Gabe619
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OOC: This is a closed thread for now, but I hope you enjoy.
Name: Derek Redman
Age: 18
Hair: Black, cut short
Height: 5'7"
Build: Slim, toned, swimmers body
Residence: Living with his parents and sibilings
Interests: Soccer, swimming, movies and sex (what? He's a teen!)
Family: Dad (Kevin Redman) 45 / Mum ( Heather Redman) 43 / Sister (Dani Redman) 21 / Brother (Ryan Redman) 19
Derek had just turned 18 and as he lay on his bed at home that Sunday his whole life lay before him. He was in his last year of school, was on the school soccer and swim team, was liked by just about everyone, a teachers favourite, had a beautiful girlfriend, Emma, and couldn't think of anything better right now than being him.
Well, lets be honest though, everyone has their secrets right? And even our golden boy here has a few dark ones he keeps hidden from his family and friends. Derek is a closet bi curious teen boy. Now in this day and age you'd think it wouldn't be such a big thing to admit to, but all Derek see's is the worst, and how people might turn against him, people who right now adore him. So he bottles it up and jerks off to gay porn in his room, while satisfying his more hetro tendancies with Emma.
Yet another, perhaps darker desire he keeps tied down, one that Emma is slowly realising as Derek lets things slip, is his desire to Dominate his partner. Control has always been a need for this young man. Being the Captain of his soccer team and the best swimmer in school has only fueled these needs to be in charge, to be the one to decide who does what and when. Up till now he has done well hiding these feelings from everyone and only Emma has felt them from the occasional spanking Derek gives her, which she actually quite enjoys secretly, and the way he behaves when they are alone.
This day however is about to change Derek Redman's life forever, and also many, many other peoples who have no idea what their futures now hold. As we look down on young Derek, relaxing on his bed, the sun coming through the window, his eyes closed, breathing gently, half asleep, half conscious, something starts to become obvious to us ... he is slowly vanishing.
Coming awake, Derek sighed and stretched, groaning slightly. His nap had helped him relax after the morning soccer practise. Sitting up and slipping from bed he moved over to the computer and reached out to turn it on, then stopped in stunned horror. Where was his arm and hand????? He looked down coming fully awake now and almost screamed when he realised he couldn't see any of his body at all. Racing to the bathroom he stood in front of the mirror and could see nothing reflected and yet .... he reached out and touched the cold surface of the mirror, feeling it. He leant in and breathed on it seeing it mist up. What the hell??
He tried to calm himself down as he stood there breathing hard. He felt fine, actually he felt great. He ran his hands over his body, everything seemed to be in one piece, just invisible, even his clothes. He pulled his tshirt off and threw it into the laundry, the second he let go it became visible again. Ok, interesting. But he didn't want to stay invisible for life, how could he live like this. Panic took him again and as his heartrate increased and his thoughts swirled he noticed his body slowly starting to come back, until finally he was back. He lent against the sink, sighing in relief. Maybe it had been a nightmare? Yeah, that must be it. And yet ... it had felt so real. What if ....
Derek held his hand up in front of his face and calmed his thoughts. Focusing on the hand, the skin, the arm. Breathing slower, imagining that his hand and arm were invisible again. Nothing happened. Scowling, he tried again. In his head he imagined that invisibilty slipping over him again, and slowly it happened. He grinned as the arm and hand vanished. He clenched his fist, yep, still there. He now imagined his entire body invisible again and he looked down and smiled as it happened right in front of him.
Fully invisible again he laughed. How did this happen to him? Did he really care? What a great power to have. Almost immediately ideas flooded his head as to what he could do now he could turn invisible at will. A wicked grin split his face. Then the door of the bathroom opened behind him.
Name: Derek Redman
Age: 18
Hair: Black, cut short
Height: 5'7"
Build: Slim, toned, swimmers body
Residence: Living with his parents and sibilings
Interests: Soccer, swimming, movies and sex (what? He's a teen!)
Family: Dad (Kevin Redman) 45 / Mum ( Heather Redman) 43 / Sister (Dani Redman) 21 / Brother (Ryan Redman) 19
Derek had just turned 18 and as he lay on his bed at home that Sunday his whole life lay before him. He was in his last year of school, was on the school soccer and swim team, was liked by just about everyone, a teachers favourite, had a beautiful girlfriend, Emma, and couldn't think of anything better right now than being him.
Well, lets be honest though, everyone has their secrets right? And even our golden boy here has a few dark ones he keeps hidden from his family and friends. Derek is a closet bi curious teen boy. Now in this day and age you'd think it wouldn't be such a big thing to admit to, but all Derek see's is the worst, and how people might turn against him, people who right now adore him. So he bottles it up and jerks off to gay porn in his room, while satisfying his more hetro tendancies with Emma.
Yet another, perhaps darker desire he keeps tied down, one that Emma is slowly realising as Derek lets things slip, is his desire to Dominate his partner. Control has always been a need for this young man. Being the Captain of his soccer team and the best swimmer in school has only fueled these needs to be in charge, to be the one to decide who does what and when. Up till now he has done well hiding these feelings from everyone and only Emma has felt them from the occasional spanking Derek gives her, which she actually quite enjoys secretly, and the way he behaves when they are alone.
This day however is about to change Derek Redman's life forever, and also many, many other peoples who have no idea what their futures now hold. As we look down on young Derek, relaxing on his bed, the sun coming through the window, his eyes closed, breathing gently, half asleep, half conscious, something starts to become obvious to us ... he is slowly vanishing.
Coming awake, Derek sighed and stretched, groaning slightly. His nap had helped him relax after the morning soccer practise. Sitting up and slipping from bed he moved over to the computer and reached out to turn it on, then stopped in stunned horror. Where was his arm and hand????? He looked down coming fully awake now and almost screamed when he realised he couldn't see any of his body at all. Racing to the bathroom he stood in front of the mirror and could see nothing reflected and yet .... he reached out and touched the cold surface of the mirror, feeling it. He leant in and breathed on it seeing it mist up. What the hell??
He tried to calm himself down as he stood there breathing hard. He felt fine, actually he felt great. He ran his hands over his body, everything seemed to be in one piece, just invisible, even his clothes. He pulled his tshirt off and threw it into the laundry, the second he let go it became visible again. Ok, interesting. But he didn't want to stay invisible for life, how could he live like this. Panic took him again and as his heartrate increased and his thoughts swirled he noticed his body slowly starting to come back, until finally he was back. He lent against the sink, sighing in relief. Maybe it had been a nightmare? Yeah, that must be it. And yet ... it had felt so real. What if ....
Derek held his hand up in front of his face and calmed his thoughts. Focusing on the hand, the skin, the arm. Breathing slower, imagining that his hand and arm were invisible again. Nothing happened. Scowling, he tried again. In his head he imagined that invisibilty slipping over him again, and slowly it happened. He grinned as the arm and hand vanished. He clenched his fist, yep, still there. He now imagined his entire body invisible again and he looked down and smiled as it happened right in front of him.
Fully invisible again he laughed. How did this happen to him? Did he really care? What a great power to have. Almost immediately ideas flooded his head as to what he could do now he could turn invisible at will. A wicked grin split his face. Then the door of the bathroom opened behind him.
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