back on track, thanks.
Yes the point is opening it up to discussion but the original idea was a brainstorming sessions, we now seem to got away from this subject.
Lets get back to this idea, how we doing with a story. This is a great storyline, with different directions it could go in. We need to get back to the sex rather than the "theories of relativity." I'm sure most like lots of sex without the full descriptions of technology. Its not Star Trek, we want to know if we can save the planet, not the statistical significance of the coeffiecient, etc, etc.........
So Chicklet can we get back on track, thanks.
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Thanks, but...
Thanks MickyD, but I think I have gathered a lot of info to use on my prostitution story. This thread is now a great brainstorming thread for folks interested in reading and writing sci-fi, and I love coming on here and seeing what people have thought up. Let's keep it going the way it is - any sci fi ideas you have, post here! Someone else might read them or write them!
thanks for helping, Micky, I really do appreciate the thought.
Peter, let's get the ideas flowing again!
Chicklet
Thanks MickyD, but I think I have gathered a lot of info to use on my prostitution story. This thread is now a great brainstorming thread for folks interested in reading and writing sci-fi, and I love coming on here and seeing what people have thought up. Let's keep it going the way it is - any sci fi ideas you have, post here! Someone else might read them or write them!
thanks for helping, Micky, I really do appreciate the thought.
Peter, let's get the ideas flowing again!
Chicklet
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Here's the basic idea for a story I'm planning, as soon as I can finish chapter 1 of the story I've already got started.
In the not too distant future computer games are totally immersive. You know the idea Matrix etc, stick on a headset and you're inside the game.
It was discovered by accident IE through deaths by natural causes, heart attacks etc, that if someone dies while hooked up to the games that the character they were playing remains inside the game with all the memories and personality of the person who died.
Since this discovery people have been opting to arrange to be hooked up to the game at the moment of death.
A wanted criminal, mass murderer, terrorist, comitted suicide just as the authorities closed in on his hideout and is loose inside the game environment.
The criminal is a skilled cyberterrorist and has managed to access the games controls from the inside. Earlier teams sent in were caught and the
bodies of these teams are still hooked up to the computer , but they can't retrieve the agents minds from the game.
An agent, FBI, CIA ? Gets sent in to track the criminal down. Possible sub plot his dead partner whose wife/husband had him/her hooked up to the game when they turned off the life support machine joins him.
Well that's the rough idea. Should I just use one environment or would it be better if I had "gates" between different games.
Any ideas welcome
In the not too distant future computer games are totally immersive. You know the idea Matrix etc, stick on a headset and you're inside the game.
It was discovered by accident IE through deaths by natural causes, heart attacks etc, that if someone dies while hooked up to the games that the character they were playing remains inside the game with all the memories and personality of the person who died.
Since this discovery people have been opting to arrange to be hooked up to the game at the moment of death.
A wanted criminal, mass murderer, terrorist, comitted suicide just as the authorities closed in on his hideout and is loose inside the game environment.
The criminal is a skilled cyberterrorist and has managed to access the games controls from the inside. Earlier teams sent in were caught and the
bodies of these teams are still hooked up to the computer , but they can't retrieve the agents minds from the game.
An agent, FBI, CIA ? Gets sent in to track the criminal down. Possible sub plot his dead partner whose wife/husband had him/her hooked up to the game when they turned off the life support machine joins him.
Well that's the rough idea. Should I just use one environment or would it be better if I had "gates" between different games.
Any ideas welcome
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Yes. One does the idea and scenario and outline (5% of final length); the other does the words and detailed characters.peterpan said:
Think of it as a factory: the design department do the design and manufacturing do the building. If it doesn't actually work, then manufacture refer it back to design with a succinct explanation of the problem.
The two difficulties are keeping design away from manufacture and stopping manufacture changing the design. In my "day job" writing technical literature (real not advertising) this separation is ensured by sign off. How you enforce it in a "hobby" environment is a
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)?PS Sorry about the delayed answer, I've been busy.
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Sci-fi
Hi there dose any one remember Logan’s run or Destruction man? (You know the Arni one with Sandra bullock) were they live in a sterile environment and procreation is a thing of the past this could lend to a good sci-fi sex slave trade in the outside world.
Love Lin
Hi there dose any one remember Logan’s run or Destruction man? (You know the Arni one with Sandra bullock) were they live in a sterile environment and procreation is a thing of the past this could lend to a good sci-fi sex slave trade in the outside world.
Love Lin
